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发表于 2010-9-2 22:22:05 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

When it comes to the main content of televisions and movies, people's opinions diverge considerably on this point.
Some hold the perspective that televisions and movies should present educational content to all the audiences,
which is casted doubt on by others, who maintain that it is more reasonable and rational to transmit recreation and
relaxation. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to the view that the former is my cup of tea.

Firstly, it can expand our horizon and enrich our knowledge if televisions and movie companies put educational
content on their programs and movies. And so vivid and impressive are knowledge, expertise and skills that people
are equipped with a wide range of abilities, such as critical thinking ability, innovative thinking ability and
logic thinking ability, which are included in the educational televisions and movies. When it comes to this function
that televisions and movies remains, I can readily come up with some eminent programs I have ever watched ranging
from National Geographic to Discovery. And it is National Geographic that brought me to the Amazon Forest which
I had never seen before when I was 10 years old. Until now can I tell the particular species that the Amazon Forest
owns out.

Secondly, a survey by SARFT(The State Administration of Radio, Film, and Television) points out that almost 50
percent of people are children and youth from 5 to 18 years old among the audiences, and they spend 5 hours at
average watching TV and movies every day. What's more, they are on the way of forming their personalities, sense
of worth and sense of the world. For these reasons, we should transmit right information and educational programs
to them during this period. So it seems that educational televisions and movies exercise a favorable influence on
children and youth and play an decisive role in the process. Therefore, it is essential to endow televisions and
movies with educational content.

Admittedly, recreation and relaxation are also a crucial part of televisions and movies. With the quickening pace
of life, competition goes increasingly ruthless and relentless, imposing tremendous pressure on each and every
individual. Thus, it is due to the recreation and relaxation televisions and movies bring about that people relieve
and eliminate the stress on their shoulder.

Nevertheless, the necessarity and advantages to mainly present educational content outweigh those of recreation and
relaxation on TV and movies. Thus, I reinforce my perspective that televisions and movies should mainly present
educational content.

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发表于 2010-9-2 22:22:39 |只看该作者

With the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly ruthless and relentless, imposing tremendous
pressure on each and every individual. Therefore, more and more people hold the perspective that it is essential
to work for an employer forever because of the stability it brings about, which can make us immune from the
considerable stress. However, as far as I am concerned, I am inclined to the view that changing jobs more often
is more commonsensical and reasonable.

Firstly, changing jobs serves as a catalyst for our cultivation and improvement of the ability of adaption to new
circumstances and other crucial abilities. If a person quits his or her job and finds a new one, not only will he
or she be undoubtedly faced with different new workmates, boss and many other people, but also setbacks, difficulties
and other unhappy things. And it is the ability of adaption to new circumstances that plays an important role in his
or her association with others and dealing with these unhappy things. For this reason, after several job-hoppings
people are capable of endowing the ability of adaption to new circumstances. Moreover, since a large amount of
difficulties lying ahead of job-hoppers to solve if they are going to change jobs, their adverse quality has been
improved as well. I can think of no better illustration of Li Jiacheng, who is a rich man ranking 20th in the Forbes.
When he was a young man, he did many jobs ranging from selling flowers to investing real estate. And he once said,
"It is my perseverence and persistence obtaining from different experiences as different roles that contributes to
my success today."

Secondly, changing jobs can help us understand and be acquainted with society and culture effectively and efficiently.
Because competition are increasingly intense, one who intends to stand out of millions of employees must equip with
adequate knowledge and experience about society and culture. Thus, hardly can I imagine the lack of knowledge and experience
about society and culture, which are in a person who works for an employer all his lifetime. This can be aptly exemplified
and illustrated by the case of the failure of many university start-ups, who just work for a company for a few years or
even have no work experience. And their failure mainly owes to the short of knowledge and experience about society and culture.

Admittedly, there are also advantages that working for only an employer owns. For example, as the introduction says, changing
jobs often cannot equal the stability that working for an employer brings about. Nevertheless, the merits of changing jobs
often outweigh those of working for only an employer owing to cultivation and improvement of the ability of adaption to new
circumstances and other crucial abilities and knowledge and experience about society and culture. Thus, I reinforce my
perspective that changing jobs often is more better than working for only an employer.

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发表于 2010-9-4 16:10:27 |只看该作者

When talking about the leisure time that people will own after 20 years, people's opinions diverge considerably with a large amount of reasons.
Some of them hold the perspective that we will not have more leisure time because of increasing pressure on us, which is brought by work, study,
family and society. However, as far as I am concerned, I am inclined to the view that we will undoubtedly have more and more leisure time.

