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In any academic area or professional field, it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information.

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I strongly agree with the speaker's contention for two reasons: (1) To recognize limit is actually the beginning of exploration into new fact. (2) It is just the alternation of the recognization about limit and further exploration constitute for the process of human advancement. However, I believe the infinite potential of human can understand the whole world and give us a whole picture in the end.

My first reason for agreement can be proven by a cursory examination of the most important discoveries in academic history. Appreciation of limit serve to intrigue human's curious nature, and encourage our further exploration. In fact only the unsatisfaction with what we have known bred the breakthrough in academic field. Consider the establishment of Relative Theory, whose discovery can be attribute the limit of classic physics in explaining micro-world. And the rationale also applies to social science. The establishment of contemporary macroeconomics, as we know, is the feat of Keynes, who definitely comes to recognize the limit of classic economics in the face of The Depression. Both of the examples inform us that it is likely impossible for any great breakthrough in academic field without the understanding of earlier knowledge's limit.

Secondly, a bird view of the history can lend strong support to my second reason. For the process of human understanding the world is actually an ever-continuing one. The advancement of human always manifests itself in an alternation between appreciation of limit and exploration into the unknown. Let us back to the examples mentioned above. Neither the establishment of Relative Theory nor Macroeconomics became the end of our understanding of physic or human world. They are, instead, perfected by more accurate and sophisticated theories such as Light-wave Duality or Game Theory. The improvement, in fact is the process of human development itself, and the interaction between the limit and exploration empower our society always to look forward.

Recognizing the limit appears always on our understanding of the world, I would like to note that the seemingly unending limit also suggest an unending advancement. The potential of human can finally come to a complete picture of our world. The boundary of the known and the unknown can become vague due to the effort of human exploration and understanding of natural disciples, which shape the whole physic and human world.

In final analysis, I concede that it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information, as demonstrated in the field of physics and economics. As the beginning of new exploration and indispensable part of human development, limit promise us a better understanding of the world around us. However, I believe the infinite potential of human can blur the limit of recognizing in the end.

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In any academic area or professional field, it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information.

正文 463 words

I strongly agree with the speaker's contention for two reasons: (1) To recognize limit is actually the beginning of exploration into new fact. (2) It is just the alternation of the recognization about limit and further exploration constitute for the process of human advancement. However, I believe the infinite potential of human can understand the whole world and give us a whole picture in the end.

My first reason for agreement can be proven by a cursory examination of the most important discoveries in academic history. Appreciation of limit serve to intrigue human's curious nature, and encourage our further exploration. In fact only the unsatisfaction with what we have known bred the breakthrough in academic field. （Consider the establishment of Relative Theory, whose discovery can be attribute the limit of classic physics in explaining micro-world. And the rationale also applies to social science. The establishment of contemporary macroeconomics, as we know, is the feat of Keynes, who definitely comes to recognize the limit of classic economics in the face of The Depression.例子不错）（Both of the examples inform us that it is likely impossible for any great breakthrough in academic field without the understanding of earlier knowledge's limit.稍微再改的委婉一点）（这段两个例子不错，很到位的）

Secondly, a （bird view of the history 可以这样写吗？）can lend strong support to my second reason. For the process of human understanding the world is actually an ever-continuing one. The advancement of human always manifests itself in an alternation between appreciation of limit and exploration into the unknown. Let us back to the examples mentioned above. Neither the establishment of Relative Theory nor Macroeconomics became the end of our understanding of physic or human world. They are, instead, perfected by more accurate and sophisticated theories such as Light-wave Duality or Game Theory. The improvement, in fact is the process of human development itself, and the interaction between the limit and exploration empower our society always to look forward.（这段内容没有很理解，感觉还是和body1一样的，没有新的东西）

Recognizing the limit appears always on our understanding of the world, I would like to note that the seemingly unending limit also suggest an unending advancement. The potential of human can finally come to a complete picture of our world. The boundary of the known and the unknown can become vague due to the effort of human exploration and understanding of natural disciples, which shape the whole physic and human world.（这段是发散，写得不错）

In final analysis, I concede that it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information, as demonstrated in the field of physics and economics. As the beginning of new exploration and indispensable part of human development, limit promise us a better understanding of the world around us. However, I believe the infinite potential of human can blur the limit of recognizing in the end.
（总体来说还不错，就是body2感觉还是在body1的层面上饶，没有新的观点，还有我建议再写一点understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information，否则等于把题目的另一半抛掉了，加油~~~真不好意思，拍晚了，请谅解）

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