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发表于 2007-8-1 16:12:28 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

TOPIC: ISSUE154 - "Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."
WORDS: 405       TIME: 00:41:09       DATE: 2007-8-1 14:35:45

   I totally agree with the arguer's conclusion. Local schools, which constitute a pivotal part of education, require involvement of both parents and communities.
There are three reasons to support that: Firstly, the education is too important, a group of professional educators have not capacity to accomplish that. Secondly, parents have played a pivotal role in the education. Thirdly, communities are indispensable role in the education.
      In the first, a group of professional educators have not capacity to accomplish the education work. Actually the professional educators just take the responsibility to finish the knowledge and information's development. They only teach student learn what you can and use all you learn, or what to learn and how to learn. They focus their attention in how to teach the student curriculums just like: mathematics, English, physical, music and foreign language. Professional educators’s fundamental function is improving student's knowledge level, acquire their study skill, and enlarge their vision. However, education are not only knowledge and information to improve, there is any other thing to learn. For example, communicate skill, social relationship and other things in the daily life. Therefore parents play a pivotal role in the education.

   Parents are the significant teacher in one's life. When we are a child, the parent told us how to say the first word, just like "mama" and “papa”. From the infant to the child, parents teach us how to ride and how to run. When we became an adolescent parent teach us how to talk with the beautiful girl .When we became an adolescent, the parent teach us how to work effectively and how to manage the marriage. The parent like a example of our daily life, when we are a child we   simulate some of the personality and character form our parents more or less. A lot of famous and excellent’s growing up in a good situation which their parents are eliciting in the social life. Parent should involve in the local schools to component with the teacher.

   The community is also very important in our social life's education. The environment determines one's development. If the community can take a better situation to the student, they will be better. If a child often lives with a writer, then he or she will be a writer. If a child grow up with a solider, then he or she will be a solider; if a child grow up will a thief, then he or she will be a thief. Only the community can change anything in one's situation.

      In sum, not only professional educators but also both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools, because of education is too important.

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发表于 2007-8-3 07:00:38 |只看该作者

  I totally agree with the arguer's conclusion. Local schools, which constitute a pivotal part of education(去掉which constitute), require involvement of both parents and communities.
There are three reasons to support that: Firstly, the education is too important, a group of professional educators have not capacity to accomplish that (to cover all the aspects perfectly). Secondly, parents have played a pivotal role in the education. Thirdly, communities are indispensable role(role不要了) in the（children’s） education.

In the first(first，不要in the), a group of professional educators have not(does not have)  (the) capacity to accomplish the education work.(考虑换个说法) Actually the professional educators just take the responsibility to finish the knowledge and information's development（不太明白这个地方）. They only teach student (to) learn what you can （？）and use all （that）you learn, or what to learn and how to learn (it). They focus their attention in(on) how to teach the student（这个how teach the student是不是可以不要） curriculums just like: mathematics, English, physical, music and foreign language. Professional educators’s（educators’） fundamental function is improving(to improve) student's knowledge level, acquire their study skill, and enlarge their vision. However, education are not only knowledge and information to improve(are just not about pouring knowledge), there is any other(many other) thing(s) to learn. For example, communicate(communication) skill, social relationship and other things in the daily life. Therefore parents play a pivotal role in the education.

Parents are the (the 不要)significant teacher(s) in one's life. When we are a child（In our childhood）, the parent told us how to say the first word, just like "mama" and “papa”. From the infant to the child（When we grew older）, parents teach us how to ride(?) and how to run. When we became an adolescent parent teach us how to talk with (to) the beautiful girl .When we became an adolescent(adult?), the parent teach us how to work effectively and how to manage the marriage. The parent like(serves) a example of our daily life, when we are a child we simulate some of the personality and character (behaviors) form our parents more or less. A lot of famous and excellent’s (people) growing up(have grown up) in a good situation (environment in)which their parents are eliciting in the social life(?). Parent should involve in the local schools to component(是compete吗？) with the teacher. The community is also very important in our social life's education. The environment determines one's development. If the community can take a better situation to the student, they will be better. If a child often lives with a writer, then he or she will be a writer. If a child grow up with a solider, then he or she will be a solider; if a child grow up will a thief, then he or she will be a thief. Only the community can change anything in one's situation.（这段写的不太好）

In sum, not only professional educators but also both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools, because of education is too important.

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