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[感想日志] 1006G【clover】备考日记 by 小灵易碎——重生 [复制链接]

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《山高路远》,却风雨兼程。


呼喊是爆发的沉默


沉默是无声的召唤


不论激越


还是宁静


我祈求


只要不是平淡


如果远方呼唤我


我就走向远方


如果大山召唤我


我就走向大山


双脚磨破


干脆再让夕阳涂抹小路


双手划烂


索性就让荆棘变成杜鹃


没有比脚更长的路


没有比人更高的山
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空白沙发是吧?
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Napery + 1 加油~~

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【clover】作业
1.把日志的标题改成 1006G 【clover】备考日志 by xxx--标题。。记住每天更新。。记录一天所学。。然后回忆巩固
2.每天去阅读一篇eco,做好词好句照抄,然后背诵,并且,挖掘你所看的eco里面可以用于写作的素材。届时bela和我会开eco作业贴。
3.仔细看看下面这个关于写作的指导。。务必反复阅读。。然后在你的日志上更新你看了多少。。有什么启示和收获。。自己以前的文章里面做到了这点没有。。应该如何改进。。。
    Fundamental Course of Writtng
4.intro再研读一遍,然后把感想写在日志上,写出根据intro的要求,以及自己的考试时间,自己的优缺点,写出自己的大致规划。
5.argu和issue的题库每天各十五左右的提纲练习,issue可以是一类的,给自己十到十五分钟深刻思考题目,然后记录下自己的思想瓶颈以及为什么会遇到这样的障碍,在日志里更新,我们到时候会总结。
6.题库继续过,尤其是argu。issue要熟悉所有的题目,不至于看到题目后,会觉得没看到过或者印象不深刻。argu的题库一周至少一次,也是以熟悉为目标。
7.每天背诵红包2-3个list。。毕竟你们已经背过至少一遍了。。
8.难句每天看五句,分析语法,然后再抛弃语法,反复练习。

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12.5
单词①——④——①
提纲两篇,写出来跟心情一样糟糕~
觉得前方的路好难,是不是大家跟我差不多呢?╮(╯▽╰)╭

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12.7
单词已经开始总结~终于……╮(╯▽╰)╭呼~~
ISSUE13差不多了,大家狠劲儿拍吧~https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1038560&extra=
ARGU努力中~
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1038580&;extra=不过还是要加快速度了……(ˇˍˇ)q 终于一点点从低落中慢慢恢复,明天会更好的!小灵加油~!!!!!!!!!!

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本帖最后由 小灵易碎 于 2009-12-8 23:21 编辑

12.8
单词顺利进行,按照进度就好
写一篇ISSUE172,虽然可能文很烂,但今天敲字快一点了,高兴~^+++^https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1038930-1-1.html
AWINTRO挣扎中,赶不上进度ing,一会儿又要熄灯了……撑不了两小时了~尽量吧
ARGU……我都懒得提它~明天死也要写一篇出来~!!!!!


【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(1)
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1. What does X mean? (Definition)定义
2. What are the various features of X? (Description)事物特点
3. What are the component parts of X? (Simple Analysis)事物的组成部分
4. How is X made or done? (Process Analysis)事物如何做成(方法)
5. How should X be made or done? (Directional Analysis)应该如何做(指导原则)
6. What is the essential function of X? (Functional Analysis)事物的核心功能
7. What are the causes of X? (Causal Analysis) BE EACW事物原因
8. What are the consequences of X? (Causal Analysis)事物结果
9. What are the types of X? (Classification)事物种类
10. How is X like or unlike Y? (Comparison)事物间比较
11. What is the present status of X? (Comparison)事物现在状态
12. What is the significance of X? (Interpretation)事物的重要性
13. What are the facts about X? (Reportage)关于事物的事实
14. How did X happen? (Narration)如何发生的
15. What kind of person is X? (Characterization/Profile)人格特点
16. What is my personal response to X? (Reflection)我自己对事物的反应
17. What is my memory of X? (Reminiscence)对事物的记忆
18. What is the value of X? (Evaluation)对事物的评估
19. What are the essential major points or features of X? (Summary)事物的核心要点
20. What case can be made for or against X? (Persuasion)什么条件下会出现跟事物对抗的情况
(Adapted from Jacqueline Berke's Twenty Questions for the Writer)


嗯,相当受用的信息,就好像ISSUE的破题思路和角度,很不错,学习了


【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(2)
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Coping with Writing Anxiety


Many situations or activities, such as writing, taking tests, competing in sports, or speaking before a large audience, may make us anxious or apprehensive. It's important to remember that a moderate level of anxiety is helpful and productive. That flow of adrenaline is a natural response that helps get us ready for action. Without it, we might not perform as well.


If we let our anxiety overwhelm us, it can cause problems. If we control that anxiety, however, we can make it work for us. One way to do that is to use some of the coping strategies listed below.


Coping Strategies:


  • Focus your energy by rehearsing the task in your head.
  • Consciously stop the non-productive comments(没用的思路) running through your head by replacing them with productive ones.
  • If you have some "rituals(仪式)" for writing success, use them.

Examples:

  • -Follow a protocol you may have for organizing your time. Use a favorite pen if you have one. (回忆模板,摸摸自己的幸运物)
  • -Spend a few minutes doing some relaxation exercises. (做运动)
  • -Take a break: physically walk away from the situation for a few minutes if you can. (溜达溜达)

Relaxation Strategies


  • Stretch伸展! If you can't stand up, stretch as many muscle groups as possible while staying seated. (不要吓到邻座...)
  • Try tensing and releasing various muscle groups. Starting from your toes, tense up for perhaps five to ten seconds and then let go. Relax and then go on to another muscle group.
  • Breathe deeply. Close your eyes; then, fill your chest cavity slowly by taking four of five short deep breaths. Hold each breath until it hurts, and then let it out slowly.
  • Use a calming word or mental image to focus on while relaxing. If you choose a word, be careful not to use an imperative. Don't command yourself to "Calm down!" or "Relax!"


【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(3)
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Symptoms and Cures for Writer's Block  对于神经性写作便秘的症状介绍及治疗建议


Because writers have various ways of writing, a variety of things can cause a writer to experience anxiety, and sometimes this anxiety leads to writer's block. Often a solution can be found by speaking with your instructor (if you are in school), or a writing tutor. There are some common causes of writer's block, however, and when you are blocked, consider these causes and try the strategies that sound most promising:


Symptom


You have attempted to begin a paper without doing any preliminary work such as brainstorming or outlining...


Possible Cures


  • Use invention strategies suggested by a tutor or teacher
  • Write down all the primary ideas you'd like to express and then fill in each with the smaller ideas that make up each primary idea. This can easily be converted into an outline


Symptom


You have chosen or been assigned a topic which bores you....


Possible Cures


  • Choose a particular aspect of the topic you are interested in (if the writing situation will allow it...i.e. if the goal of your writing can be adjusted and is not given to you specifically, or if the teacher or project coordinator will allow it)
  • Talk to a tutor about how you can personalize a topic to make it more interesting


Symptom


You don't want to spend time writing or don't understand the assignment...


Possible Cures


  • Resign yourself to the fact that you have to write
  • Find out what is expected of you (consult a teacher, textbook, student, tutor, or project coordinator)
  • Look at some of the strategies for writing anxiety listed below


Symptom


You are anxious about writing the paper...


Possible Cures


  • Focus your energy by rehearsing the task in your head.
  • Consciously stop the non-productive comments running through your head by replacing them with productive ones.
  • If you have some "rituals" for writing success (chewing gum, listening to jazz etc.), use them.

Symptom


You are so stressed out you can't seem to put a word on the page...


Possible Cures


  • Stretch! If you can't stand up, stretch as many muscle groups as possible while staying seated.
  • Try tensing and releasing various muscle groups. Starting from your toes, tense up for perhaps five to ten seconds and then let go. Relax and then go on to another muscle group.
  • Breathe deeply. Close your eyes; then, fill your chest cavity slowly by taking four of five short deep breaths. Hold each breath until it hurts, and then let it out slowly.
  • Use a calming word or mental image to focus on while relaxing. If you choose a word, be careful not to use an imperative. Don't command yourself to "Calm down!" or "Relax!"

Symptom


You're self-conscious about your writing, you may have trouble getting started. So, if you're preoccupied with the idea that you have to write about a subject and feel you probably won't express yourself well...


Possible Cures


  • Talk over the subject with a friend or tutor.
  • assure yourself that the first draft doesn't have to be a work of genius, it is something to work with.
  • Force yourself to write down something, however poorly worded, that approximates your thought (you can revise this later) and go on with the next idea.
  • Break the task up into steps. Meet the general purpose first, and then flesh out the more specific aspects later.
  • Try one of the strategies on the next page of this resource.


Other Strategies for Getting Over Writer's BlockIf you have tried the other strategies and are still having problems, try some of these general techniques for getting over writer's block. These strategies will prove more helpful when you're drafting your writing.
Begin in the MiddleStart writing at whatever point you like. If you want to begin in the middle, fine. Leave the introduction or first section until later. The reader will never know that you wrote the paper "backwards." Besides, some writers routinely save the introduction until later when they have a clearer idea of what the main idea and purpose of the piece will be.
Talk Out the PaperTalking feels less artificial than writing to some people. Talk about what you want to write someone—your teacher, a friend, a roommate, or a tutor. Just pick someone who's willing to give you fifteen to thirty minutes to talk about the topic and whose main aim is to help you start writing. Have the person take notes while you talk or tape your conversation. Talking will be helpful because you'll probably be more natural and spontaneous in speech than in writing. Your listener can ask questions and guide you as you speak, and you'll be more likely to relax and say something unpredictable than if that you were sitting and forcing yourself to write.
Tape the PaperTalk into a tape recorder, imagining your audience sitting in front of you. Then, transcribe the tape-recorded material. You'll at least have some ideas written down to work with and move around.
Change the AudiencePretend that you're writing to a child, to a close friend, to a parent, to a person who sharply disagrees with you, or to someone who's new to the subject and needs to have you explain your paper's topic slowly and clearly. Changing the audience can clarify your purpose and can also make you feel more comfortable and help you write more easily.
Play a RolePretend you are someone else writing the paper. For instance, if you have been asked to write about sexist advertising, assume you are the president of the National Organization of Women. Or, pretend you are the president of a major oil company asked to defend the high price of oil. Consider being someone in another time period, or someone with a wildly different perspective from your own. Pulling yourself out of your usual perspective can help you see things that are otherwise invisible or difficult to articulate, and your writing will be stronger for it.



【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(4)
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Planning (Invention): when you start to write

You can try the textbook formula:


I. State your thesis.
II. Write an outline.
III. Write the first draft.
IV. Revise and polish.


. . . but that often doesn't work!



Instead, you can try one or more of these strategies:



Ask yourself what your purpose is for writing about the subject.

