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发表于 2010-12-7 16:12:46 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

大作文,
现在人多,到处busy and crowed, 没必要希望别人礼貌.

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发表于 2010-12-7 16:17:01 |只看该作者

是 09年10月10日的机经。实在没有思路，如果能提供例子就更好啦~

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发表于 2010-12-7 16:30:16 |只看该作者

没人理我~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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发表于 2010-12-7 16:44:17 |只看该作者

我找到了这个的一篇文章，但不知道是谁写的，要是作者发现了，别打我。
我给你打出来吧，刚才杯具地发现弄丢了电子稿

With the economic developing, world becomes busy and crowded. Then everyone has a more harder life than before. Nowadays, there is a heat debate that we shoule not expect people to be polite to others. General speaking, I disagree with this statement strongly.

For students, it is very important to be polite to others. Students should learn the value and principle of our society, especially in the primary school, thus it can improve the ability to solve the problems in groups and obtain the interpersonal and communication skills, which are important for their future career. So I think it is urgent for teachers to teache the polite that talking to other frequently and helping others happily.

For doctors, it is very important to be polite to others. Facing with patients doctors should be more polite than any other careers. Only by this way, can he know the diseases successfully. What's more, it can reduce the patients' pressure and keep them calming down. It is helpful for patients to recover from it.

For businessman, polite is a skill that may increase the selling and almost the most important of them. Bill Gates, the founder of the Microsoft, always keep a smile on his face, and make speech just like face to face, so he may do a great for the company. Steve Jobs, the CEO of Apple Co, is also very polite to others. When the Apple company pulish new product, he always stand on the stage with a jeans and a unforgerttable speech about the new of the product. So a great number of Apple's fans follow him, buy the new one as soon as it is being sold.

For politicians, police is the basic requirment. when doing the vote compaign, they always huge people exaggeratedly. After being elected to be the president of the country, he must still keep smil and listen to people carefully, otherwise, he may fail in the next election. To some extent, politicians are the man that must be polite to others all the time.

Although the world becomes busy and crowd, there are still a lot of people are being expect to be polite to others and also a large number of people should be expect to be polite in the future, thus it can improve the health of our society and make everyone in the world owned a happy life. So I disagree with the statement that we should not expect to be polite to others.

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发表于 2010-12-7 19:21:16 |只看该作者

谢谢哈！考到就万岁了~~~~~哈哈，这个是预测机经里的，不知道准不准~准备着。

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发表于 2010-12-7 19:28:34 |只看该作者

本帖最后由鱼丸在哪里于 2010-12-7 19:33 编辑

我自己写了一段，怎么也写不下去了。

贴出来，大家要是有思路说说看。

Modern people have hectic work, the excessive stress makes it difficult for them to keep composure all the time, and the world population continues to increase steady, we found that the public is more crowed than ever, some old people complain: the world grow crazy? Indeed the world is in terrible order, but it is questionable to say that there is no need to require other people to behave political. As far as I am concerned, there is no any causal relationship between the things.

The undue stress and the crowed environment could not be the excuse to behave impolite. In some extent, the busy life and the untidy condition may be the driving force behind the politesse. Only if everyone act in the orderly way, there is possible to change the awful situation. One morning In bus station, For example, many people wait for the bus, there are several students to go to school, some commuters to go for company, some workers wait for the bus to go to factory, there is coming a bus, if people can stand in a queue, everyone could get in to the bus. But if the people run to the bus, and push the people in front of them, the result may be some people go to the hospital instead of school or factory, because of the hurts in the rough shove and push. In such a disordered condition, if we do not behave in an polite way, the result is disastrous. In a short, the more crowed the situations are, the more we need to keep to the social civilization.

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