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25"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction—in other words, to make things as simple as possible."
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It seems that most people are asking for bigger and more complex things, especially from the field of electronic products, in this modern society infused with high technology probably because these things can provide us refreshing experience we have never got before. Huge rear projection televisions, multi-function mobile phones, and the newly released iPAD, are welcomed by mass consumers. Obviously, non-professional engineers certainly cannot develop these products, and this is why I may claim that I partially agree with the topic while going along with the other half asserting to make things as simple as possible requires real effort and courage nowadays.

Professional fields need professionists to decorate them properly and sufficiently. Those who have been trained in relevant domains are more likely to do right things than those who have not. Torrentially original and, as well, applicable ideas seem to be much more approachable to a skillful, experienced hand due to knowing the market well and exactly what people are eager for.To take the Microsoft Windows family as an example, only in a couple of years has the Microsoft stuff developed different versions of Windows for various users, which subsequently has been all installed widely over the world, such as Windows Server, Windows Professional, Windows Vista Basic, etc. In addition, particular courses and time to gain acquaintance with what they are managing are also possibly demanded for the amateurs, which may be a waste of fund and opportunity to succeed ahead of other companies.

When Microsoft continued its forestallment of personal computers in operating systems by making it complex, Apple was charging out of the PC market toward the opposite direction in the current society with one hundred and twenty percent of effort and courage----developing Mac OS X, one based on Unix that leaves users more space to deal with their own business than Windows by subtracting its functions and thus increases the speed and stability, after their failure in sales with former systems like Mac OS 8. And finally Mr. Jobs succeeded, according to the data showing that Apple’s share of the operating system market is increasing. Distinctly, if Jobs did not have enough confident and try his best to walk out of the shadow of Microsoft, the idea of Mac OS X may never be realized and as a result, be swept away with Netscape, which was beaten by Microsoft and had disappeared for about ten years.

Perhaps the era we are experiencing presently is asking for more fresh objects from us as exactly what we are acting to the era. Making things as simple as possible with full effort and courage is probably boosted by the modern society today instead of making those bigger and more complex, even in a properly, rightly professional way.
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It seems that most people are asking for bigger and more complex things, especially from(in) the field of electronic products, in this modern society infused with high technology probably because these things can provide us refreshing experience we have never got before. Huge rear projection televisions, multi-function mobile phones, and the newly released iPAD, are welcomed by mass consumers. Obviously, non-professional engineers certainly cannot develop these products, and this is why I may claim that I partially agree with the topic while going along with the other half asserting to make things as simple as possible requires real effort and courage nowadays.

Professional fields need professionists(professional即为专业人士的意思) to decorate(enrich更为贴切) them properly and sufficiently. Those who have been trained in relevant domains are more likely to do right(不是很贴切,但又想不出来该用什么了,significant?meaningful?) things than those who have not. Torrentially original and, as well, applicable ideas seem to be much more approachable to a skillful, experienced hand due to knowing the market well and exactly what people are eager for.To take the Microsoft Windows family as an example, only in a couple of years has the Microsoft stuff developed different versions of Windows for various users, which subsequently has been all installed widely over the world, such as Windows Server, Windows Professional, Windows Vista Basic, etc. In addition, particular courses and time to gain acquaintance with what they are managing are also possibly demanded for the amateurs, which may be a waste of fund and opportunity to succeed ahead of other companies. (不太明白与主题的complexsimple有什么直接关系?)

When Microsoft continued its forestallment of personal computers in operating systems by making it complex, Apple was charging out of the PC market toward the opposite direction in the current society with one hundred and twenty percent of effort and courage----developing Mac OS X, one based on Unix that leaves users more space to deal with their own business than Windows by subtracting its functions and thus increases the speed and stability, after their failure in sales with former systems like Mac OS 8. And finally Mr. Jobs succeeded, according to the data showing that Apple’s share of the operating system market is increasing. Distinctly, if Jobs did not have enough confident and try his best to walk out of the shadow of Microsoft, the idea of Mac OS X may never be realized and as a result, be swept away with Netscape, which was beaten by Microsoft and had disappeared for about ten years. (还是感觉跑题了呢?不过,我用的就是Mac OS X,不错:)

Perhaps the era we are experiencing presently is asking for more fresh objects from us as exactly what we are acting to the era. Making things as simple as possible with full effort and courage is probably boosted by the modern society today instead of making those bigger and more complex, even in a properly, rightly professional way.

隐约可以知道要写的大概意思,不过有些模糊了,需要抓住重点说清楚。不过,这篇是不好把握主题,我也纠结了。。。
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missingusa + 5 + 2 谢谢批改, 辛苦了~

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发表于 2010-2-12 01:17:15 |只看该作者
感觉mac 系统掉色灰常厉害呢。。。无奈。。。
组长,什么时候把我的也拍了吧。。。
我们这组有点冷清咧~
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missingusa + 1 手头还有篇A写完就来改~不好意思晚了>

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