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2# theflyfish
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to spend money on travelling and vocation than to save money for future?
It is deniable (undeniable) that savings is necessary because we cannot predict the risk of future. However, compared to saving money to eliminate the unknown threat, I prefer to spend it on travelling and vocation. (最好能说明下原因或者写上Thesis statement,不然感觉这个However和上面连接的有些牵强)
The chief reason is that travelling and vocation can relieve people from stress and tiredness of daily work and study. People need to have rests (have a rest/relax) at regular intervals and they can utilize this leisure time to refresh themselves in nature, to pursue enjoys through travels, to draw inspiration from heterogeneous cultures. They can escape from the boring routine life for a while, and reload themselves to continue the tough and arduous expedition of life.
Additionally, some resorts will no longer exist for varieties of reasons, and if we do not seize times to visit them now, we will regret to have no chance to see them ever again. The Yangtse Gorges are a good example to illustrate this point. A beautiful place was destroyed and many species are devastated for the sake of economic growth and human safety. It may be an envisioned policy, however, next generations can only appreciate the beauty of the Yangtse Gorges through videos.
Moreover, travelling can help people to widen their visuals, deepen their thoughts and enhance their understandings about people, nature, and culture. To visit the wildness, people obtain opportunities to reconsider the relationship between human and animals. To visit foreign countries, people can not only get knowledge about unknown arts, buildings, rituals and ceremonies, they can also recognize the culture behind them. Furthermore, they will compare different cultures by instinct and during this course people can understand their own culture deeply. They will struggle to relocate their specific positions in society and form their unique identities eventually.
The last reason relies on the anticipation of the inflation of RMB. According to the statistics of Chinese government, the rate of inflation increases swiftly recently. In the meanwhile, CPI has reached the new high level of these years. It recalls people the situation of 1980s when the salary of a newly graduated college student was 56 yuan, however, it is merely the price of a film ticket in some big cities, like Beijing and Shanghai nowadays. Saving moneys now might means saving nothing for future.
In sum, I agree on spending money on travelling and vocation because it can relief people from intense life, increase knowledge and it is also a wise investment in terms of the possibility of inflation.
Powerful evidentiary sentence, clearly thesis~~~
The only drawback is the first paragraph’s structure…..
你的语句很优美的说啊。。。向你学习~~
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