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本帖最后由 xueyicathy 于 2013-10-22 15:14 编辑

HW 10.9
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1884pZ

10.10
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1l8b7o
Feel amazed I can still do it after a couple of drinks. yea, for sure, I'm a little bit drunk now...\

10.11
http://pan.baidu.com/s/11hkYv

10.12
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1byKJX
To be continued

10.13
Q1 & Q2: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1Fu3An

Q3. singing competition

Q4 relict behaviors

Q5. homework

Q6. Strategy

Q3-Q6 are my old answers. I might redo them later this week, after my midterm.

10.14
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qsg9u
The lecture of task6 is not complete, based on my version of TPO.

10.15 T1,T2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/17TdVu

10.16 T1,T2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1zLRm5

10.17 T1 T2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1oW0Qp

10.18
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1suyzu

10.19
http://pan.baidu.com/s/17n44k

10.20
http://pan.baidu.com/s/17TFSU

10.21
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1wy5H2

10.22
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1vI6En

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I figure out your style is a little bit different from your former one, which is easier to understand. I really admire your pace of the sentence and the accuracy of every word.

T1
The example is really impressive and useful. Because of you speed, I can understand your meaning clearly. I think it is a good example for me.

T2
Excellent. But I don't know the word 'the most of the time, the class are impromatic?' Could you explain that for me？ thanks

T3
I don't know whether it is right or not, but I will say you should compete for the high score. But limited to your speed in this task, you may miss some practice examples in the conversation. If some details can be included, it must be more brilient.

T4
more and more, pronunciation.
maybe just a 'this reflect the irrational works' is not enough. Try to add 'from this example, we can know how irrational works to make xxxx' Personal opinion, welcome to talk with me.

T5
'during 15 in it?' sorry for my poor listening.The second sentence. It can be more fluent.

T6
without being hurt by the diry. not hurted.

Could you tell me how many sore you get in the first toefl test in oral parten? I want to judge myself because I am close to the former you.

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只有梦想发表于 2013-10-10 09:18
I figure out your style is a little bit different from your former one, which is easier to understan ...

Q2 It should be 'informative'
Q5. it's 'within 15 mins'.

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发表于 2013-10-11 23:37:35 |只看该作者

10.10
your pronunciation is very impressive.
t1 I suggest you speak faster. As for your content, good, but I am not sure that natural connection is used properly.
t2your way of speaking is really impressive...:)
t3You have captured all the detials in the listening. "also"have been mispronounced.
t4There are some piece in your response that is irrevelant to the lecture such as patience
t5Good, but like other t3 and t4, you ahve not finished your response
t6rural and village, well I think the change is dscribed as changing for village itself, and tural place has not been mentioned.

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-11 23:37
10.10
your pronunciation is very impressive.
t1 I suggest you speak faster. As for your content, ...

Thx. I have some weird accent mixing Chinese and southern american accents.

For the T6, you can listen again. I'm pretty sure the lecture says the people from rural area moving to the village. The village became bigger and bigger and developed into the city finally.

Speaking of the Economics textbook, I suggest you start from the basic ones considering you may not have enough background in math. The advanced level is mostly about math.

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xueyicathy 发表于 2013-10-12 14:06
Thx. I have some weird accent mixing Chinese and southern american accents.

For the T6, you ca ...

Sorry, after relistening the task six, I think you are right. As I had not included that in my response, I think I should redo it.
Thx for your suggestion! I am now studying mathematical analysis open for math major along with several other math courses, I think after one-year training, I could be prepared mathematically.

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发表于 2013-10-13 13:30:20 |只看该作者

I am glad we are partners today!
It seems you have completed only two tasks on Oct.12th, it is fine
when it comes to your first task, on career goal, specifically as university professor in your response and you give two reasons supporting it, I think you pronounced "could" rather strange, with [u:]mixed with [ju:]. other things are good. And your second task 2 on night person, this one is perfect. You cannot be early birds, but you can be night person.

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lhm77499 发表于 2013-10-13 13:30
I am glad we are partners today!
It seems you have completed only two tasks on Oct.12th, it is fine ...

I didn't do the else because I did TPO19 before.
Q3. rec plan

Q4 social learning

Q5. schedule conflict

Q6 adaptations

These are old answers. I might redo them if I get time. I have a midterm exam this Wed, so a little bit busy. And this weekend is my fall break....

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发表于 2013-10-18 08:53:37 |只看该作者

10.16 号的录音怎么删了呢亲

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发表于 2013-10-18 09:07:58 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 xueyicathy 于 2013-10-18 09:11 编辑

nimaoerzxy 发表于 2013-10-18 08:53
10.16 号的录音怎么删了呢亲

不知道怎么回事，我试了几个不同的链接，都点不进去。我刚重新上传了

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发表于 2013-10-18 16:25:20 |只看该作者

T1 no one is always XXX没听清楚其他部分都讲得不错唯一要注意的地方是有些单字的重音发的好像怪怪的

T2 This is a pathetic more(?) commitment and more(?) efficient
LZ讲得都不错但总觉得缺乏例子来论证再补上就没什么太大问题了

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发表于 2013-10-18 22:34:54 |只看该作者

本帖最后由失落的谁于 2013-10-18 22:36 编辑

17 1/2

1. 发音上 pathetic第一个音节没有卷舌因为没有r
另外on it建议LZ进行连读哈
2. 语法和表达We will be more commitment and more efficient... 这里的commitment用法不对需要一个形容词如 committed
It is a pathetic 这里没有a哈
learn the knowledge right这个表达我觉得不太好建议调整成get the right knowledge
3. 内容上我觉得没什么问题如果逻辑上更严密些更好了 LZ and和so使用的有点儿多可以找些其他的词来替换下

今天实在时间有限就先听了1/2题明天你3~6上传了我们再往你听哈

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