There are many "correct" things to write about for any subject, but you need to narrow down your choices. For example, your topic might be "dorm food." At this point, you and your potential reader are asking the same question, "So what?" Why should you write about this, and why should anyone read it?


Do you want the reader to pity you because of the intolerable food you have to eat there?


Do you want to analyze large-scale institutional cooking?


Do you want to compare Purdue's dorm food to that served at Indiana University?


Ask yourself how you are going to achieve this purpose.

How, for example, would you achieve your purpose if you wanted to describe some movie as the best you've ever seen? Would you define for yourself a specific means of doing so? Would your comments on the movie go beyond merely telling the reader that you really liked it?


Start the ideas flowing

Brainstorm. Gather as many good and bad ideas, suggestions, examples, sentences, false starts, etc. as you can. Perhaps some friends can join in. Jot down everything that comes to mind, including material you are sure you will throw out. Be ready to keep adding to the list at odd moments as ideas continue to come to mind.


Talk to your audience, or pretend that you are being interviewed by someone -- or by several people, if possible (to give yourself the opportunity of considering a subject from several different points of view). What questions would the other person ask? You might also try to teach the subject to a group or class.


See if you can find a fresh analogy that opens up a new set of ideas. Build your analogy by using the word like. For example, if you are writing about violence on television, is that violence like clowns fighting in a carnival act (that is, we know that no one is really getting hurt)?


Take a rest and let it all percolate.


Nutshell your whole idea.

Tell it to someone in three or four sentences.


Diagram your major points somehow.

Make a tree, outline, or whatever helps you to see a schematic representation of what you have. You may discover the need for more material in some places.


Write a first draft.

Then, if possible, put it away. Later, read it aloud or to yourself as if you were someone else. Watch especially for the need to clarify or add more information.


You may find yourself jumping back and forth among these various strategies.


You may find that one works better than another. You may find yourself trying several strategies at once. If so, then you are probably doing something right!

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本帖最后由 小灵易碎 于 2009-12-9 20:52 编辑

看了寄托的阅读单词库,有些单词标明了在阅读中的实际用法和可能会出现的题型,非常实用,还是要好好记一下
ETS的范文,看完之后不禁惊呼:果然比北美那个鸡肋有用多了,之前写文章和提纲都不自觉套用北美范文,自己都觉得写得像八股文……%>_<%不过官方范文的存世量实在太少,不能尽情拜读~总之,学习了新东西总是好的,心里还是挺高兴的。
话说我那篇不争气的ARGU……因为今天心情跌落谷底,一整天被惹得哭哭啼啼的,晚上才缓过劲儿来~今晚只能写个大概了,看到坛子里已经提前一个月开了备考日记并完成了作业的筒子们,本来就紧张的时间更加显得急迫~熄灯之后电池只能撑两个多小时~看来明天要回家通个宵了~今天肯定是“谷底”了,明天一定上扬!!!



【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(5)
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Writing With Computers
Using word processing software on a computer is an efficient way to write. You can delete, revise, and cut and paste with great ease and speed, without having to retype, and you will find your drafts easier to read as you revise. Even if you cannot type well (and many successful computer users can't), a computer can be both a convenience and an aid throughout the writing process. But remember to save your files often and make a backup copy of the file, even when you've carefully saved it. Disks can fail and not open, and files can be deleted or lost.
Word processing software can aid your efforts in all aspects of the writing process:

Planning
freewriting
If freewriting or brainstorming is a useful invention strategy for you, do either invention strategy on a computer using word processing software. You can then cut and paste parts of those planning notes into a draft as needed. Some writers find that they can freewrite more easily by turning down the computer screen, so they cannot see what they type. You may also want to create separate files for different topics discovered while freewriting.

writing an e-mail message
As you think about your assignment or topic, try writing an e-mail message to a friend, to someone in your class, or to a Writing Lab tutor . Use that e-mail message to test ideas as you would in a conversation with peer group members or a tutor. Encourage the person who receives the e-mail to ask you questions that help you clarify your ideas.

making an outline
Set up headings for an outline in large bold letters. Later, as you go back and fill in the subheadings and sub points, you will be able to see the larger structure of the paper. Some word processing programs either outline for you or permit you to indicate the outline headings in a way that allows you to go back and forth between a screen showing only the headings and screens showing the detailed material within sections.

planning visually
Use a drawing or painting program to do some visual planning. To do some clustering, put a topic word or phrase in a circle in the middle of the page and then surround that circle with clusters of related ideas (also in circles). Use lines to connect these ideas to the main idea or to other sub-ideas. To try branching, another visual planning strategy, put the main idea at the top of the page and then list sub-ideas underneath the main idea with related points for each sub-idea branching off.

keeping a journal
If keeping a journal helps you, start a journal file for each assignment and include thoughts and questions that occur to you as you proceed through the writing. Include a plan for how you will proceed through the assignment, and if there are stages or steps to complete, write a "to do" list. Include phrases and ideas that occur to you and that may fit into the paper later with some cutting and pasting from one file to another. You may want to insert page breaks for different sections or thoughts.

Drafting
creating a scrapfile
As you start an assignment, make two separate files, one for the assignment itself and the other for scraps of writing that you will be collecting. As you write (or plan) use the scrap file to cut and paste anything that doesn't seem to fit in as you write. This scrap file can be a very useful storage space for material that should be deleted from the paper you are writing now but that may be useful for other writing assignments. You may also want a separate file for keywords, words that come to mind and that can be used when needed or phrases that may come in handy as section headings in your paper.

splitting screens
If you are using a Macintosh or Windows, you can have multiple files visible on your screen at the same time. Consider this strategy if it helps you to look at one bit of information while trying to create another. One box on the screen can display your outline or visual planning while another can display your draft. Or, you can keep your scrap file visible while writing a draft. Remember that you can cut, copy, and paste between files.

adding notes
As you gather material from your reading (or want to save comments to yourself about something you've written), develop a method to store this kind of material that you may or may not use. For example, put parentheses around material that might not stay in a later draft, or use bold lettering, or make use of a word processing feature that permits you to store material as notes. Be sure to delete this material when you are sure you no longer want it.

Organizing
mixing up the order of paragraphs or sentences
Make a new copy of your file. Then, in the new file, use the cut-and-paste feature to move paragraphs. You may see a better organizing principle than the principle you had been using. Do the same with sentences within paragraphs.

checking your outline
Look again at the bold-lettered headings of the outline you made during planning (or create one now), and reassess whether that outline is adequate or well organized.

staying on topic in every paragraph
Put your topic sentence at the top of each paragraph to keep the sentence in mind and not lose track of your topic.

Revising
starting at the beginning of the file
Each time you open a file, you are at the beginning of the draft. Start there when you are drafting and revising and read until you come to a section where you will be working. That rereading has several advantages for you. It helps you get back into the flow of thought, and it permits you to review what you've written so that you can revise as you read forward. But be careful not to get caught up in endless revising of the beginning of the paper, especially if like some writers, you find that you need to write the whole paper before you can write the introduction.

renaming a file
Each time you open your file, save it as a different file so that you always know which is the most recent version you've worked on. If your first draft is Draft I, the next time you open that file, save it as Draft II.

saving copies of material to cut and paste
When you are moving large blocks of text, highlight what you are going to move and make a copy for your clipboard before moving. if you lose the portion you are moving, you still have a copy available.

printing out hard copies to read
It may help you to look at a printed copy of your paper as you revise, so you can see the paper's development and organization.

resisting the neat appearance of a printout
If you print out a draft of your paper, resist the temptation to hand in that draft because it looks neat and seems to have a finished appearance.

using page or print view to check paragraphs
Switch to the page or print view so that you can see the whole view of each page on screen. Do the paragraphs look to be about the same length? Does one look noticeably shorter than the others? Does it need more development? Is there a paragraph that seems to be disproportionately long?

highlighting sentence length
Make a copy of your main file and, using that copy, hit the return key after each sentence so that each looks like a separate paragraph. Are all of your sentences the same length? Do they all start the same way and need some variety?
  
Editing and Proofreading
using online tools
A number of online tools exist, such as spell checkers, grammar checkers and style analyzers, but grammar and style checkers are not effective. Distinguishing between appropraite advice and inappropriate advice is difficult and a styke checker relies on rules you may not be familiar with. Some word processing programs include a thesaurus which is useful for looking up synonyms for words you've been using too much or for finding more specific words than the ones you have used.

changing the appearance of key features of your writing
Change active verbs to bold letters, put passive constructions in italics, use larger fonts for descriptive words, underline your thesis statement, and so on. By changing the appearance of these features, you may see that you have too many passives or that you don't have many descriptive words.

editing on hard copy
It may be easier for you to print out a draft and mark it for editing changes. If you do, put marks in the margins to indicate lines where changes are to be made, so you can easily find them again.


【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(7)
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【Fundamental Course of Writtng】基础写作每日一讲(8)-(11)
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GRE分析性写作概要
GRE分析性写作是于2002年10月引进的新考试项目,(目的在于)考察批判性思维和分析写作能力,它用来评估清晰表达、支持复杂观点、分析论点论据并提供集中的、联系紧密的论述的能力。它不考察具体内容的知识(专业知识)

AW包括两个独立时间限制的分析性写作
*•        45分钟完成一篇表述你观点的ISSUE
*•        30分钟完成一篇分析论点论据的ARGUMENT
你将有两个ISSUE题目可选.每个题目都包含一个广泛性的观点,并且要求你从任何你喜欢的角度来论述这个题目,只要你能给出恰当切题的理由和支持你观点的例子即可

ARGU的题目不可选择.ARGU提出了与ISSUE不同的要求:i它要求你用你觉得合理的方式来批判一篇论述.
比起是否同意文中的立场,你需要更加关注文章中逻辑关系的合理性
这是两个互补的写作,一个ISSUE要求你用表明你的立场并提供证明你支持的观点的证据,从而构建你自己的论述;另一个ARGU要求你批判性地评价别人的主张并衡量它提供的证据

AW的准备工作
每个人——即使是最熟练和最自信的人,在最终到考试中心之前,也需要花一些时间准备AW。复习AW的既定规则是非常重要的,如何评分,判分指南和不同分数水平的标准,样本主题,被评分的范文和读者评论与注释。

AW的题目取材广泛,从艺术到人性再到社会和自然科学,但是不包括专业知识。实际上,每个题目都经过了现场实验以确保他们具有以下重要特征:
*•参加GRE考试的人,不用关心专业领域的知识或者特殊的兴趣,理解题目本身就能够很容易地论述它
*•题目从那些大学教员认为对在研究生院的成功很重要的一些复杂观点和劝说性文章提取抽象出来
*•回答在内容上是多样的,并且在笔者的思路上能够发展其观点和构想
为了帮助你准备AW,GRE项目已经出版了完整的题目库,你考试中的题目将在这个题目库中选出。你(也许)能发现它对你检查与温习ISSUE和ARGU 题库有所帮助。你可以在 www.gre.org/pracmats.html找到题库,或者写信到GRE Program,PO Box 6000,Princeton,NJ 08541-6000.取得复印版本

AW考试策略
如何规划好你的时间是很重要的
在ISSUE项的45分钟里,你需要有足够的时间去选择两个题目当中的一个,思考你所选择的题目,准备作答和创作你的文章
在ARGU30分钟的时间限制里,你需要有足够的时间分析文章,计划批判并创作出你的文章
尽管GRE读者知道写作是有时间限制的,并且认为你自己的答题为“初稿”,但是你仍然想让它成为你在考场环境下所创作出的尽可能好的文章

在每一个限时任务后留下几分钟检查明显错误,尽管偶然情况下拼写或语法错误不会影响到你的分数,但是严重错误和连续性错误会降低你整体写作的有效性并减低你的分数

遵循考试的进程,你将会有10分钟的休息时间,在另外的考试部分你将会有1分钟的休息时间(没明白?)在每个规划好的休息时间里你可以重新补充你的草稿纸。There is a one-minute break between the other test sections.

