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发表于 2007-9-20 21:17:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

For long times, there is a spirited discussion as whether adult relatives should make important decisions for their older teenage children. Some people assert that parents should not make decisions for their children since it will definitely block the development of teenagers' ability. Others, whereas are supposed that it is necessary for parents to assume the responsibilities of deciding all things for their children. As far as I am concerned, I think adults should make important decision for their children.

Admittedly, in order to cultivate the children's abilities of independence, parents should give their children some opportunities to make some decision about their own such as whether they will hike this weekend, where they want to spend their summer holiday, in what style they want to dress in and so on. Making their own choice can build teenagers confidences, letting them conceive that they are growing up, which will definitely makes them feel good. Although they may make mistakes in making those kinds of decisions, that does not matter, since those errors are not able to hurt the teenager, instead, they can learn lessons from those incorrect choices so that they would make mature decisions of their own in the future.

But, some important decisions, on the other hand, should be made by the adult relatives in that adults are more sophisticated than their children and once the decision are made in an incorrect way, which will entails profound bad influence on the teenagers' whole lives. With their experiences and knowledge, parents can prevent their teenager from making costly mistakes. For example, nowadays, more and more eighteen years old students want to give up the opportunities to go on their further studies in universities, doggedly pursuing their dream to become super actors or a rebel rockers like their idols. But the problem is that not all people have the intellects and the potentials to become famous singers, surely most of their dreams are not reality. Besides, a large amount of teenagers engage in things that they find enjoyable. They do not understand things that are necessary not always full of fun. So choosing not to go to the colleges is totally wrong, if their parents does not make right decisions for their children, it can result in a bad influence on their lives, for example, can not finding a appropriate jobs may due to the consequence that absence from college.

In summary, I would claim that parents should make important decisions for their teenage children since teenagers often lack of the experience and knowledge to make sound decisions. If not so, parents may deteriorate their children's future. But for some insignificant things, letting them decide themselves can be helpful to build their confidence.

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发表于 2007-9-21 23:35:05 |只看该作者

For long times, there is a spirited discussion as whether adult relatives should make important decisions for their older teenage children. Some people assert that parents should not make decisions for their children since it will definitely block the development of teenagers' ability. Others, whereas are supposed that it is necessary for parents to assume the responsibilities of deciding all things for their children. As far as I am concerned, I think adults should make important decision for their children.(嗯,应该是看到什么新的参考书了)

Admittedly, in order to cultivate the children's abilities of independence, parents should give their children some opportunities to make some decision about their own such as whether they will hike this weekend, where they want to spend their summer holiday, in what style they want to dress in and so on. Making their own choice can(can用的有些生硬,可能是受了中文"能"的影响,而且文中用的也比较多,建议could,或者根本不用) build teenagers confidences, letting them conceive that they are growing up, which will definitely makes them feel good. Although they may make mistakes in making those kinds of decisions, that does not matter, since those errors are not able to hurt the teenager, instead, they can learn lessons from those incorrect choices so that they would make mature decisions of their own in the future.

But, some important decisions, on the other hand, should be made by the adult relatives in that adults are more sophisticated than their children and once the decision are made in an incorrect way, which will entails profound bad influence on the teenagers' whole lives. With their experiences and knowledge, parents can prevent their teenager from making costly mistakes. For example, nowadays, more and more eighteen years old students want to give up the opportunities to go on their further studies in universities, doggedly pursuing their dream to become super actors or a rebel rockers like their idols. But the problem is that not all people have the intellects and the potentials to become famous singers, surely most of their dreams are not reality(应该说cannot become true,dream本身还是reality的). Besides, a large amount of teenagers engage in things that they find enjoyable. They do not understand things that are necessary not always full of fun. So choosing not to go to the colleges is totally(这个程度副词有点绝对) wrong, (and)if their parents does not make right decisions for their children, it can(把can改成would largely) result in a bad influence on their lives, for example, can not finding a appropriate jobs may due to the consequence that absence from college(这个分句有点别扭). (建议把这段拆成两段,显得层次感一些,而且这样容易给rater只有一段(所以一个理由)支持你的论点)

In summary, I would claim that parents should make important decisions for their teenage children since teenagers often lack of the experience and knowledge to make sound decisions. If not so, parents may deteriorate their children's future. But for some insignificant(不知道恰不恰当) things, letting them decide themselves can be helpful to build their confidence.