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发表于 2009-3-12 21:44:25 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

The statement is not thoroughly reasoned. By illustrating the the well sold recordings, the argument claim that the decreasing sales of tickets is related to the choice of music.

However, the writer of this letter is failing to consider other possible alternatives to explanations of the decreasing of purchased advance tickets. Such alternatives may inlcude the fact that there are other more popular activities over the past few years. It is also possible that the bad weather influence the sale of tickets.Many people attended the concerts even in bad weather does not mean everyone would like to enjoy the concerts in bad weather. Besides the limited fantastic music lovers, it is reasonable to believe others will be absent for the concert hold in bad weather.

There is no evidence that the reason for the decline is the choice of music. Although the modern music is popular in the recordings sale, that do not mean the concert is suitble for modern music. It may be the case that people come to concert for piano and symphonic music, when the modern music is introduced to the cencerts, the audience possibly decrease, for the modern music lover do not like the enviroment of cencert and the traditional symphonic music lovers do not like the modern music. In addition,the recordings sales more than others may indicate that the price is low.

Overall, the reasoning behind decreasing sales of cencert tickets seems logical if more information is presented, like the statistics from the audience. The solution of change music type also can not stand for the reason above.

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