AW如何评分
按照GRE出版的AW评分指南中的评分标准,每一篇回答将被整体上按照6个进阶分数评判。整体评判意味着每篇回答作为一个整体被评价:审阅者不会把文章当做单独分开的部分,运用特别的评判标准或赞赏孤立的组成要素例如观点,联系,句子结构或语言。实际上是,审稿者会用综合的方法考虑到文章的整体特点,在此基础上,根据整体的文章质量评判分数
例如,优秀的组织结构或粗劣的组织结构,将会影响到文章给审稿者留下的整体印象,并因此影响到分数,但是组织结构,作为一个单独的特点,没有特别的作用。

一般来说,GRE审稿者是学院或者大学富有教课经验的教工,在这些学院或大学里,写作能力和严谨的思维都很重要。所有的GRE审稿者都经过了细致的训练并经过了严格的资质认证,这说明他们有能力把握评分的精准度。

为了确保评分的公平性和客观性
*•答卷时随机分派给审稿者的
*•所有可辨别身份的考试者信息对审稿者都是隐藏的
*•每份答卷由两个审稿者评分
*•一个审稿者不知道另一个可能已经决定的分数
*•整个评分过程要求每份答卷得到两个审稿者完全相同或相近的分数,任何其他情况下的分数组合将会交由第三个审稿者评判

两篇文章最终的分数来自于成绩单上分数的平均分,考试说明的29页提供了如何解释分析性写作中分数的说明。分析性写作最主要强调思维的严谨性和分析性写作技巧。在判分过程中,你分析性写作的文章答卷将会由ETS的侦查软件和经验丰富的审稿者复审,根据美国研究生院和大学对智力成果的的价值有很高程度的重视。在有实质的证据证明答卷有以下情况的,但并不只局限于以下情况的,ETS保留取消任何参加考试者成绩的权利。
*•文章大体上和以往GRE考试中的一篇或几篇文章相似
*•引用或者改写出现在已出版或未出版资源中的语言或论点,同时未标明出处
*•对与他人共同研究完成的,但未标注他人贡献的作品的不被承认的作品
*•应试者上交的应试文章中的观点和语言事实上是从其他地方来的或是由他人准备的

上述情形有一个或更多发生的话,在ETS专业的评判下,你的文章会被认为没有反应考试要考察的独立性、分析性写作技巧。因此,ETS一定会取消考试成绩并被视为无效,并且将无法报告GRE综合考试,因为分析性写作是整个考试不可或缺的一部分。

被取消考试的应试者将会被没收他们的考试费用,也只能再参加今后的考试。分数取消或者取消分数的原因,将会出现在将来投递至各大学和学院的成绩报告上.


在ISSUE考试中呈现你的观点


了解ISSUE考试
“在ISSUE在考试中呈现你的观点”旨在于评估你对于普遍兴趣偏好的主题的严谨思考能力和清楚表达你关于此的写作能力。每一个主题,以引用语的形式出现,要求每个应试者能够从不同角度来论述并适用于不同的场景和条件。你的任务就是展示展示出强有力的情况,来支持你在文章论述中的立场。确保认真阅读题目中的要求并从不同观点的角度来思考它,考虑到与这些看法相联系的,观点的复杂性。然后记下你想要进一步说明的立场并列出能够支持你立场的观点和事例。
ISSUE考试允许在多种解答题目需求的方式上的自由,尽管你写出具有核心思想的文章,并能自由选自己的表达方式这一点非常重要。

例如,你可能
*•完全同意或完全不同意题目中的论述,也或者部分同意部分不同意        
*•质疑题目中陈述的、可能是编造的假设
*•限定题目中任何条目,尤其是你定义或适用的条目对于扩展你文章中的观点非常重要的时候
*•指出为什么题目所宣称的在一定条件下是有效的但在其他条件下却没有根据        
*•评估与你的观点相对立的观点  
*•用有几个恰当例子或者一个充分表述的例子来支持你的的观点,并在此基础上扩展你的立场  
      
GRE的审稿者不是通过寻找一个“正确”的答案来评判你的分数,事实上,没有可以作为正确的立场可以判断。取而代之的是,审稿者会评估你清晰表达的能力和能够有足够的论据来支持你在文章中的立场。


了解上下文:意向和读者
ISSUE是一个关于批判性思维和说服性写作的习作。这项任务的目的在于决定你能在多大程度上提出强有力的论据,来支持你在文章中的观点,并且将文章中的论证,有效地传达给学术界的读者群。你的读者群包括大学和学院的教员,他经过训练成为GRE审稿者,运用在评分指南中“呈现你的观点”中规定的评分原则(27页)

为了对GRE审稿者是如何运用评分指南对实际答卷作出判断这个问题有更加清晰的认识,你应该温习那些已经被评判过的范文和审稿者的评论。范文,尤其是5分和6分水平的,将会向你展示多种关于组织、扩展和传达说服性论证的写作策略。审稿者的评论将会特别探讨分析和写作,如例子的运用,论证扩展和论证支持,语言的流畅度和词语的选择。对于每一份答卷,评论都会指出特别具有说服性的方面,同时也会说出整体上减弱了文章效力的地方。

ISSUE的准备工作

因为ISSUE考试意在评估你通过你各处受到教育所得到的,说服性写作的能力,它的设计既不需要任何的专业领域知识,也不会使受过某种专业训练的学生有特别的优势。

虽然很多有关写作的大学课本上会提供说服性写作建议,并能使你觉得从中获益,但是这些建议比起你真正需要的、能用在ISSUE里的,可能更加偏重技术层面和专业化。你不需要了解特别专业的批判性思维方式或者写作要素或写作策略,取而代之的是你应该能够运用理由、证据和例子来支持你在论证文章中的观点。例如,假设ISSUE题目问你是否觉得政府对艺术博物馆的财政支持是必要的 如果你的立场是肯定的,你可以用“艺术是重要的”和“艺术博物馆是公共场所并且对每个人都是有用的”这两个原因的讨论来支持你的立场。另一方面,如果你的立场是政府不应该支持博物馆,你可以指出,政府财政资助的有限性,跟其他重要的社会机构相比,艺术博物馆不值得获得政府资金支持。或者,你支持政府对艺术博物馆的资金支持只适用于特定环境下,你可能会关注艺术的规范,文化范畴或政治环境——那些你认为能够决定艺术博物馆怎样或是否接受政府资金支持的因素。 在你扩展你立场的过程中,你的立场远没有你批判性思考的技能重要。


准备ISSUE的一个很好地方法就是用已经刊出的题目来练习写作。没有“最好”的途径:有些人更喜欢不限时写作,另一些人喜欢开始计时写作然后限时写作。无论你联系ISSUE时采用哪种方法,你都应该反复温习写作指导,然后
*•认真阅读题目中的所声称的问题,并确保你能理解与问题的相关之处,如果它看上去是不清楚的,跟朋友或老师讨论一下。
*•思考问题跟你自己的想法和经验,或者你读到过或观察过的事件,或者你认识的人有什么联系,这是知识基础,从中你可以发展出强有力的理由和例子,在你的论述里用某种方式加强、否定或限定题目论述。
*•决定在在文章中要站在什么立场,怎样对自己的观点进行辩护——记住你可以自由选择完全不同意或同意或者同意其中一部分、或者一些要求,而不同意另一部分。
*•决定强有力的证据(理由和例子),可以让你用来支持你的立场

记住这是一个考察批判性思维和说服性写作的考试。因此,用问以下几个问题的方式来探索题目论述的复杂性可能对你有所帮助。
*•确切地说,什么是核心问题?
*•我同意题目中所述的任何哪个部分吗?为什么同意或为什么不同意?
*•这个论述的假设成立吗?如果成立,那么假设合理吗?
*•题目中的论述只在特定条件下存在吗?如果是的话,条件是什么?
*•我需要解释我是如何解读题目中确定的条目或者概念吗?
*•如果我确定了我在论述中的立场,什么样的原因能支持我的立场?
*•什么样的例子——真实的或虚构的——能用来阐明理由和提升我的观点呢?哪些例子最强有力?


一旦你决定了要进行辩护的立场,要考虑到那些可能不同意你立场的人的观点。问自己
*•不同立场的人会用什么样的理由来反驳或者削弱我的立场呢?
*•我应该怎样在文章里回击或反驳这样的观点呢?

