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发表于 2009-3-11 00:05:41 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?(08.5.31)
Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology and knowledge, people will confront more and more obstructions than our counterparts in the ancient time. How to find out a appropriate solution to this question is also a actual problem. Some of us will ask other people for giving advice, however, I would like to solve these questions by my own knowledge and experience because I am the only one person who knows myself best, I can practice my ability and make a greater progress.
First of all, I am the person who knows me best. When I face the question, I can realize that which part I can conserve to solve to the best of my ability and which part I can give up to save my energy to overcome the priority of this obstacle. For instance, when I want to take a good preparation for my college final examination, I should precisely allocate my time and energy to this preparation. However, I know I am proficient in my math but not good at my English, so I absolutely should spend more time on my poor English instead of wasting my time in math. This can help me to overcome the obstacle more efficiently.
Furthermore, during the time I spend in solving the question, I can practice my ability to solve the similar question. Men in our world with rapid pace of development is certain to face various of questions, but part of them are identical. A smart person would solve these similar questions with the same method under their conclusion .After you find out a solution to a question, draw a conclusion and you will own a better capacity of overcoming the homogeneous problems.
Nevertheless ，people by himself / herself can solve any questions without any question , but the solution they find out maybe not the most appropriate one to the question they should overcome . However ，I can take a lesson in this fault and summarize it to guarantee myself not to have a opportunity to make the same mistake . In this process, I can make a greater progress on my skill of tackling a question through this lesson.

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发表于 2009-3-12 22:37:54 |只看该作者

Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology and knowledge, people will confront more and more obstructions than our counterparts in the ancient time. How to find out a appropriate solution to this question is also a （an） actual problem. Some of us will ask other people for giving advice, however, I would like to solve these questions by my own knowledge and experience because I am the only one (我觉得one可以去掉 ) person who knows myself best, I can practice my ability and make a greater progress.
I am the person who knows me best. When I face the question, I can realize that which part I can conserve to solve to the best of my ability and which part I can give up to save my energy to overcome the priority of this obstacle. For instance, when I want to take a good preparation for my college final examination, I should precisely allocate my time and energy to this preparation. However, I know I am proficient in my math but not good at my English, so I absolutely should spend more time on my poor English instead of wasting my time in math. This can help me to overcome the obstacle more efficiently.
Furthermore, during the time I spend in solving the question, I can practice my ability to solve the similar question. Men in our world with rapid pace of development is certain to face various of questions, but part of them are identical. A smart person would solve these similar questions with the same method under their conclusion .After you find out a solution to a question, draw a conclusion and you will own a better capacity of overcoming the homogeneous problems.
Nevertheless ，people by himself / herself can solve any questions without any question , but the solution they find out maybe not the most appropriate one to the question they should overcome . However ，I can take a lesson in this fault and summarize it to guarantee myself not to have a （an） opportunity to make the same mistake . In this process, I can make a greater progress on my skill of tackling a question through this lesson.

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板凳

发表于 2009-3-13 17:52:16 |只看该作者

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?(08.5.31) p: s- H0 F' f; F: x" |
Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology and knowledge, people will confront more and more obstructions than our counterparts in the ancient time. How to find out a appropriate solution to this question is also a actual problem. Some of us will ask other people for giving(giving这个可以省略) advice, however, I would like to solve these questions by my own knowledge and experience because I am the only one person who knows myself best, I can practice my ability and make a greater progress.
First of all, I am the person who knows me（myself） best. When I face the question, I can realize that which part I can conserve to solve to the best of my ability （这里好像有点问题）and which part I can give up to save my energy to overcome the priority of this obstacle.（这个句子如果试着分开写，也许会更好一点） For instance, when I want to take a good preparation for my college final examination, I should precisely allocate my time and energy to this preparation. However, I know I am proficient in my math but not good at my（my可以省略） English, so I absolutely should spend more time on my poor English instead of wasting my time in math. This can help me to overcome the obstacle more efficiently.
Furthermore, during the time I spend in solving the question, I can practice my ability to solve the similar question. Men in our world with rapid pace of development is certainly to face various of questions, but part of them are identical. A smart person would solve these similar questions with the same method under their conclusion .After you find out a solution to a question, draw a conclusion and you will own a better capacity of overcoming the homogeneous problems.
Nevertheless ，people by himself / herself can solve any questions without any question （这个有点问题，question用两次有点语意模糊）, but （前面用了一个转折词了，再转折的话好像有点不顺）the solution they find out maybe not the most appropriate one to the question they should overcome . However ，I can take a lesson in this fault and summarize it to guarantee myself not to have an opportunity to make the same mistake . In this process, I can make a greater progress on my skill of tackling a question through this lesson.
思路挺不错的，就是语法方面好像稍微有点问题，一起加油~觉得改得有问题可以问我的，呵呵

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