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发表于 2009-3-11 22:10:20 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve questions or ask other people for advice.

Tens of thousands of people are making questions all the time, while hundreds of solutions are being thought of. Is it better to use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions or ask other people for advice? As far as I can see, it would be better to use our own knowledge and experience.
It would be troublesome to ask other people all the time when they are busy working. For example, John is concentrating on his research, and Sam suddenly goes over to ask for advice. The research is stopped, and John is angry, while Sam is embarrassed. Would anyone like to be the person that nobody likes? The answer is clear. NO.
When we forms a habit that we can solve questions only with the help of others, what can we do if the people on the earth are all having no time to give a word? I can imagine such scenes: We are sitting on the chairs with eyes looking around. Or we are scratching our heads, dizzy to fall down. Another one, we may be screaming, and then mind emptied. In a word, we can do nothing without others’ help. From this, we can make a conclusion that it’s absolutely important to make a habit to solve questions with our own knowledge and experience.
God bless us! It’s a hard job to have lovers because mistakes and quarrels will come up at any time. Of course, we can ask others what we should do to make our lovers be pleasant and forgive us again. But we must know clearly that nobody knows the nature of question between you two lovers. Their advices may make the situation worse. Think it over, and then reach a conclusion that it’s better to use our own knowledge and experience to get our beloved back.
Let’s say that in my opinion, it will be a better choice to use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions than to ask other people for advice.

Dawn is in the morning.

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发表于 2009-3-12 22:28:31 |只看该作者

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve questions or ask other people for advice
Tens of thousands of people are making questions all the time, while hundreds of solutions are being thought of. Is it better to use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions or ask other people for advice? As far as I can see, it would be better to use our own knowledge and experience. (on the contrary) It would be troublesome to ask other people all the time when they are busy working. For example, John is concentrating on his research, and Sam suddenly goes over to ask for advice. The research is stopped, and John is angry, while Sam is embarrassed. Would anyone like to be the person that nobody likes? The answer is clear. NO.
When we forms a habit that we can solve questions only with the help of others, what can we do if the people on the earth are all having no time to give a word? I can imagine such scenes: We are sitting on the chairs with eyes looking around. Or we are scratching our heads, dizzy to fall down. Another one, we may be screaming, and then mind emptied. In a word, we can do nothing without others’ help. From this, we can make a conclusion that it’s absolutely important to make a habit to solve questions with our own knowledge and experience.
It’s a hard job to have lovers because mistakes and quarrels will come up at any time. Of course, we can ask others what we should do to make our lovers be pleasant and forgive us again. But we must know clearly that nobody knows the nature of question between you two lovers. Their advices may make the situation worse. Think it over, and then reach a conclusion that it’s better to use our own knowledge and experience to get our beloved back.
Let’s say that in my opinion, it will be a better choice to use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions than to ask other people for advice.!

结构整齐，论述的很不错，一起加油！！！

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发表于 2009-3-13 23:58:09 |只看该作者

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve questions or ask other people for advice.

Tens of thousands of people are making questions all the time, while hundreds of solutions are being thought of. Is it better to use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions or ask other people for advice? As far as I can see, it would be better to use our own knowledge and experience.
It would be troublesome to ask other people all the time when they are busy working. For example, John is concentrating on his research, and Sam suddenly goes over to ask for advice. The research is stopped, and John is angry, while Sam is embarrassed. Would anyone like to be the person that nobody likes? The answer is clear. NO（No）.（这观点论述得有点苍白）
When we forms a habit that we can solve questions only with the help of others, what can we do if the people on the earth are all having no time to give a word? I can imagine such scenes: We are sitting on the chairs with eyes looking around. Or we are scratching our heads, dizzy to fall down. Another one, we may be screaming, and then mind emptied. In a word, we can do nothing without others’ help. From this, we can make a conclusion that it’s absolutely important to make a habit to solve questions with our own knowledge and experience.
God bless us! It’s a hard job to have lovers because mistakes and quarrels will come up at any time. Of course, we can ask others what we should do to make our lovers be pleasant and forgive us again. But we must know clearly that nobody knows the nature of question between you two lovers. Their advices may make the situation worse. Think it over, and then reach a conclusion that it’s better to use our own knowledge and experience to get our beloved back.
Let’s say that in my opinion, it will be a better choice to use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions than to ask other people for advice.
（个人觉得语法无问题，文采不错，但观点不够鲜明，或许是你想要一些新鲜的方法）

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