为了计划你的答卷,你可能像先概括出你的立场并作出简短的笔记,明确你将如何支持你想要支持的立场。当你做完了这些的时候,检查你的笔记并决定你将如何组织你的回答。然后写出能够扩展你立场的回答。即使你没有充分回答,你应该也会发现联系一些ISSUE题目并勾勒出你大概的回答是有所帮助的。再练习了一些题目之后,试着在45分钟之内写出答卷,这样你就会对真正考试时的时间有清晰的概念。


从你教授批判性思考和写作课的老师那里得到一些反馈,或者跟同学互相讨论同一题目,并按照评分标准的要求讨论他人习作,对你将会有所帮助。试着去评判每份答卷是如何迎合了或者没有符合各种档次的评分要求的,对照你的答卷将会帮助你在什么地方需要改进或者如何改进。

记住,综合性考试将包含从已出版的题库中抽取的两个ISSUE题目,你必须选择其中之一。因为45分钟的计时是从你一看到两个题目时就开始的,所以你不应该在选择题目上浪费过多的时间,而是应该试着相当快地选出能使你感觉能更好讨论的那一个。


作出决定之前,仔细阅读题目,然后选择你能够更有效、更有道理地扩展论述的那个题目,在作出决定的时候,你肯会问自己:
*•我觉得哪个题目更有趣或更吸引人?
*•哪一个题目跟我的学术背景或个人经历有更近的联系 ?
*•选择哪个题目我可以更清楚地表达或为我自己的观点辩护 ?
*•选择那个题目我可以更容易地想到有力的理由和例子来支持我的立场?
回答这些问题可以帮助你做出选择


你的答题形式

在组织和扩展回答的方式上,你有自由选择你认为能有效连结你的想法和这篇论述的方式。你的回答可以,但不是必须加入英语创作中的,或者大学文字密集课程上学到的特殊写作策略。GRE审稿者是经受过训练的,他们看过数以百计的ISSUE答卷,尽管答卷在内容和形式上都各不相同,却都展示出了相似水平的批判性思维和说服性写作的特点。审稿者将会看出,例如,一些ISSUE答卷,在开头就概括了作者关于论述的立场并且告知了即将要论述的要点,是在6分的水平。他们也会看到,另一些用预先猜测的方式引出作者的观点,提出一系列问题,描述一种方案,或者定义引文中值得批判的条目。审稿者值得一个作者可以靠提供大量例子或呈现一个单独的、扩展的例子来取得高分。看看范文,尤其是5分或6分的,看看那些作者是如何成功地扩展和组织文章的。


你应该用你认为适用于你论述的,尽可能多的或尽可能少的段落——例如你可能需要另起一个新段落,当你的论述要转换到一个新的意群。例子的数量、段落的数量或者你的论述形式是无关紧要的,重要的是你关于论证的理念有没有让人信服的力量,还有你把自己理念传达给审稿者时,表现出了文章的清晰度和技巧。

题目实例
“In our time, specialists of all kinds are highly overrated.  We need more generalists—people who can  provide broad perspectives."

关于上述题目的策略

这个题目提出了几个相关问题:通才或专才意味着什么,他们对社会都有什么价值?社会真的需要更多通才吗,专才实际上被“高估”了吗?

有几个基本性的立场供你选择:是的,社会需要更多通才并且高估了专才的能力。不,相反的才是真实的。或者,这取决于多种因素。或者,二者都对今天的文明很重要,二者中的一个被高估了。 你的分析中可能会引用社会或国家中的特例,从社会的一方面或者多方面,或者是在不同的情形下。分析可能会将注意力放在通才和专才在传播、运输、政治、信息、技术领域所扮演的角色上。任何途径都是有道理的,只要你能运用相关的理由和例子来支持你的立场即可。

在你审视自己的立场之前,花一点时间再读一遍题目中的论述,为了分析它,考虑如下问题:
*•通才和专才的区别在哪里?他们的优势都在哪里?
*•这些区别通常存在于不同的专业或者情形下吗?是否有专才,例如,同样需要广泛的知识和综合的能力以在工作中有出色的表现?
*•专才和通才在他们的领域是如何行使其功能的?
*•社会应该怎样看待通才和专才的价值?专才是否在某些情况下被高估了,而在其他情况下却没有?
*•社会真的需要更多的通才吗?如果是这样,他们将会满足怎样的需求?  

现在你可以把你的想法组织成两段:
*•理由和例子用来支持你的论述
*•理由和例子用来支持相反的观点

如果你发现一个观点比另一个更具有说服力,那么就要考虑从那个看法扩展论述。当你建立了自己的论述,要时刻记住另一个,你可以驳斥的观点。


如果两组观点势均力敌,要考虑扩展一个立场,来支持更加有局限的或更加复杂的题目论述,而不是既定的那个题目论述。那么你就能够用理由和例子两方面来替你的立场辩护。

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* 所有的在本刊物的答卷是被按照原本完整出版的,包括错误、拼写错误等等,如果存在的话。

Essay Response *– Score 6

  In this era of rapid social and technological  change  leading to increasing life complexity and
psychological displacement,  both positive and negative effects among persons in Western society call for a balance in which there are both specialists and generalists.

  Specialists are necessary in order to allow society as a whole to properly and usefully assimilate
the masses of new information and knowledge that have come out of research and have been widely disseminated through mass global media. As the head of Pharmacology at my university once said (and I paraphrase):"I can only research what I do because there are so many who have come before me to whom I can turn for basic knowledge. It is only because of each of the narrowly focussed individuals at each step that a full and true understanding of the complexities of life can be had. Each person can only hold enough knowledge to add one small rung to the ladder, but together we can climb to the moon." This illustrates the point that our societies level of knowledge and technology is at a stage in which there simply must be specialists in order for our society to take advantage of the information available to us.

  Simply put, without specialists, our society would find itself bogged down in the Sargasso sea of
information overload. While it was fine for early physicists to learn and understand the few laws and ideas that existed during their times, now, no one individual can possibly digest and assimilate all of the knowledge in any given area.

  On the other hand, Over specialization means narrow focii in which people can lose the larger
picture.No one can hope to understand the human body by only inspecting one's own toe-nails. What we learn from a narrow focus may be internally logically coherent but may be irrelevant or fallacious within the framework of a broader perspective. Further, if we inspect only our toe-nails, we may conclude that the whole body is hard and white. Useful conclusions and thus perhaps useful inventions must come by sharing among specialists. Simply throwing out various discovieries means we have a pile of useless discoveries, it is only when one can make with them a mosaic that we can see that they may form a picture.

  Not only may over-specialization be dangerous in terms of the truth, purity and cohesion of
knowledge, but it can also serve to drown moral or universall issues. Generalists and only generalists can see a broad enough picture to realize and introduce to the world the problems of the environment. With specialization, each person focusses on their research and their goals. Thus, industrialization, expansion, and new technologies are driven ahead. Meanwhile no individual can see the wholisitc view of our globalexistence in which true advancement may mean stifling individual specialists for the greater good of all.

  Finally, over-specialization in a people's daily lives and jobs has meant personal and psychological compartmentalization. People are forced into pigeon holes early in life (at least by university) and must conciously attempt to consume external forms of stimuli and information in order not to be lost in their small and isolated universe. Not only does this make for narrowly focussed and generally pooprly-educated individuals, but it guarantees  a sense of loss of community, often followed by a feeling of psychological displacement and personal dissatisfaction.

  Without generalists, society becomes inward-looking and eventually inefficient. Without a society that recongnizes the impotance of braod-mindedness and fora for sharing generalities, individuals become isolated. Thus, while our form of society necessitates specialists, generalists are equally important.Specialists drive us forward in a series of thrusts while generalists make sure we are still on the jousting field and know what the stakes are.

Reader Commentary for Essay Response – Score 6

这是一篇出色的分析性写作——有深刻见解,理由合理充分,运用了非常有利的语言。介绍性的段落表明了作者关于论述的立场,并提供了作者将要论述立场的背景:"In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement . . ."

论述分为两部分,第一部分为说明专业化展示了一个有力的情况,即起初在医药领域的情况。第二部分展示了同样有力的、组织良好的情况来反驳基于以下三个理由的过分专业化:

*•逻辑(经过偏狭训练的专才经常会不了解全局)
*•道德(通才通常明白“更好的利益”所需的是什么)
*•个人(过早的专才化会导致心理损伤)

这篇文章细致的推论脉络,通过对证据的熟练运用被更进一步加强(来自权威医学调查的引证)和生动的隐喻(只看到了脚趾头而忽略了全身)

不仅是推论是使文章出彩,同时语言精准且修饰丰富(“被信息过多的马尾藻海困住”“一堆没用的发现”“专才强制我们前进,而通才确保我们一直在竞技场内”)审稿者通过过渡词和那些有组织作用,并不断把论述推进的理由被逐渐深入引导。这是对应主题非常好的答卷。


Essay Response – Score 5

  Specialists are not overrated today.More generalists may be needed,but not to overshadow the specialists.Generalists can provide a great deal of information on many topics of interest with a broad range of ideas.People who look at the overall view of things can help with some of the large problems our society faces today.But specialists are necessary to gain a better understanding of more in depth methods to solve problems or fixing things.

  One good example of why specialists are not overrated is in the medical field.Doctors are necessary for people to live healthy lives.When a person is sick,he may go to a general practitioner to find out the cause of his problems.Usually,this kind of"generalized"doctor can help most ailments with simple and effective treatments.Sometimes,though,a sickness may go beyond a family doctor's knowledge or the prescribed treatments don't work the way they should.When a sickness progresses or becomes diagnosed as a disease that requires more care than a family doctor can provide,he may be referred to a specialist. For instance,a person with constant breathing problems that require hospitalization may be suggested to visit an asthma specialist.Since a family doctor has a great deal of knowledge of medicine,he can decide when his methods are not effective and the patient needs to see someone who knows more about the specific problem;someone who knows how it begins,progresses,and specified treatments.This is an excellent example of how a generalied person may not be equipped enough to handle something as well as a specialized one can.

  Another example of a specialist who is needed instead of a generalist involves teaching.In grammar school,children learn all the basic principles of reading,writing,and arithematic.But as children get older and progress in school,they gain a better understanding of the language and mathematical processes.As the years in school increase,they need to learn more and more specifics and details about various subjects.They start out by learning basic math concepts such as addition,subtraction,division,and multiplication. A few years later,they are ready to begin algebraic concepts,geometry,and calculus.They are also ready to learn more advanced vocabulary,the principles of how all life is composed and how it functions.One teacher or professor can not provide as much in depth discussion on all of these topics as well as one who has learned the specifics and studied mainly to know everything that is currently known about one of these subjects.Generalized teachers are required to begin molding students at a very early age so they can get ready for the future ahead of them in gaining more facts about the basic subjects and finding out new facts on the old ones.

  These are only two examples of why specialists are not highly overrated and more generalists are not necessary to the point of overshadowing them.Generalists are needed to give the public a broad understanding of some things.But,specialists are important to help maintain the status,health,and safety of our society.Specialists are very necessary.

Reader Commentary for Essay Response – Score 5  

作者用讨论通才与专才的需求,展示了一个关于论述复杂性的充分扩展的分析。

论述根植于两个展开的精选的例子。第一个介绍段论述了医学通才与专才的必要性(一般的从业者),同时转移到了例证部分(呼吸问题和哮喘病专才)。从普遍到特殊的延伸同样在下一段以例子的形式来塑造。如此,论述把重点放在从小学到高中、从基础计算到微积分 a的教育过程上。

通过恰当的过渡,达到了流畅扩展的效果:“但是”,“通常”,“例如”等等。文章末尾再次提到了作者的论题。考虑到作者的语言掌握能力和良好的语法,一些明显的失误让这篇否则应该是6分的文章被排除在6分之外。问题来自于多方面,从代名词对对象指示不清("When a sickness progresses or becomes diagnosed, . . . he may be referred to a specialist")到平行结构的错误("how it begins, progresses and specified treatments"),再到松散的语法和不精确的语言("Generalized teachers are required to begin molding students at a very early age so they can get ready for the future ahead of them in gaining more facts about the basic subjects.")


Essay Response – Score 4

  Specialists are just what their name says: people who specialize in one part of a very general scheme of things.  A person can't know everything there is to know about everything. This is why specialists are helpful. You can take one general concept and divide it up three ways and have three fully developed different concepts instead of one general concept that no one really knows about. Isn't it better to really know something well, than to know everything half-way.

