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发表于 2010-1-11 20:47:18 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

1.11 The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In my point of view, we need the spirits that never give up. “Never give up” are the great words for us to have confidence to solve the problem. “Never give up” is the faith of us that leads us to be succeeded.

No pains, no gains. When you do something you must be mentally prepared for them. Because every goal that you want to achieve needs you pay your time, energy, money and so on. In the world, who finally makes great effort is always the man that have lots of failing experiences but never stop working for their goals. Take Helen Keller for example, she is the person that I respect most. Helen Keller was born in American. When she was little, she was sick badly. Unfortunately, after the series disease she cannot hear and see anything. She could only feel things around her by touch. But Helen did not give up and she conquered all the difficulties learning how to spell and write. We can imagine how many difficulties she had faced, but she never gave up. Helen kept on going and in the end she became a famous writer and educator. Her story tells us never giving up no matter what difficulties you face.

Human life is short. We would better do not left regrets during the life time. We should focus on the things we interested in and keep on trying even though we meet troubles. When we have difficulties or failings and we do not keep on trying, I’m sure we will regret one day in the future. When I was a little girl, I started to learn how to play the piano. At first, I had great passion towards it, but later when the knowledge went further I felt confused with how to play the complex etudes. From then on, I intentionally found several kinds of excuse to decline playing the piano. Finally, I gave up. And now when I recall this experience in my childhood I feel very regretful about stopping playing the piano. Therefore, “never give up” should be the guild line when we deal with things.

In a word, I believe we should never give up. Troubles and failures are not fearful if we keep on trying. Just remember, if we give up we will never attain our goals, but if we keep going, there is always a day that we will succeed.

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发表于 2010-1-12 10:05:47 |只看该作者

In my point of view, we need the spirits that never give up. “Never give up” are the great words for us to have confidence to (不太理解，不放弃对于我们是一句重要的话而给予我们信心么？觉得有点别扭) solve the problem. “Never give up” is the faith of us that leads us to be succeeded (succeed).

No pains, no gains. When you do something you must be mentally prepared for them. Because every goal that you want to achieve needs you pay your time, energy, money and so on. In the world, who finally makes great effort is always the man that have lots of failing experiences but never stop working for their goals. Take Helen Keller for example, she is the person that I respect most. Helen Keller was born in American. When she was little, she was sick badly. Unfortunately, after the series disease she cannot hear and see anything. She could only feel things around her by touch. But Helen did not give up and she conquered all the difficulties by (觉得这里应该加个介词) learning how to spell and write. We can imagine how many difficulties she had faced, but she never gave up. Helen kept on going and in the end she became a famous writer and educator. Her story tells us never giving up no matter what difficulties you face.

Human life is short. We would better do not left regrets during the life time. We should focus on the things we interested in and keep on trying even though we meet troubles. When we have difficulties or failings and we do not keep on trying, I’m sure we will regret one day in the future. When I was a little girl, I started to learn how to play the piano. At first, I had great passion towards it, but later when the knowledge went further I felt confused with how to play the complex etudes. From then on, I intentionally found several kinds of excuse to decline playing the piano. Finally, I gave up. And now when I recall this experience in my childhood I feel very regretful about stopping playing the piano. Therefore, “never give up” should be the guild line when we deal with things.

In a word, I believe we should never give up. Troubles and failures are not fearful if we keep on trying. Just remember, if we give up we will never attain our goals, but if we keep going, there is always a day that we will succeed.

总的来说，我觉得在句子的应用上面还不错
内容上，特别是第二个例子，我觉得给我的感觉跟前一段很相似，就是面对困难时不要放弃。只是前一段是说面对困难坚持就成功，后一段是说面对困难放弃就后悔。
ps.我觉得这个题目还是比较难写，我再一审题，又觉得题目问的是永不放弃和坚持目标不停工作之间的关系，立马又觉得写永不放弃就会成功（好像我也是这样写的）稍微有点偏题…

UCL vs IC哪个项目更容易拿到全奖博？