开作文贴啦,很久没有写托福作文了,前阵子刚考完gre,有拿gre的手感来写托福的感觉,开始几篇可能会有很多问题,大家请不要手软,明确地直白地指出!在此先十分感谢大家的点评~
10.28
Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. What is your view?
10.29
TPO24 综合写作
11.7
tpo22 综合
真的好久没好好练综合写作了,都不太会写了,而且每一段要不要写阅读的内容我自己也拿不准,网上也找不到什么范文,各式各样的写作课程讲的也五花八门。肯定有很多问题,请大家看到就指出来~ 也欢迎大家和我讨论。
11.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for families to regularly eat their meals together.
"After the points discussed above, we can easily figure out that professors should arrange more time educating students than doing researches."
arrange 通常不會在後面加時間
而且主要是說"安排..."
這邊語意有點奇怪,你應該不是想表達安排更多時間在教育學生上吧?應該是說會花更多時間在教育學生上
所以我改成spend
不過你可以再問問看其他人,這是我的見解XDD