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发表于 2010-11-15 16:36:55 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

本帖最后由 Guessy 于 2010-11-16 05:24 编辑

经典的留学文书材料个人感觉有些老了里面的PS和RL的套路也比较老了参考价值有限不过别的方面的材料还是很有用的

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1. 联系出国所需要的文件
2. 联系出国时间表
3. 最初的联系信
4. 个人陈述
5. 推荐信
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发表于 2010-11-15 16:39:10 |只看该作者

套磁信还是很经典的

Chaoyang District
Beijing, 100021
P.R. China
Dec 8, 1996

Dear Professor Aki:

I am a master degree holder applying to your department for a Doctoral Degree program beginning in fall, 1994. I have already mailed application documents to Queen's University.

My major is computer theory with focus on algorithms and cryptography. I have known you since I took part in a seminar discussing your book Design and Analysis of Parallel Algorithms, which greatly enhances my interest in parallel computation. I have also read some papers of yours concerning computer security, for example, the View for Multilevel Database Security collaborated with Denning et al. My master thesis is on multilevel database security. In the thesis I combined database security with cryptography, and got some results on cryptographic key management.

I am very interested in the areas of parallel algorithms and data security, and longing to continue my study in these areas. Since you are a well known specialist in these areas, I believe that it will be very helpful to my academic career if I have the chance to continue my research work under your advice.

Enclosed are some materials outlining my previous education and academic objectives. You may have more knowledge about me through these materials.

I sincerely hope that you can consider my request and accept me as one of your students.

Sincerely yours.

投票：加拿大女研究生择校滑铁卢eceVS渥太华cs

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发表于 2010-11-15 16:42:09 |只看该作者

和申请材料一起寄出的Cover Letter

Annie Wang
P.O. Box 8740
Beijing 100084
P.R. CHINA
October 22, 2001

Dear Sir / Madam:

I am applying for acceptance and financial aid in a bid to pursue a Master’s Degree in Materials Science and Engineering at your university. My intended date of enrollment is the beginning of September 2002.

Enclosed hereinwith are: (1) a completed application form; (2) the application fee by way of an international money order; (3) a copy of my resume, and (4) my personal statement.

The Beijing University, my alma mater, will send official transcripts of my undergraduate academic record to you soon. Meanwhile, I have arranged for you to receive three letters of recommendation directly from their authors, two my former professors and the other my current employer.

I trust that you have received my official TOEFL and GRE scores from the ETS. In any case, photocopies of my TOEFL and GRE score reports are included in this package for your reference.

I will be looking forward to hearing of your decision regarding my application. If you need any other information or material, please let me know promptly.

Sincerely yours

Annie Wang

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发表于 2010-11-15 16:42:58 |只看该作者

寄申请材料以前，询问被录取机会的信件：

Wen Luqu
P. O. Box 8740
Beijing 100080
People's Republic of China

Dear Professor Speegle:

Thank you for forwarding to the application and recommendation forms on July 1999. I did not immediately respond at the time because I was waiting for my GRE and TOEFL scores. Since I have those scores now, I wish to get some preliminary indication from you about my chance of pursuing graduate studies at your university.

A major in Database Design and Computation Theory, I am deeply interested in your graduate program, which seems to offer exactly the kind of advanced training that I need to further my career. My TOEFL score, obtained March 1999, is 653 (61/68/67), and my GRE General score, obtained in December 1998, is also relatively high at 2220 (V 720 97%; IQ 790 96%; A 710 90%). The academic record of my undergraduate studies is very good. Except for two peripheral courses, I was a straight A student throughout the four undergraduate years. My performance was particularly strong in mathematics. Since graduation, I have been engaged in research and development at a leading Chinese research institution.

While this record looks impressive, I need to know whether it is good enough to win me not only acceptance into your Master' s program but also full financial assistance for my studies. Coming from an impoverished family in a Third World country, I cannot possibly pay up front for graduate studies with either my own or my family's savings. In fact, the application fee itself can be quite some encumbrance on me. My enrollment, if I get accepted, will therefore hinge on the availability of sufficient assistance to cover both my tuition and other expenses.

Given the information here, could you give me a preliminary assessment of my qualifications and the chance I stand in winning an offer of both acceptance and full financial assistance? Do you think it is advisable for me to apply? With the deadline looming, an early answer from you will be greatly appreciated. You can either reply to me by regular mail or send an E-mail message to jzeg@ibm320h.phy.pku.edu.cn. If your answer is positive, I will surely compete for admission into your program.

Yours sincerely

Wen Lu

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发表于 2010-11-15 16:44:40 |只看该作者

学校录取但不给奖学金，学员给校方的答复

Dear Professor Killer:

Thanks for your E-mail. I understand that you have to process a lot of applications, and I have no problem with any delay you may have in reaching your decisions.

Your offer of acceptance is really exciting news to me. But I am troubled that no financial assistance has been made available to me. As I have indicated before, my enrollment will probably depend on some form of assistance from the university, as neither my family nor I myself have the savings to cover such huge expenses.

As some of the applicants will probably decline the offers you have made them, I still hold out the hope that some funding may still be possible. Please let me know whether such hope is realistic at all, and tell me about my chance in future applications. Thank you.