Firstly, there is a popular consensus that the development of high technology has changed our life remarkably and noticeably. It is the different
kinds of hi-tech products that save a lot of time in our life, such as telephones, computers and printers. This can be aptly exemplified and
illustrated by the case of telephone's emergence. In the past, if we wanted to find a person to deal with some affairs, we needed to go to his or
her home on foot or even rided on horseback for hundreds of miles away. But now we just need to press buttons on our cellphones to readily talk with
him or her about the things we want to deal with. Therefore, it is the emergence of telephones that changes our life a lot and save much time for us.
So with the rapid development of high technology, hardly can I imagine the convenience and quickness that a new high-tech product will take to me.

Secondly, the technology itself can bring us with countless recreation and relaxation. At the same time, the work itself has leisure time as well.
Lending credence to my position is the example of Mp3, which can play music wherever and whenever you are. Nowadays, not only can we see people
listen to music, such as pop music, jayz music and blue music when they are free, but also we can easily find many do this when they are driving,
writing and even designing a cartoon. So as this trend develops, the work, to a large extent, will be a leisure pattern as well after 20 years.

Admittedly, as the introduction says, with the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly ruthless and rentless, imposing tremendous
pressure on each and every individual. Therefore, people will work and study more harder and spend more time on them to keep pace with the times
so that the leisure time that people own will decline consequently.

Nevertheless, the leisure time that the development of high technology brings outweighs the decline of that of increasing pressure. Thus, I reinforce
my perspective that people will have more leisure time after 20 years.

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本帖最后由 Titchy 于 2010-9-12 20:54 编辑

When it comes to whether it is essential to offer every student basic science classes or not, people's opinions diverge considerably on
this controversial topic. There are a large amount of them holding the perspective that it isn't necessary to ask all students to
learn science courses. However, as far as I am concerned, I am inclined to the opposite view of these people.

Firstly, taking basic science courses exercises a favorable influence on our different kinds of abilities, such as independent thinking
ability, innovative thinking ability and analytical and critical thinking ability. I can think of no better illustration than the scene
that when I deal with a mathematic problem by myself, the independent thinking ability is increasing unconsciously. And to solve the
problem, I must analyse the main purpose of it carefully and seriously. So this process enhances my analytical and critical thinking
ability. At last, it is a new solution which is different from ordinary methods to solve the problem, coming to my mind, that serves
a catalyst to my innovative thinking ability.

Secondly, it is the experiments that foster our collaboration spirit, communication ability and valuable friendship, which make our
life colorful, dynamic and impressive. Lending credence to my position is the example of Yang Zhenning, who is a famous physics scientist
in the world and has got the Nobel Prize. He once said," Every time I make experiments with Li Zhengdao, I learn a lot from him. And our
collaboration and friendship are strengthened with time passing by." Hardly can I imagine the situation without the science experiments,
which serves as a close link between people.

Last, the knowledge and information we acquire from our science classes would exert an undeniably positive and far-reaching effect on
our future success in career and existence in a technologically advanced today.

Admittedly, it is reasonable and rational that it is a waste of time for students who do not major in science. Because they have a lot study
to do with their own major, such as history, business and literature. Nevertheless, the merits that taking the basic science classes brings
outshadow the disadvantages of that. Thus, I reinforce my perspective that it is essential to offer every student basic science classes.

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发表于 2010-9-9 19:03:42 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 Titchy 于 2010-9-9 19:08 编辑

With the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly ruthless and relentless,
imposing tremendous pressure on each and every individual. And when it comes to the way
of releasing the stress, people's opinions diverge considerably on the point. Some think
that it is good for us to stay with other people, on the contrary, others hold the
perspective that the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. As
far as I am concerned, I am inclined to the latter.

Firstly, when we stay alone, there are no restriction and concern so that we can readily
cut the pressure. In addition, it is more convenient for us to do whatever methods we like
to release stress, such as crying, shouting and running. I can think of no better illustration
than the example of mine. Whenever I encounter with setbacks, difficulties and barriers that
are hard to deal with or even impossible to solve, I would always go to a park near my home to
run for a hour alone. Then, my mood would always become good and happy. So it is the run by myself
that help me relax and reduce stress.

