[习作点评] 2011-02-18作文提纲 黑洞探险者 [复制链接]

issue

103"The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
1.Admittedly, our daily lives are always influenced by the history and we have learned a lot of lessons from the history.
2.However, in the aspect of development of society, we can also benefit from the history.
3.Although many history events look irrelevant with our daily lives, they are the step in the development of society.

51"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."
1.When taking society into the account, the purpose of education is to equip students with adequate knowledge to make the society develop quickly.
2.At the level of person, interests are very necessary for students to master the skill.
3.However, we could not teach each students by meeting their needs and interests because of the lack of teachers.

131"The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
1.The arts are generally backgrounded by the contemporary society. As a result, the arts reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.
2.Moreover, lots of arts reflect the mainstream of the society.
3.However, there are some arts pertaining to animals and nature, which are nothing to do with the society.


argument
XDF黄皮书第7题
1.The author unfairly concludes that the air pollution in C is due to the increase in the number of factories.
2.The argument also unfairly make a decision that last year's increase in the number of patients with respiratory illnesses indicates the worsening environmental problems.
3.The author provides no evidence that F would solve the environmental problem when he is elected to the mayor.

XDF黄皮书第8题
1.The assumption that Mesa's snack foods appeal to 14-to-25 year olds is open to doubt.
2.The increase sales of DS in a relatively small region cannot indicate that it will keep the increase in the nationwide.
3.We don't know the sale of other products of Mesa Foods, so we cannot evaluate that if OI should buy Mesa Foods.

XDF黄皮书第9题
1.The author unfairly concludes that the higher grades of students in OU is a result of the new procedure.
2.There is no evidence inferring that the grade inflation explains that students in OU is less successful than students in AU.
3.The argument obviously ignores the positive effects of the evaluation system.