  Take a special ed teacher compared to a general ed teacher.  The general ed teacher knows how to deal with most students.  She knows how to teach a subject to a student that is on a normal level.But what would happen to the child in the back of the room with dyslexia?  She would be so lost in that general ed classroom that she would not only not learn, but be frustrated and quite possibly, have low self-esteem and hate school.  If there is a special ed teacher there who specializes in children with learning disabilities, she can teach the general ed teacher how to cope with this student as well as modify the curriculum so that the student can learn along with the others.The special ed teacher can also take that child for a few hours each day and work with her on her reading difficulty one-on-one, which a general ed teacher never would have time to do.

  A general ed teacher can't know what a special ed teacher knows and a special ed teacher can't know what a general ed teacher knows.  But the two of them working together and specializing in their own things can really get a lot more accomplished.  The special ed teacher is also trained to work on the child's self-esteem, which has a big part in how successful this child will be.  Every child in the United States of America has the right to an equal education.  How can a child with a learning disability receive the same equal education as a general ed student if there was no specialist there to help both teacher and child?

  Another thing to consider is how a committee is supposed to work together.  Each person has a special task  to accomplish and when these people all come together, with their tasks finished, every aspect of the community's work is completely covered.  Nothing is left undone.  In this case there are many different specialists to meet the general goal of the committee.

  When you take into account that a specialist contributes only a small part of the generalist aspect, it seems ridiculous to say that specialists are overrated.  The generalists looks to the specialists any time they need help or clarification on their broad aspect.  Specialists and generalists are part of the same system, so if a specialist is overrated, then so is a generalist.

Reader Commentary for Essay Response – Score 4  

这是一篇有足够分析的文章。在介绍段有点让人迷惑的、关于“专才”的定义之后,作者展示了切题的例子(专门教育的老师)来说明专才的重要性。这个例子占据了答卷的主要地位并对4分的成绩有积极的作用。

第二个例子,关于委员会如何运作,在说服性上就偏差一点。但是他似乎对阐述作者关于“通才”的定义有所帮助,即一个涵盖性的术语,意为专才对于一个主题所知道的全部集合However, it does seem to help clarify the writer's definition of "general" as an umbrella term meaning the total collection of what specialists know about a topic. (这句话怎么翻译啊!)

虽然作者关于通才与专才之间关系的观点不同寻常,但它们在文章结论中变得明晰。但是,这些观点没有被足够深度展开或者有更充足的关于逻辑的把握,从而应得到更高的分数。

尽管措辞偶尔不精确或口语化,但文章大体上没有错误,在句子结构、语法和用法方面几乎没有问题。总的来说,这份试卷清晰展示了足够的,对英语写作的控制能力。


Essay Response – Score 3

  To quote the saying, "Jack of all trades, master of none," would be my position on the statement.  I feel specialists in all areas of knowledge lead to a higher standard of living for everyone.  Specializing in different areas allows us to use each others talents to the highest level and maximize potential. As an example, if a person required brain surgery, would they rather have a brain surgeon or a general practitioner doing the work?  Clearly a specialist would do the better job and give the patient a chance at a better life.

  A university education starts by laying the groundwork for general knowledge but then narrows down to aspecific field.  General knowledge and a broad prospective are important, but if there was no focus on specific areas, our overall knowledge as a population would be seriously lessened.

  Another example of specialists not being overated would be international trade.  Not every nation can provide for themselves.They need to get products and ideas from other parts of the world because they are better at providing them.  This allows for a growing economy if two different nations can provide each other with two different products.If one country can produce oranges better than another, it should trade the oranges for the fish that it can not produce.  If generalizing was the normal thing to do and both countries tried to produce all kinds of products,  the countries would probably survive, but not have the standard of living they presently have.

Reader Commentary for Essay Response – Score 3  

作者观点明确:专才很重要且必要。但是对立场进行支持的理由和逻辑例证不足。

第一段展示了一个关于脑外科医生和普通从业者的恰当例子。但是第二段的关于大学教育逐渐的局限性,只包含了两个句子并且展开不完全,对推进作者的立场几乎没有帮助。

第三段提供了另一个例子,展开最完全。不幸的是,例子的逻辑不清晰,作者试着论证“专才”国家(一个更好的橘子生产者)比一个“通才”国家 更好(大概能和其他生产者生产的一样多)。通才国家,就像作者所述,与他人相比处于更低的地位。这个结论在逻辑上从作者的论述中形成,而且似乎与日常的现实不符。

尽管语言的不准确贯穿文章始终,但是作者的意思并不模糊,得到3分的主要原因是对论述扩展的不足和例子的不当使用。


Essay Response – Score 2

  In the situation of health I feel that specialists are very important. For example if a person has heart problems, choose a heart specialist over a genral medicine Dr. However if a person is having a wide range of syptoms, perhaps choose a Dr. with a wide range of experience might be more helpful. It also depends on the type of problem you are having.  For example I would not suggest taking a troubled child to a theorpist who specializes in marriage problems.  In some cases have a specialists helps to insure that you are getting the best possibly treatment.  On the other hand dealing with a person who has a wide range of experience may be able to find different ways of dealing with a particular problem.

  Since the quotation did not state exactely what type of specialist we are dealing with it is also hard to determine the importance of having a specialist is.  For example the could be health or problems with a car,or basically anything else. I feel that this information should not have been left out.  I guess the bottom line is that I feel sometimes a specialist is very important.

Reader Commentary for Essay Response – Score 2  

这是一篇错误严重的论述,文章支持专才,但是理由和例证都不具有说服力,“一个麻烦的孩子去接受在婚姻方面专家的治疗”的例子过分单纯化且离题,因为这是两个专才之间的不同而非一个专才和一个通才间的不同。

语言组织贫乏,论证中的惯用语难以理解,而且这不是一篇文章,作者展示了自己的立场,用薄弱的分析来扩展自己的立场,有些观点传达是清晰的。

Essay Response – Score 1

  I disagree with the statement about specialists, we need specialists who take individual areas and specialize. A generalists can pinpoint a problem. He or she cannot determine the magnitude of the problem. Aspecialist can find the root of the problem. When he or she has years working in that specific field. For example, when i got sick i went to a doctor. He did blood work, x-ray, talk to me, ect. He prescribed me a medicine.I got worst.  So i decided to go another doctor.  Now, i am doing great.  A specialist knows the facts right away. Otherwise, it will take longer or not at all.

Reader Commentary for Essay Response – Score 1  

这篇答卷展示了一种根本上的对题目的探讨不足

第一句话说明了作者与专家持相反态度,但是作者写出立场后,没有紧接着写出联系紧密的论述。某些观点似乎是相对抗的(e.g., "通才无法指出问题所在") 例证让人迷惑不解。如果文章解释说第一个(不成功)的医生是个通才,并且第二个(不成功)的医生是个专才,那么这个例子将会是有效的。但是,如文中所写,例证不清楚甚至有误导作用,结论陈述只是加在这些混乱之上的。

因为大多数的句子都是短句而且是突变的,所以它们连接的理由都是急变的,作者需要提供过渡词和理由来使论述的逻辑关系紧密相连。同时,基本错误的用法和语法错误普遍存在,但是最主要的就是论述之间的逻辑关系缺失。

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ARGU的分析


理解ARGU考试


分析一段论述”的考试需要考察你理解、分析、评价一段论述,并且能够在写作中清晰表达你的分析的能力。考试包括了一段简短的段落,其中包括通过展示一些背景理由和例证,来表达一些行动计划或者对事件的解读。你的任务就是用对其理由和例证主线的批判性的逻辑审查,来讨论作者的案例中,逻辑是否严谨。考试要求你仔细阅读题目短文。你可能想尽可能多读几遍,然后把你想充分在你的答卷中表达的要点做一个简短的笔记。在阅读过程中,你应该注意:

*•什么被作为证据、支持、或证据
*•什么被清晰地表述了、声称了或得出了什么结论
*•哪些被猜测和假设的,是没有正当理由或证据的
*•有哪些有必要被接着陈述的,实际上没有被陈述


另外,你应该考虑到论证的结构——这些因素被连接在一起,成为推论的脉络的方式。即你应该识别出在思考过程中分散的,有时是不清晰的步骤,同时考虑到段落与下一段连接是否在逻辑上是严谨的。追随着这条主线,寻找能够表明题目作者试图建立的逻辑关系中的过渡词或过渡短语(e.g., however, thus, therefore, evidently, hence, in conclusion).

要在ARGU考试中有出色表现,很重要的部分就是记住你没有被要求做什么。

你没有被要求讨论题目中的论述是否是真实的或者是精确的;取而代之的是,你被要求考虑题目中的陈述是否是有根据地被引出。
你没有被要求同意或不同意题目陈述中的立场,取而代之的是,你被要求评论基于题目中陈述的思想。
你没有被要求在被讨论的主题上表达自己的观点(就像在ISSUE考试中),你被要求评价题目中作者论述的逻辑严密性,并且通过此举说明大学教员认为对于在研究生院的成功学习很重要的品质:批判性思维,充分理解的阅读水平,和分析性写作的技巧。

分析一篇论述”首先是一种关于批判性思维的写作考试。因此,在你的批判法中展示出的分析性技巧对你的得分举足轻重。




理解写作背景:目的和读者


考试的目的在于看你能够多大程度上对他人所写的论述进行具有深度与洞察力的分析,能否把你的批判写作有效传达给有学术背景的读者群。你的读者包括大学和学院的教员,通过适用已经过鉴定的“分析论述”的评分标准(28页),教员们被培训成为GRE的审稿者。


为了对GRE审稿者是如何把AGRU的评分标准运用到实际文章当中的,你应该温习ARGU的范文答卷和审稿者的评论。尤其是5分或6分的范文,将会向你展示多种组织语言、扩展出有深度见解的批判的成功策略。你将会看大很多有效运用语言的范例。审稿者的评论讨论了关于分析性写作的特殊方面,例如想法包含使人信服的力量,扩展和支持,组织结构,句法的多变和语言的灵活运用。这些评论将会指向特别具有有效性和洞察力的方面,同时也会指出在答卷整体有效性中有降低作用的方面。






ARGU的准备工作



因为ARGU考试意在评估,你通过教育而获得的,分析性写作和非正式的推论能力,考试的设计既不需要任何的专业领域知识,也不会使受过某种专业训练的学生有特别的优势。虽然很多有关修辞学或写作的大学课本上会有关于非正式的逻辑和批判性思维的部分,并能使你觉得从中获益,但是这些可能比考试的要求更加复杂和专业化。你不需要知道写作的方法和专门化的条目。例如在一个议题中,一个小学校长可能会声称新操场设施改善了学生的出勤率,因为缺勤率在设施安装后已经下降了。你不需要看到校长在事后得出了结论,而因此支持这个谬误,你只需要看到还有其他可能的关于出勤率改善原因的解释,举一些常识性的例子,也许能说明什么是能够真正能证实这个结论的因素。例如,缺勤率下降因为天气不好。这肯能就排除了校长的结论的合理性。