Secondly, the tranquil environment under oneself plays a positive role in relaxation. As the introduction
says, the stress and pressure of society on our shoulder are over considerable so that we are faced with
a noisy circumstance, such as cars, bars and construction noise. Therefore, we have no time to take care of
our own heart. Tranquility and solitude are capable of adjusting our mood and thought so that we can consider
everything around us thoroughly and clearly. Further lending credence to my position is the example of mine as well.

Every time after I run, I always sit at the grassland of the park to think for a while to find solutions to
solve the things. Hardly can I imagine the situation without staying alone, which serves as a catalyst for my success today.
Admittedly, there are also merits to stay with a lot people as well. Because they can give advices and suggestions for us,
we can absorb experience from others to deal with our things. Nevertheless, the advantages of staying alone for relaxation outshadow
those of staying with others. Thus, I reinforce my perspective that the best way to relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.

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发表于 2010-9-12 20:53:13 |只看该作者

When it comes to the education of university, people's opinions diverge considerably on whether it is essential to choose
the most challenging courses or not. Some of them hold the perspective that it is not necessary for all students to have
these classes for many reasons, for example, it is a waste of time to take these courses which are not relevant to their
majors. However, as far as I am concerned, I am inclined to the view that we should all take the most challenging courses.

Firstly, it is a beneficial method to expand our knowledge, nourish our abilities, and even excevate our potential abilities.
When we are on the process of taking these courses, we will encounter with a large amount of problems, difficulties and setbacks.
It is solving and dealing with them that we gradually and eventually accomplish different kinds of improvement. And I can think
of no better illustration than the example of mine, which happened when I had the Higher Chemistry at Grade 2.Once the teacher
told us to observe an object's structure and characteristic named sulfur, so we group went to the lab to had an experiment with it.
In the process, I learned a lot that I had ever known before, such as the use of sulfur in industry, the molecule of sulfur and
so on. Hardly can I imagine the experience bringing about a lot of knowledge without taking the difficult course.

Secondly, it will exercise a favorable influence on our job seeking and future career. With the quickening pace of life, competition
goes increasingly ruthless and relentless. Therefore, if one wants to find a good job and open a wonderful career, he or she must
stand out of thousands of interviewers. And the way to highlight before interviewees is to handle more knowledge and own more abilities
than others. Lending credence to my position is the example of Steve Jobs, who is the CEO of Apple Std Company. Although he has not
better family conditions than other classmates, it is the expertise of computer that leads him to the foundation of Apple and the success
of his life.

Admittedly, it also makes sense for not taking the most challenging courses. As the introduction says, we will waste a lot of time on it so
that our major courses will be disturbed and constrained. Nevertheless, the merits of taking them outshadow the disadvantages of that. Thus,
I reinforce my perspective that it is essential to choose the most challenging courses in university.

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发表于 2010-9-19 19:22:41 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 Titchy 于 2010-9-19 19:28 编辑

With the development of society, the need for resources such as electricity and gas is increasingly exploded so that it causes
energy crisis. And when it comes to the solutions, a lot of people hold the perspective that it is the only way to increase
the price of electricity and gas. But, as far as I am concerned, I'm inclined to the view that there are many other methods
to deal with the crisis.

Firstly, it is an vital aspect to research and develop new types of energy, such as wind resource, solar resource and nuclear
resource. And the effect and impact it brings about is obvious and valid. According to the National Statistics Bureau, if all of
the wind energy is discovered and switched to electricity for citizen to use, it will meet 50 percent's the need of energy.
At the same time, it will also cut down the amount of usage of electricity and gas by about 40 percent so that the crisis of
energy will drop off, to some extent, to accomplish the target of saving energy waste and using. Moreover, because these types
of energy can reproduce and don't exercise an unfavorable influence on environment and society, it is essential and indispensable
to make a use of them. This can be aptly exemplified and illustrated by the fact that wind energy transforms the kinetic energy of
wind to electric energy, on the contrary, gas uses the biology energy of the inner earth. So, not only does these new types of energy
endow with tremendous resource for us to use, but also can reproduce and recycle so that they serve as a catalyst for our energy
saving and conservation.

Secondly, enacting laws to constrain the energy use of some large enterprises, supermarkets and companies is another imperative way
to save energy. Lending credence to my position is the statistics that the amount of electricity usage of these places covers 50
percent of the whole amount of usage. As long as the government limits the electricity using of these place, it will, to a large
extent, decline the speed of the development of energy crisis.

