[优秀习作] issue47 是否 place enough emphasis问题 [复制链接]

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发表于 2004-8-21 01:24:41 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect-that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills.[issue47]
其实写写改改半天仍然觉得这篇写的不太好。有点实证代替规范啦。本文全部赞成原题。认为enough了。

TS:很难决定是否enough因为标准不同。基于满足日常使用这个标准，我认为对于XXXX的强调已经enough。
废段。。。跳过
B1艺术领域，从理解艺术的标准来说我们可以正常理解-->enough cognitive skill
B2科学领域people now possess enough cognitive skills enabling them to understand the current artifacts
B3reasoning is also emphasized enough in the light of the fact that considerate and impartial judgment in society is already built which is a sure outcome of enough reasoning ability.

从结果推原因是有点问题（还有别的论证办法吗？），但是应该一直扣住了论证enough问题吧？？？
另：这篇文章是事实型，因此似乎不必涉及其他需要社会强调的内容，只用说intellect这方面。
It is hard to determine whether the emphasis placed on intellect—reasoning and cognitive skills is enough due to different criterion about the issue. However, in order to cater to the everyday life, the emphasis placed on reasoning and cognitive skills is enough for average citizens.

Our society has already place enough emphasis on the cognitive skills and reasoning in that the society’s formal education fulfills its aim of teaching us the basic principles in many fields such as art and science, which secures adequate cognitive skills for our everyday use.

In the domain of art, the basic principles of different art schools in terms of art techniques are imparted to the average citizens. We are happy and reassured to find that civilized men and women are capable of understanding art works of its color use, canvas layout other techniques and finally the inner emotion the artist conveys via their works. Many of us can figure out the glimmering color in <sunrise> and the outrage of war in the painting of <pigeon>. Therefore, in terms of appreciating art, our cognitive skills are enough for us to cogitate art works.

Besides, in the field of science, people now possess enough cognitive skills enabling them to understand the current artifacts—implements and buildings though they may be not informed about them directly. Universities have taught us about the marrow of natural science is to deduce the unknown from the known and about the basic principles in different fields. For example, equipped with physics’ basic analytic method of force and balance, we can comprehend and evaluate the robust structure of edifice, the use of suspension cable used in bridge and the delicate equilibrium of the crane. In view of this, we can conclude that cognitive is enough for us to make everyday comprehension towards modern life.

On the other hand, reasoning is also emphasized enough in the light of the fact that considerate and impartial judgment in society is already built which is a sure outcome of enough reasoning ability. One who can reason will doubt why we are created inherently different as asserted by ancient mythology and other sources. Nazi alleged that Germany is genetically better than Jewish and other races. However, after reasoning about the evolution of mankind and consulting the genetics, we can deduce that all races are different due to different environment factors affecting us, while no priority and disparity is founded. Our sufficient reasoning ability precludes rumor and heresy deviating us from the rational.

In a word, the society has put enough emphasis on reasoning and cognitive skills, because we have already seen the fruitful outcome of such emphasis is enough for the everyday use.

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