尽管你不需要知道特殊的分析技巧和用辞,但是你应该熟悉ARGU考试指导和一些关键概念,包括以下几条:

*•替代的解释——一个同样能造成问题事件的可能的、有竞争力的解释;一个替代性的解释,可以削弱或加强原始解释,因为替代解释同样可以表明既成事实。
*•分析——把事物分解成组成它的部分的过程,为了了解这些部分是如何整合在一起并作为一个整体来运行的;同时也是一个通过这种分析达到的,以书面表达形式的陈述。
*•论述——一个或一系列的用理由和证据支持的主张;一条推理主线意在说明事物的正确或错误性。
*•假设——一个未经声明或未经验证的,却因为某人要保持一定的立场而必须坚持的看法;理所当然的事物,但是一定要真实以保证结论是真实的。
*•结论——在一连串推论后得出的最终结果,如果推论是合理的,那么主张的结果就是有效的、可靠的
*•反例——例子,无论真实或虚构,起到反驳或证明论述中的陈述为假的作用

准备“分析论述”考试很好的方法就是按照已经出版的ARGU题目进行写作练习。没有最好的联系方式,一些人喜欢不限30分钟时间限制的练习。如果你遵循这种方式,用一切你所需要的时间分析论述,无论你使用哪种方法,你都应该:

*•认真阅读题目论述——你可能会想多读几次
*•识别尽可能多的主张、结论和基础假设。
*•尽你所能想出多个替代的解释和反例
*•想出额外的证据来削弱或支持主张
*•问自己如果使推论更加有力的话,会给论述带来什么变化


用简单的笔记记下每一个这样的想法。当你尽可能分析时,仔细检查笔记同时把它们排好顺序以便讨论(例如用数字标记)。然后按顺序充分扩展每一个要点,写出批判性的评论。即使你不选择一点不漏地写出文章答卷,但你应该会发现练习一些题目文章和为你的答卷打个草稿是很有帮助的。当你写作更快且更自信时,你应该练习在30分钟内限时写作,以便于你能在真实考试有好的考试意识与节奏。例如,你不会想用尽一切力气去讨论一个观点或者提供多个同样的例子,而同时你在浪费处理其他重要要点的时间。


你肯能会想从写作教师、哲学老师,或在自己课上强调批判性思维重要性的老师那里获得一些反馈。跟你写同样主题的同学互换文章或跟他人按照评分标准来讨论文章也是 扩展你知识的好方法。不要只把注意力集中在得出“准确的分数”上,而是要看答卷是如何迎合或不符合每档分数的,你应该因此如何做才能有所提高。




如何论述里的解读数字、比率和统计数据


一些论述包含了数字、比率或者统计数据,作为支持论述结论的证据。例如,一个论述可能会说,一项社区竞赛今年没有去年受欢迎,原因是100人参加了今年的活动而去年有150人参加,即今年的到场率下降了33%。记住你的任务不是处理关于数字、比率或统计数据,这一点很重要。重要的是你应该衡量这些证据最终想要支持的结论。在上面的例子中,结论是今年的社区活动没有去年受欢迎。你应该问自己:100人和150人的差别支持这个结论吗?注意,在这个案例中,还有其他的解释;例如,今年的天气不好,今年的活动举办时间不方便大家参加,今年的活动花费上涨了,也许同时间还有别的受欢迎的活动也在举办。每个理由都能解释到场率的不同,也就能够驳斥今年活动“更不受欢迎的结论。相似的,百分比削弱或巩固结论与否,在于百分比是否反映了真实的数据。考虑一下一所学校的戏剧社应该得到更多的资助,因为他们的成员增加了100%。如果成员是从100人增加到200人,那么这个100%的增长比率将会很重要,同时,如果成员是从5人增加到10人,那么100%的增长率就会不那么重要了。记住,任何题目论述中的数字、比率和统计数据只是用来作为支持结论的证据,你应该考虑到它们是否真的支持了结论。



关于你答卷的形式


你有自由选择组织和扩展你批判性文章的方式,以便能有效地传达你对题目论述的分析。你的回答可以,但不是必须加入英语创作中的,或者大学文字密集课程上学到的特殊写作策略。GRE审稿者不会刻意追求专业化的扩展策略或写作风格,事实上,当GRE审稿者被训练的时候,他们就审阅过数以百计的ARGU答卷,尽管答卷的风格和内容不相同,但是都展示出了相似水平的批判性思维和分析性写作。审稿者将会看到,例如,有些6分水平的文章,开头简单总结了论述,然后就是明确的陈述和对批判性药店的扩展。审稿者认识到,通过分析和扩展要点来进行批判性写作,或通过辨识题目中论述的核心缺失,通过广泛展开批评,作者可以得到很高的分数。你也许会想看尤其是5分或6分的ARGU范文,看看作者是如何成功地扩展和组织他们的批判性文章的。

你应该按照你想要增强整体文章批判方面的有效性的方式,来做出对整体结构则组织形式的决定。这就意味着要用你认为,对于你的批判性文章尽可能多的或尽可能少的段落——例如,当你的讨论要转换一个新的分析点是,需要重起一个新段落。你可能想围绕题目论述本身来组织和批判,逐字逐句地讨论题目论述。或者你可能想先举出处于核心的可疑假设,然后再讨论题目论述的推论过程中,那些相关的缺陷。 相似的,你可能会想用例子帮助说明你批判中的要点或者推进你的讨论(记住,然而,考虑到你能够有效完成ARGU的能力,考试要考察的是你的批判性思维和分析写作,而非你处理问题的能力)重要的不是你答卷的形式,而是你能多大程度上有见识地分析题目论述和你能多大程度上清晰地把你的分析传达给那些有考试背景和学术背景的审稿者。




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Hospital statistics regarding people who go to the emergency room after roller skating accidents indicate the need for more protective equipment.  Within this group of people, 75 percent of those who had accidents in streets or parking lots were not wearing any protective clothing (helmets, knee pads, etc.) or any light-reflecting material (clip-on lights, glow-in-the-dark wrist pads, etc.).  Clearly, these statistics indicate that by investing in high-quality protective gear and reflective equipment, roller skaters will greatly reduce their risk of being severely injured in an accident.



关于这个议题的策略


这个论述引用了一个个别的医院统计数据来支持这个结论——“投资在高水准的保护工具和深思熟虑的设备上”将会减少由轮滑事故造成的严重伤害的风险。



在扩展你的分析的时候,你应该问自己这个医院的数据是否真的能够支持这个结论,你可能会问自己:
*•因轮滑事故而被送进急救室的比率是多少?
*•那些在轮滑事故后被送进急救室的人是否能代表普通轮滑者?


*•在轮滑事故中受伤的人有没有不去急诊的情况?
*•那些去急诊室的轮滑者受伤严重吗?
*•25%穿了保护装置的轮滑者跟75%没穿保护装置的轮滑者伤势严重程度一样吗?
*•在街道上或停车场轮滑比其他轮滑场所更危险吗?
*•中等质量的保护装置跟高品质的保护装置在减少轮滑事故带来的伤害风险方面同样有效吗?
*•比起保护装置,有没有另外的因素——例如天气状况,能见度,轮滑者技术水平——可能跟轮滑伤害的风险由更紧密的联系?

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单词总结后,再拿起来就像背新词~而且还有那么多~
草木的写作方法打印下来又看了一遍,因为学校晚上熄灯之后看电脑那叫一个费劲~
ARGU迟迟下不了笔,感觉自己能从他人那里学习更多,不过AWINTRO说的对,还是要亲自练一练才好。
TIME读了两篇,感觉不错,叙述平实,画了生词,希望生词越来越少
还干嘛了?我想不起来了~╮(╯▽╰)╭

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小灵易碎学习笔记
语法:虚拟语气


4、虚拟条件句的倒装
虚拟条件句的从句部分如果含有were, should, 或had, 可将if省略,再把were, should或had 移到从句句首,实行倒装。
例句:Were they here now, they could help us.=If they were here now, they could help us.

Had you come earlier, you would have met him.=If you had come earlier, you would have met him. 

Should it rain, the crops would be saved. =Were it to rain, the crops would be saved.
Should my car fail, I would have to return home on foot. = If my car should fail, I would have to return home on foot.
Had the letter been sent out, it would have ruined our friendship. = If the letter had been sent out, it would have ruined our friendship.

6.比较if only与only if:
only if表示"只有";if only则表示"如果……就好了"。If only也可用于陈述语气。
例句:I wake up only if the alarm clock rings. 只有闹钟响了,我才会醒。
   If only the alarm clock had rung.   当时闹钟响了,就好了。
   If only he comes early.       但愿他早点回来。

7、It is (high) time that
It is (high) time that 后面的从句谓语动词要用过去式或用should加动词原形,但should不可省略。
例句:It is time that the children went to bed.
   It is high time that the children should go to bed.


注意2:在一些惯用语之后经常需要用虚拟,来表示与事实相反或者难以实现的事情
这类习语有:as if , as though, but for, otherwise, without, wish, if only, for fear that, unless, in case, lest等

例句: But for your help, I would not have arrived here in time.
(如果没有你的帮助,我就不能准时到达)
Without your help, I would not arrive here in time.
She put a blanket over the baby for fear that he should catch cold. 她在那个婴儿身上盖上了毯子以免他着凉。
The bad man was put in the soft-padded cell lest he injure himself.

注意5:如suggest, insist不表示"建议" 或"坚持要某人做某事时",即它们用于其本意"暗示、表明"、"坚持认为"时,宾语从句用陈述语气。
例句:The guard at gate insisted that everybody obey the rules.