Yours sincerely

Hao xin

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发表于 2010-11-15 16:46:24 |只看该作者

斯坦福大学的录取及奖学金通知书

STANFORD UNIVERSITY
STANFORD, CALIFORNIA 94305-5080

2/9/98
Mr. Wang Zhang
Rm. 111 Bldg. 84
Peking Univ.
Beijing. China 100871

Dear Mr Wang:
It is my pleasure to inform you, on behalf of the chemistry department, of your admission to the Ph. D. program at Stanford University beginning September, 1998. The size and strength of our applicant pool is such that only the strongest candidates can be admitted, and our offer of admission to you reflects our great confidence in your potential as a scientist. The quality of the faculty and graduate students, combined with an outstanding scientific atmosphere, makes the Stanford Chemistry Department a unique place to pursue graduate study. We hope that you will join the department in September.
The Stanford Chemistry Department is committed to continuing financial support of all graduate students in the department. Students in good standing will receive full tuition plus stipend in the form of Teaching and Research Assistantships for the duration of their graduate studies towards the Ph.D.degree. The University has not yet set the stipends for the 1998-1999 academic year. However, last year the stipend from Teaching and Research assistantships was $17, 300, and we expect a modest increase for the 1998-1999 academic year.
Successful Stanford applicants ordinarily have a number of offers from which they must choose. In reaching a decision, you may find it helpful to communicate directly with Stanford faculty members or graduate students whose interests parallel your own. Please feel free to call our student services officers, Lawrence Ma and Mannie Baig at (650) 723-4867, if you need assistance in obtaining names or phone numbers of people to talk to. To foster personal interactions with our faculty and students, we would like to invite you to come out to Stanford for a visit on Friday, March 13. You will hear from Lawrence and Mannie shortly concerning the details and the arrangements for your visit.
The high quality of our students is a distinguishing feature of our program. To facilitate planning and arrangement, we would like to hear your response to this offer as soon as you have made a decision, but in any case, no later than the formal deadline of April 15, 1998.

Sincerely yours,

Robert M .Waymouth
Professor of Chemistry
Chair, Graduate Admissions Committee

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发表于 2010-11-15 16:46:49 |只看该作者

拒绝学校提供录取及奖学金，并推荐别人的信

March 29, 1996

Professor Mashe Y.Vardi
Department of Computer Science
Brown School of Engineering
Rice University
P.O.Box 1892
Houston, Texas 77251
U.S.A.

Dear Professor Vardi:

Thank you for your letter of February 28, 1997, in which you grant admission and financial aid to me. I am sorry to inform you that I must decline your gracious offer because, before receiving your letter, I had accepted a similar offer of admission and financial aid from another institution.

For this position, I can recommend Miss. Yang Hongxia who has applied to your department, In terms of scholastic capacity and work ability, she is also a strong applicant. She, however, has not received notification of admission or financial aid. I believe she will be delighted to accept your offer.

Please accept my deep appreciation for your very kind assistance to my application.

Sincerely yours,

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发表于 2010-11-15 16:48:03 |只看该作者

申请材料寄出一个月后，写给教授的信件：

Dear Professor Miller:

I have submitted to your department a full application package, all completed as required, for your consideration. It is my strong hope to start my Master's training from the fall semester of 2000.

Prof. Fang Yu and Prof. Yang Dongqing, both graduates from your university, told me to get in touch with you, saying that your area of expertise coincides with my area of interest, namely, parallel Processing. A new but determined student of parallel processing and compiler construction, I shall feel greatly privileged if I get to study under your seasoned guidance.

Although I can not say I know a whole lot about parallel processing at this point, I have made my plan to acquire a solid grounding in it. My interest in this area was kindled when I was reading Computer and Scientific American. The power of parallel computers and the ingenuity inherent in parallel algorithms, as-described in such literature, are really fascinating to me. Von Numman's Architecture is particularly challenging. Next semester, the last of my undergraduate years, I plan to sit in a seminar offered to the graduate students on the subject so that I can be formally inducted. As you can see from my resume, personal statement and other materials, my background is strong in computer science, which I am sure has set the stage for me to pursue graduate training in parallel processing.

As I do not have any savings or other funds to finance my graduate education, my enrollment will ultimately depend on whether I can obtain adequate financial assistance in the form of an assistantship, a scholarship or both. Given this, whatever advice or suggestions you may have regarding my application will be greatly appreciated. If you have any general ideas about my plan to undertake advanced studies abroad, I would also very much like to hear them.

I take your program as my first choice for a graduate education abroad. An early reply from you is therefore very important to me. I look forward to joining you next year.

Yours sincerely

Yi Ge

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发表于 2010-11-15 16:55:36 |只看该作者

询问申请材料是否寄达的确认信：

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am an applicant of your Ph.D. program in AAA starting from Fall, 2005. I have mailed out my application on Nov.26 directly to you. Up to now however, I have not received from you any feedback yet. I understand that you do not provide an acknowledgement for applications.

Nevertheless, I have heard here many tragic stories about lost application packages: many students said that their application packages arrived in US with only an empty envelope, nothing left. As XXX University is the best university I wish to join, I am very afraid that my application experiences the same nightmare. So I wonder whether you can spend some time to check the current status of my application. Thank you very much.

My information:
Last Name: Yu First Name: Minhong
Date of Birth: Jan. 1, 2005

Looking forward to receive your kind reply,
Best wishes,

Yours sincerely,