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发表于 2009-8-1 22:35:33 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
因为构思文章的开头总是比较耗费时间,所以构思了一个开头,在北美上也看到过类似的开头,不知道是否可行
举个例子
"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

The author's assertion can be divided into three parts (1) video record is accurate (2) video record is convincing (3) video record will be more important than written redords.
I agree with the first one, while the others are complex questions, let's discuss them case by case.
写的比较粗陋


谢啦!


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