语法:主谓一致

主谓一致是指:
1) 语法形式上要一致,即单复数形式与谓语要一致。
2) 意义上要一致,即主语意义上的单复数要与谓语的单复数形式一致。
3) 就近原则,即谓语动词的单复形式取决于最靠近它的词语,
一般来说,不可数名词用动词单数,可数名词复数用动词复数。

2) 当主语是一本书或一条格言时,谓语动词常用单数。
3) 表示金钱,时间,价格或度量衡的复合名词作主语 时,通常把这些名词看作一个整体,谓语一般用单数。(用复数也可,意思不变。)
1) 用half of, part of, most of, a portion of 等词引起主语时,动词通常与of后面的名词,代词保持一致。



语法:冠词、数词
⑥用在江河、湖泊、海洋、山脉、群岛等的名称前。例如:     
the Yellow River 黄河the Black sea 黑海     
the West Lake 西湖 the Himalayas 喜马拉雅山     
the Tianshan Mountains 天山山脉 the Indian Ocean印度洋     


注意.   “the+姓氏复数”作主语,谓语动词用复数。 例如:     
The Greens are watching TV at the moment. 格林一家人现在正在看电视。     
The Whites do their cooking at home only at the weekend. 怀特夫妇仅在周末才在家做饭。      
  

⑨用在乐器前面。例如:     
the piano 钢琴   the violin 小提琴     

(12)用在表示方向的名词前。例如:     
in the east 在东方 in the west 在西部     
in the northeast of China 在中国的东北部 in the south 在南方     

(14)the常用于一些固定搭配中。例如:     
in the morning 在早上(上午) in the early morning 一大清早     
in the evening 在晚上 in the beginning 在开头(端)     
in the afternoon 在下午 by the way 顺便问     
in the end 最后,终于 the next day 第二天     
at the end of 在……快结尾的时候 the day after tomorrow 后天     
at the age of 在……岁的时候 in the front of 在……(内部)的前面     
the day before yesterday 前天 on the right(left)在右(左)边

1.在专有名词和不可数名词前。例如,Class Two,Tian’an Men Square,water

2.可数名词前已有作定语的物主代词(my,your,his,her等)、指示代词(this/these,that/those)、不定代词(some,any等)及所有格限制时。例如my book(正);my the book(误)

7.在表特定的公园,街道,车站,桥,学校等之前。例如:No.25 Middle School

8.某些固定词组中不用冠词。

(2)名词词组:day and night日日夜夜;brother and sister兄弟姐妹;hour after hour时时刻刻;here and there到处
(3)介词词组:in surprise;on foot;on duty;at work;on time;in class;on show;in bed等

六.用与不用冠词的差异

in hospital住院/in the hospital在医院里
go to sea出海/go to the sea去海边
on earth究竟/on the earth在地球上,在世上
in front of在……(外部的)前面/in the front of在……(内部的)前面
take place发生/take the place(of)代替
at table进餐/at the table在桌子旁
by sea乘船/by the sea在海边
in future从今以后,将来/in the future未来
go to school(church…)上学(做礼拜…)/go to the school(church…)到学校(教堂…)去
on horseback骑着马/on the horseback在马背上
two of us我们当中的两人/the two of us我们两人(共计两人)
out of question毫无疑问/out of the question不可能的,办不到的
next year明年/the next year 第二年
a teacher and writer一位教师兼作家(一个人)/a teacher and a writer一位教师和一位作家(两个人)



数词

一.基数词

基数词相当于名词,在句中可做主语、表语、定语、状语等。如:
Three of my classmates are from Shanghai.
I am twenty this year.
They have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon.

二.序数词

1)序数词的构成:
★大多数的序数词是由基数词加-th构成。如:seven—seventh;ten—tenth
★以-t结尾的基数词只在词尾加-h。如:eight—eighth
★以-ve结尾的基数词改-ve为f再加-th。如:five—fifth;twelve—twelfth
★以-y结尾的基数词改-y为-ie再加-th。如:twenty—twentieth,thirty—thirtieth
★几十几的序数词只在个位数体现。如:twenty-one—twenty-first;thirty-three—thirty-third
★特殊的序数词:
one—first;two—second;three—third; nine—ninth

5)序数词前加冠词“a”表示“再一次”。如:Can I try a second time?
6)在hundred,thousand,million,billion前有数词时为实数意义,它们的词尾不能加复数。前无数词时为虚数意义,hundred,thousand,million,billion可加复数,并可和of连用,构成短语。如:five hundred students;millions of people

四.分数的构成

分子用基数词,分母用序数词,分子大于1时,分母加s,如:
1/5:one fifth
2/3:two thirds
2-:two and three quarters

五.小数的表示法

0.09:point zero nine
2.7:two point seven

六.百分数的表达法

90%:ninety percent
0.5%:point five percent

七.倍数表达法

表示两倍时用twice,表示三倍以上的倍数时用times。如:
The earth is 49 times the size of the moon.
This desk is twice as large as that one.

八.算式表达法:

5+6:five plus six(or five and six)
7-6:seven minus six
2×3:two multiplied by three(or two times three)
8/4:eight divided by four



2)如果名词词组中心词是“分数或百分数+of-词组”,谓语动词的单、复数形式取决于of-词组中名词或代词的单、复数形式:如果of-词组中名词或代词是单数或不可数名词,谓语动词用单数形式;如果of-词组中名词或代词是复数,谓语动词也用复数形式。如:
Two thirds of the earth is covered with water.
Two thirds of the people present are against the plan.

3)如果主语是many a,more than one+单数名词构成,尽管从意义上看是复数,但谓语动词仍用单数形式。如:
Many a student in this class has hoped a long break.

4)a+单数名词+or two做主语,谓语动词用单数形式。one or two+复数名词,谓语动词用复数形式。如:
A word or two is missed in the sentence.
One or two words are missed in the sentence.


语法:情态动词
情态动词在托福写作中的运用

托福的写作中关于情态动词的使用经常存在漏用和误用的情况,而大作文本身就是要求写对某个事物或者现象的评价,所以不可避免要出现带有情态动词的观点句。下面是常见的问题的分析:
首先是情态动词,尤其是Will的漏掉。中国考生受汉语影响,一提到“将来”才会有意识地用will, 实际上will可以表达“能、将、会、要、就”等多种意义。只是涉及到这样的地方很多学员就把这几个词当作虚词忽略掉了,以至于经常出现“观点”与“事实”不分的句子, 如:
Riding bicycles reduces air pollution.
如果没有情态动词,这个句子就是一个表示目前存在的状态或者事实,而不表示个人对骑自行车的评价。
其它的常见的漏用还体现在与if引导的状语从句一起连用的主句中, so that或者 in order that引导的从句,或者是与without, in case of等介词短语连用的主句,不论条件还是目的都是写作中经常出现的句式。如:
If I have time tomorrow, I drive to pick you up.
Xiao Zhang gets up very early so that he catches the earliest bus to work.
Without enough time to stay inside campus, college students don't have time to improve themselves.
其次是情态动词的误用,主要问题是中国学生在亮观点时对“can”情有独钟,而英式的学风历来讲究严谨,像can 这样语气过于绝对的表达最好换成may/ will, 或者是语气更委婉的might/would probably等,同时还要搭配一定程度的副词,如:
indulgence in computer games can lead to social violence especially of teenagers.上句中can不如might用起来更加客观,因为几乎每个小孩都玩游戏,但绝不是每个人都会犯罪。
另外一个容易误用的词是should,多表示根据社会风俗习惯个人的责任,而在比较正式的议论文写作中,多数句子是以客观事物做主语的, 所以用should就有些不太恰当,如:
To tackle the problem of youth crimes related with computer games, advertisement enterprises should restrict the large-scale promotion.
一般我们会用另外一个更客观性的短语be to do来代替, 或者是shall,但是这里的shall不是用于第一人称后的将来时符号,而表示的是一种情态。
至于must, 因为语气实在强硬,所以一般在社会性的问题的论述上我们要慎用,建议多换成need/ shall/ be to do 或者是be expected to do形式。如:
To help students get better employment, universities must increase the skillful courses.
虽然情态动词不是关系是否上6分的语法项目,但也会在一定程度上影响到分数,所以希望能引起足够的重视。



语法:倒装
2、有些让步状语从句中又是也有倒装的情况,(主要把标语或部分谓语提前):
Clever though he was, he couldn’t conceal his eagerness for praise.
Try as I would, I couldn’t make her change her mind.
Talented as he is, he is not yet ready to turn professional.
Search as they would, they could find no one in the wood


【一些谓语前移的情况】
1、<状语前置>有些句子没有宾语且主语又比较长。又是可把状语提前,而把主语放在谓语后面去。
Before him lay miles of undulating moorland: 他前面是一片高低起伏的荒原
After the banquet came a firework display in the garden. 宴会后花园里燃放了烟火。
From the distance came occasional shots. 从远处传来零星的枪声。
In the distance could be seen the purple mountains. 远处可以看见紫色的群山。
2、为了描绘更生动,有些与介词同行的副词可以移到句首,把主语放在谓语后面。
Up went the arrow into the air. 嗖的一声箭射上了天。
She rang the bell. In came a girl she had not seen before. 她按铃,进来一个她从未见过的姑娘。
Down flew the eagle to seize the chicken 老鹰飞下来抓小鸡。


1、进行时态中的分词有时可移到句首,来对这个动作加以强调。
Lying on the floor was a boy aged about seventeen.
Standing beside the table was an interpreter
Watching the performances were mostly foreign tourists.

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单词④——①——③——④
开始早起锻炼身体了,好开始,要继续↖(^ω^)↗
忍不住又看了遍草木的写作基础,感觉每次看都有新的体验和感悟,写得真是好,说真的。

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语法:名词
2)单复同形 如:
  deer,sheep,fish,Chinese,Japanese
  li,jin,yuan,two li,three mu,four jin 
但除人民币元、角、分外,美元、英镑、法郎等都有复数形式。
如:
a dollar, two dollars; a meter, two meters

6)
另外还有一些名词,其复数形式有时可表示特别意思,如:goods货物,waters水域,fishes(各种)鱼

2)
抽象名词有时也可数。
  four freedoms 四大自由
  the four modernizations四个现代化
  物质名词和抽象名词可以借助单位词表一定的数量。
  如:
  a glass of water 一杯水 
  a piece of advice 一条建议

1) 用复数作定语。
  
如:sports meeting 运动会
  students reading-room 学生阅览室 
  talks table 谈判桌 
  the foreign languages department 外语系

4) 数词+名词作定语时,这个名词一般保留单数形式。
 如:two-dozen eggs 两打/(二十四个鸡蛋) 
     a ten-mile walk 十里路 
     two-hundred trees 两百棵树
      a five-year plan. 一个五年计划
个别的有用复数作定语的,如: a seven-years child

1.容易误用为复数的不可数名词:(这些名词一般不能用作复数,谓语动词用单数)
  advice 建议,忠告 living 生活,生计
  equipment 装备,设备 progress 前进,发展
  furniture 家具,设备 scenery 风景,景色
  information 通知;信息 machinery 机器,机械
  knowledge 知识,学问 traffic 交通流量
  baggage / luggage 行李,皮箱 trouble 烦恼,麻烦
  cash 现金 thunder 雷声,轰隆声
  apparatus 仪器 weather 天气,处境
  clothing 衣服 work 工作,劳动
  paper 纸,钞票 luck 运气,幸运
    technology 工艺,技术 jewelry 珠宝

5. and连接两个名词表示一个概念做主语时,谓语用单数; 若表示的是多个不同的概念时,谓语动词用复数。
  War and peace is a constant theme in literature.
  战争与和平是文学中永恒的主题。(War and peace是一对概念,看作一个主题)
  同例: ham and eggs n.火腿蛋 s
               team and bread
            law and order
               bread and butter
           apple pie and ice cream
               folk and knife
           wheel and axle 轮轴
               needle and thread
             love and hate
               egg and rice 蛋炒饭


8. 由 every …and every …; each … and each…; no … and no…; many a …and many a … 等连接的并列主语,谓语动词用单数。
  Every man and every woman working here is getting along well with me.
  No difficulty and no hardship has discouraged him.
9. 由 all of, most of, half of , a lot of, part of 等加名词构成的主语,谓语动词的数取决于该名词的单复数。
   All of us are going to see the game.
   All of his time was spent on gambling
   Three-fourths of the people are illiterate.
   同例: plenty of…, one fourth of…, none of…, some of …, majority of …,         percent of …, the rest of …, reminder of …。

11. 定语从句的谓语动词注意与先行词保持一致,但注意the only one of… 的用法。
   One of those men likes to drive fast.
   One of those men who like to drive fast is her son.
   He is the only one of those men who likes to drive fast.
13. the + adj / v-ed 表示一类人时, 用复数谓语动词; 表示抽象概念时, 谓语动词用单数。
  The sick have been cured and the lost have been found.
  病人得到了医治,失踪的也找回来了。
  同例: the poor / dumb / innocent / guilty / unemployed / aged / oppressed / exploited…
  We can do the difficult first. The impossible takes a little longer.
  我们先从难题开始,不会的可能花的时间长一些。
  The best is yet to come. 好戏还在后头。
15. 当主语被one ( a ) and a half 修饰时,谓语动词用单数。
  One and a half apples is left on the plate.

