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发表于 2011-8-10 23:33:42 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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20100320NA 有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或者家人的帮助，解决important problems.因此，人们不需要政府的帮助。

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When faced with the decision of being helped by yourself and your family members or being helped by the government when you have to face an important problems, quite a few would claim that being helped by himself is better, but others, in contrast, deem being helped by the government as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.
We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for being helped by the government is a more sensitible choice than helped by yourself and your family members . For example, someone was sick.We all know that it spends a large amount money to see a doctor, even some kinds of indispositiones, to say nothing of some serious diseases like cancer ,heart disease etc. A man was badly injured in a car accident , and the criminal has run away. When he was sent to the hospital, the doctor told him and his family they have to pay $800 for the deposit, but they were so poor that they hadn’t so much money and they don’t know what to do with this dilemma.The worst result is that he was died of not being treated in appropriate time for his family can’t get so much money.
If it has happened,it’s really a sad story.No one would like to see it.Let us suppose another story.A man was adly injured in a car accident , and the criminal has run away. When he was sent to the hospital, the doctor told him and his family they have to pay $800 for the deposit, but they hadn’t so much money.Just at the moment, the insurance staff appeared and they were told that at the beginning of the year, the government has covered medical insurance,so they needn’t worry about the cost. It ‘s really a good news.What a happy ending !
However, people who accept the help from the government needn’t to be thankful.It is common knowledge that most of the government’s income comes from the tax which common people like us hand in.Everyday we buy things, work even drive cars so that different kinds of taxes are handed in.That is to say, the money which the government used to help us actually belongs to us.So everytime you accept the help from the government, you should aware that accepting its help is your entitlement ,you needn’t to be thankful.
In a word, being helped by the government is not only spare your trouble but also it is the duty of the government to do you a favour .Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that we should choose being helped by the government when you are in trouble.

我自己觉得写得挺没文采的。。。大家凑合着看吧，尽情地改错、拍砖吧~~~

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