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本帖最后由 krose 于 2011-8-2 20:39 编辑

Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than help determine children's future.; q/
Actually, whether parents should help their children to make choices is a controversial topic. Parents worry about the decisions children make are not sensible, while children do need to make the choice by theirselves. As far as I am concerned, I support children make their own choices.

Before I defend my opinion that children should learn to make choices independently, let me concede that some parents’ concerns are acceptable. Indeed, many children have not prossessed enough experience to make optimal choices and even make mistakes sometimes. However, as we know: no pain, no gain. In my perspective, it is necessary to let children face the harsh reality when they make wrong choice. Once they make their own choice, they will face the ramifications accordingly. It is not a bad thing sometimes because children can learn from trouble. For example, my family gave me five hundred yuan per month for my living when I was in high school. At the beginning, I choose spending my money without any consideration, but soon I found that there’s no money for me to eat. Thus I know I should properly manage my money. Therefore, even though children are not mature, they also should make their own decision, because no one are sophisticated when he come to this world.

Moreover, making their own choice can help children grow up. Obviously, ones cannot be mature if he always rely on his parents. Parents cannot always stand behind children all the time. Chilren will inevitably become adults one day. When children make their own choices, they will felt sense of responsibility, because they know all are his own choice. For instance, my friend Alex had got two admission from two famous unversity, he was upset and didn’t know how to choose. His parents told him that he need to make choice by himself because he was already a adult and he should take him owm responsibility. Alex told me that it was that time he first knew the feeling of independence. After that, when he must to make choices, he always prudent and consider twice. Therefore, letting children make their own choices is a process of being mature.

In conclusion, children should make their own choice because they should understand the importance of independence. Through making own choices, children will become mature psychologically, and they will take their own responsibility. Consequently, I agree with the opinion that children should make their own choices.

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本帖最后由 krose 于 2011-11-9 09:46 编辑

11月8日

Do you agree or disagree: compared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.

When speaking of ideal life, people usually paint the picture of a scene analogous with the prosperous downtown area, where have high building and advanced infrastructure, transportation and well-rounded health care system. As a result, many people contend that it is better to settle down in the urban areas for the sake of taking care of their families. However, in my perspective, even though urban areas can bring us with advanced service, living in rural areas is the most judicious choice if we want to attend our families, thus I completely agree with the statement.

Before I defense my opinion that the rural areas is the perfect place for us to live with our families, let me concede that we cannot ignore the advantages of the urban areas. Indeed, unlike urban areas, rural areas have no progressive health-care, pension and social-security system. But if we thoroughly consider these two options, we can also find that there are a lot of problems in the urban areas need to be solved. For example, environmental pollution，which have become the biggest headache of urban areas. Such as Zhujiang River, which located in Guangzhou, have been polluting since 1990. The river abound with various metal, and poisonous waste water. Not to mention the unbearable air pollution, which have been causing a variety of diseases to harm people's life. How can we live happily in such areas with our families? Compared with urban areas, the countryside possess beautiful environment. Three months ago, I came back to hometown with my family, and I surprisingly found that my hometown, Jingzhou, have never changed. The river is still clear and unpolluted, and the air is still fresh and made me feel vigorous. That was the time when I decided to move back to hometown after I graduated from my university, because this place is the ideal area for my family to live. This case perfectly exemplified the merit of living in the rural areas with families when compared with living in the urban areas.

Regardless of the environmental pollution, we should also take into account another serious problem: overpopulation. With the rapid development of modern city, there are an increasing number of people moved to urban area for the sake of getting more opportunity to become rich and successful. Nevertheless, as we know, every coin has two sided. Overpopulation have been cause many serious problem to urban residents. Obviously, more people means serious competition, which would cause severe diseases to people when they desperately struggled in the city, such as cancer, hypertension, even suicide, thus few people has enough time to stay with their families. However, in rural areas, the situation is much different. Rural areas have less population which means less stress and competition. As a result, people can easily and reasonably arrange their working time and can have more time to attend their families.

In conclusion, living in urban areas sound fascinating, but we also cannot underestimate the hazard of it. The environmental pollution and overpopulation have been causing many serious social problems and physical diseases. Compared with living in urban areas, the rural areas with beautiful environment and comfortable working setting, is the optimal place for us to take care of our family. Consequently, I agree with the statement.

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