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发表于 2012-7-13 10:05:44 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

听新东方讲作文千万不要用模版，但是句型可以记。这样是不是在说可以用一些已有的句子改装组合然后创造自己的模版？
可是我在网页上看到
“先来看两段例子!第一段是不好的例子，第二段是好的例子。
　　Nowadays, thanks to the development of Internet, we are exposed to a vast ocean of information. Some argue that so much information brings a great benefit to our life and study. But for me, the experience with surfing Internet leads me to believe that accessing much information cause more problems than it solves.
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　　Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.
　　作为阅文无数的老师，当看到第一篇文章的时候，我已经没有了当初得的兴奋，因为这样的文章实在是太常见了!首先Nowadays这个单词是被无数老师推崇的“高级”单词-_-!!!我一直无法理解，为什么有的单词会更高级。然后thanks to节宾语，天呐!多么明显的模板!当我往下看的时候，我只能无意识的检查是否有语法错误，没有语法错误的话，我也就只能给个一般的分数就好了。”
我觉得第一段就已经很完美了，自己编能那样就不错了。可是人家在讲这个一看就是模版。所以现在及迷茫又无助。恳请高手相助！真的多谢！