16. 当主语由 a series of…, a portion of …, a species of …, a kind of …, a sequence of …, a chain of…, a piece of … 加名词(单数或复数)构成时, 谓语用单数。
  A series of lectures on psychology is said to be given by Mr. Li.
  A large portion of her poems was published after her death.

语法:时态
关于时态问题,尤其是应用到AW的写作中,请注意三点:
1、基础用法不要出错
2、彼此衔接的时候要保证一个通顺语法顺序
3、作文主时态没有严格限制,一般现在时或这个过去时都可以,选择你觉得最好驾驭最不容易出错而且预期rater可以比较好理解的一个时态去做主时态

语法:连词
第二句:and 连接两个并列的动词不定式,第二个不定式往往省略to,因此sang 应改为 sing

1) but表示转折,while表示对比。

Some people love cats, while others hate them.

典型例题
--- Would you like to come to dinner tonight?
--- I'd like to, ___ I'm too busy.
A. and B. so C. as D. but
答案D。but与前面形成转折,符合语意。而表并列的and, 结果的so,原因的as都不符合句意。

6 比较so和 such

其规律由so与such的不同词性决定。such 是形容词,修饰名词或名词词组,so是副词,只能修饰形容词或副
词。so 还可与表示数量的形容词many,few,much, little连用,形成固定搭配。

so + adj. such + a(n) + n.
so + adj. + a(n) + n. such + n. (pl.)
so + adj. + n. (pl.) such +n. (pl.)
so + adj. + n. [不可数]such +n. [不可数]

so foolish such a fool
so nice a flower such a nice flower
so many/ few flowers such nice flowers
so much/little money. such rapid progress
so many people such a lot of people


so many 已成固定搭配,a lot of 虽相当于 many,但 a lot of 为名词性的,只能用such搭配。

so…that与such…that之间的转换既为 so与such之间的转换。


语法:从句
用it作形式主语的that-从句有以下四种不同的搭配关系:
    a. It + be +形容词+ that-从句
     It is necessary that…  有必要……
     It is important that…  重要的是……
     It is obvious that…  很明显……  

    b. It + be + -ed 分词+ that-从句
     It is believed that…     人们相信……
     It is known to all that…   从所周知……
     It has been decided that…  已决定……

    c. It + be +名词+ that-从句
     It is common knowledge that…  ……是常识
     It is a surprise that…   令人惊奇的是……
     It is a fact that…     事实是……

    d. It +不及物动词+ that-分句
     It appears that…      似乎……
     It happens that…      碰巧……
     It occurred to me that…   我突然想起……

2)关系代词的省略
在从句中作宾语的关系代词常可省略。关系代词紧跟介词,作介词宾语时不可用that,只可用which或whom引导从句,并且不可省略,但当介词位于宾语从句句末时,作为介词宾语的关系代词仍可用that,也可省略。
This is one of those things with which we have to put up.
This is one of those things (which\that) we have to put up with.



比较:because, since, as和for

1) because语势最强,用来说明人所不知的原因,回答why提出的问题。当原因是显而易见的或已为人们所知,就用as或 since。
  I didn't go, because I was afraid.
  Since /As the weather is so bad, we have to delay our journey.

2) 由because引导的从句如果放在句末,且前面有逗号,则可以用for来代替。但如果不是说明直接原因,而是多种情况加以推断,就只能用for。
  He is absent today, because / for he is ill.
  He must be ill, for he is absent today.
结果状语从句引导结果状语从句的连词有:so...that, such...that, so that, that, so等。
Mickey Mouse is so attractive that the children are reluctant to leave.

比较: so和 such

 其规律由so与such的不同词性决定。such 是形容词,修饰名词或名词词组,so 是副词,只能修饰形容词或副词。 so 还可与表示数量的形容词many, few, much, little连用,形成固定搭配。
 so foolish       such a fool       
 so nice a flower    such a nice flower 
  
 so many / few flowers  such nice flowers    
 so much / little money. such rapid progress   
 so many people     such a lot of people 
 
( so many 已成固定搭配,a lot of 虽相当于 many,但 a lot of 为名词性的,只能用such搭配。)
  so…that与 such…that之间的转换既为 so与such之间的转换。
  The boy is so young that he can't go to school.
  He is such a young boy that he can't go to school

第一组错题
2. I believe _____ you’ve done your best and _____ things will improve very soon.
A. whether; that        B.  不填; that       C.  that; which        D.  if; that
正确答案B

6. _____ he was, he sat up late studying last night.
A. As tired        B.  Though tired       C.  Tired as        D.  Tired although
正确答案C,我也有疑问,为什么不是B

第二组错题
4. When she came back from abroad, Lucy told us about the cities and the people _____ she had visited.
A. that        B.  who        C.  where        D.  which
正确答案A

5. Because of the traffic jam _____ I was caught, I was late for the meeting.
A. by which        B.  in which        C.  that        D.  where
正确答案C

第三组
话说这个13题是什么状况?
13. It was an unforgettable moment that our volleyball team won the gold medal again.
        A. that        B.  which        C.  when        D.  while

7. Mr. Smith wanted to buy the house and he told me that _____ the house cost, it would be _____ it.
A. however; worth        B.  how much; worth       C.  whatever; worth        D.  what; worthy
正确答案C,记住了 be worth it ,不是be worthy of.

18. I felt somewhat disappointed and was about to leave, _____ something occurred, which attracted my attention.
        A. unless        B.  until        C.  when        D.  while
正确答案C

19. Determination is a kind of quality --- and that is _____ it takes to do anything well.
A. that        B.  which        C.  why        D.  what
正确答案D

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AWINTRO笔记
①判卷子的是大学里的教员,所以他们是以研究生的基础写作水平为判断标准的,切记。

②考场及评分过程中的规则:
  *•答卷时随机分派给审稿者的
  *•所有可辨别身份的考试者信息对审稿者都是隐藏的
  *•每份答卷由两个审稿者评分
  *•一个审稿者不知道另一个可能已经决定的分数
  *•整个评分过程要求每份答卷得到两个审稿者完全相同或相近的分数,任何其他情况下的分数组合将会交由第三个审稿者评判

③ISSUE有用的几个自问自答
  *•确切地说,什么是核心问题
  *•我同意题目中所述的任何哪个部分吗?为什么同意或为什么不同意?
  *•这个论述的假设成立吗?如果成立,那么假设合理吗?
  *•题目中的论述只在特定条件下存在吗?如果是的话,条件是什么?
  *•我需要解释我是如何解读题目中确定的条目或者概念吗?
  *•如果我确定了我在论述中的立场,什么样的原因能支持我的立场
  *•什么样的例子——真实的或虚构的——能用来阐明理由和提升我的观点呢?哪些例子最强有力

④ISSUE范文的观察:整体感觉是逻辑条理十分清晰,支持理由也是十分有力,有大量例子,且与支持理由有密切的对应关系,感觉逻辑连接词很多,读起来比较顺畅,也觉得成文比较合理,学习学习。

⑤ARGU有用的几个自问自答
  *•替代的解释——一个同样能造成问题事件的可能的、有竞争力的解释;一个替代性的解释,可以削弱或加强原始解释,因为替代解释同样可以表明既成事实。
  *•分析——把事物分解成组成它的部分的过程,为了了解这些部分是如何整合在一起并作为一个整体来运行的;同时也是一个通过这种分析达到的,以书面表达形式的陈述。
  *•论述——一个或一系列的用理由和证据支持的主张;一条推理主线意在说明事物的正确或错误性
  *•假设——一个未经声明或未经验证的,却因为某人要保持一定的立场而必须坚持的看法;理所当然的事物,但是一定要真实以保证结论是真实的
  *•结论——在一连串推论后得出的最终结果,如果推论是合理的,那么主张的结果就是有效的、可靠的
  *•反例——例子,无论真实或虚构,起到反驳或证明论述中的陈述为假的作用

⑥如何论述里的解读数字、比率和统计数据
一些论述包含了数字、比率或者统计数据,作为支持论述结论的证据。例如,一个论述可能会说,一项社区竞赛今年没有去年受欢迎,原因是100人参加了今年的活动而去年有150人参加,即今年的到场率下降了33%。记住你的任务不是处理关于数字、比率或统计数据,这一点很重要。重要的是你应该衡量这些证据最终想要支持的结论。在上面的例子中,结论是今年的社区活动没有去年受欢迎。你应该问自己:100人和150人的差别支持这个结论吗?注意,在这个案例中,还有其他的解释;例如,今年的天气不好,今年的活动举办时间不方便大家参加,今年的活动花费上涨了,也许同时间还有别的受欢迎的活动也在举办。每个理由都能解释到场率的不同,也就能够驳斥今年活动“更不受欢迎的结论。相似的,百分比削弱或巩固结论与否,在于百分比是否反映了真实的数据。考虑一下一所学校的戏剧社应该得到更多的资助,因为他们的成员增加了100%。如果成员是从100人增加到200人,那么这个100%的增长比率将会很重要,同时,如果成员是从5人增加到10人,那么100%的增长率就会不那么重要了。记住,任何题目论述中的数字、比率和统计数据只是用来作为支持结论的证据,你应该考虑到它们是否真的支持了结论。



看AWINTRO觉得非常有用,因为看到的很多细节问题都是自己以前忽略的,希望能够结合AWINTRO和草木的写作基础知识,把这些概括性的写作技巧内化在自己的文章里,加油~!!!

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