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发表于 2016-1-8 21:21:03 来自小程序 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

本帖最后由 tesolchina 于 2016-1-21 14:20 编辑

请在回帖中指出以下句子中的错误的类型并尝试修改。请不要为了看隐藏内容而做无意义的回复，谢谢。

句子 1 However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument.

句子 2 Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town.

游客，如果您要查看本帖隐藏内容请回复

回帖格式：（回帖时请保留<error_type></error_type> <correction.s1></correction>等机读代码）

<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>

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<error_type>一个句子有两个谓语</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city which are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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<error_type>名词动词使用错误</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted,it might compromises the cogency of this argument.</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries, in big city these are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:21:57 |只看该作者

<error_type>双谓语</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted,which might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors,which are much more in big city than that in small town, may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:22:26 |只看该作者

<error_type>句式杂糅</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big cities which are much more than those in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:22:28 |只看该作者

<error_type> 好几句合在一起了</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions. If unwarranted, the assumptions might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors that may cause this higher proportion, such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city, all of which are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:22:35 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions that, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>However, there are a lot more factors that may cause this higher proportion of jobs, chances and salaries in big city than that in small town.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:23:05 |只看该作者

句子 1 .

句子 2

<error_type>重复表述，指代不明确？</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, there are several implicit assumptions that, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are much more factors which may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city than that in small town.</correction>

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本帖最后由 kasy 于 2016-1-20 23:23 编辑

<error_type></error_type>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:23:35 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, after rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are lot of other factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town.
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发表于 2016-1-20 20:23:54 |只看该作者

<error_type>多重谓语</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, which might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Nevertheless, there are a lot more factors that may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city much more than that in small town.</correction>

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<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions. If the assumptions are unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot of factors may cause this higher proportion of jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, in rendering this argument, there are several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument. </correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are a lot more factors may cause this higher proportion such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town.</correction>

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<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型（如果不知道就填不知道）</error_type>
<correction.s1>However, several implicit assumptions, if unwarranted, might compromise the cogency of this argument.
</correction>
<correction.s2>Whereas, there are much more factors may such as jobs, chances and salaries in big city are much more than that in small town, cause this higher proportion .</correction>

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