Admittedly, there are also some direct influences which are brought by increasing the price of electricity and gas. For instance,
people will be afraid of the cost when they are opening conditioner or cooking rice and soup so that they will reduce using energy.
However, this measure cannot solve the problem thoroughly and ultimately. Thus, I reinforce my perspective that increasing the
price of electricity and gas is not the only way to eliminate the energy crisis.

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发表于 2010-9-22 21:55:24 |只看该作者

When it comes to the reasons which cause the change of human's behaviors, people's opinions diverge considerably. A proportion of
people hold the perspective that as long as the clothes on someone changes, the behaviors of him or her will vary as it does. However,
as far as I am concerned, I am inclined to the view that it has little connection between clothes and behaviors, on the contrary, there
are many other factors which determine people's behaviors.
Firstly, it is the human's interior factors that play a decisive role. One of them is the psychology. To illustrate this, we need no further
than Frued's psychology theory, which puts human into id, ego and superego. He assumes that people have these three characteristics inside their
interior heart. And every time one makes a behavior, it is these three characteristics' fight and balance that contribute to the behavior.
Therefore, according to Frued, psychology is a component of determining a man's behavior. Moreover, there is a popular consensus that habit
is another interior factor which decides human's behavior. Habit, to some extent, can be ascribed to the result of many behaviors' stimulation
and intensification. Undoubtedly, habit can determine human's behavior. This can be aptly exemplified than the example of brushing teeth.
As is known to all, the first thing after we get up is to brush our teeth in time. It is obvious that brushing teeth has been our habit and this
behavior won't change with the clothes we wear on every morning.
What's more, exterior factors like circumstance around somebody exercise an influence on one's behaviors as well. One must adjust his or
her behavior to adapt to the circumstance around him to make his or her behavior appear reasonable and rational to it. Further lending credence
to my position is the example that one will increase his or her pace to climb compared with walking on flat ground.
Admittedly, different clothes on people have effects on them indeed. I can think of no better illustration than the example of an untidy person,
who doesn't pay much attention on the appearance and neatness. Once he or she puts on glamorous and gorgeous clothes, he or she will undeniably
take appearance and neatness into account.
Nevertheless, the influence level from clothes cannot outshadow that from psychology, habit and circumstance. Thus, I reinforce my perspective
that it has little connection between clothes and behaviors.

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发表于 2010-9-24 16:53:51 |只看该作者

With the quickening pace of society, increasing couples feel like to give birth to only one child. And many of them live with their son or daughter without the
child's grandpa, grandma or many other relatives, forming nuclear families. However, people's opinions diverge considerably on which is better between nuclear family
and extended family. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to the view that extended family has more advantages than nuclear family.

Firstly, it exercises a favorable influence on the children's growth in future. Imagine that, if there is only a child in a family, all of the attention will
be put on him or her. And then he or she will regard it as a necessary way so that it has a huge possibility that the child will feel self-centered and be selfish when
he or she grows up. On the contrary, it is a beneficial method for parents to avoid this situation, living with a lot of relatives together. Because, in this way, there
will be other children living together, the child can realize that he or she isn't the only one to be loved and it is essential to get on well with others or
consider others when doing something. Moreover, not only does a extended family enable they to learn to be generous, ranging from relating well to others on life to other aspects, but also serves
as a catalyst for their studying and learning. This can be aptly exemplified and illustrated by the case of Yang Zhenning, who is a celebrated physics scientist
in the world and has got the Nobel Prize. Once he said," During my childhood, I lived with a huge family. And I always asked my uncle some physics problems. From that
time, my interest of physics was stimulated and encouraged."

Secondly, there is a popular consensus that people in extended family can undoubtedly help each other to overcome difficulties, setbacks and troubles readily due to everyone's
aggregated different knowledge, experience and expertise. Further lending credence to my position is an example of mine, when I graduated from high school. At that time,
I was faced with a choice whether to attend a remote university or not. Then, I asked my grandpa, who lived in my family and was a retired teacher, for advices. He told me
to have a try to study far away from home to let me learn to live alone. Now, when I remember this thing, I know that it was a correct choice at that time.

Admittedly, there are also merits of a nuclear family. For instance, the members can immune from many troubles of a extended family, such as some inevitable
quarrels with others on little things, and divergence when determining to do something. Nevertheless, the advantages of extended family outshadow those of nuclear family.
Thus, I reinforce my perspective that extended family is better than nuclear family.

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