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7.20 TOEFL 加油!!!!

谢谢帖子内为我评分的各位以及辛勤的版主~
7.20的成绩已经出来了,107=25+28+27+27
口语27,和想象得差不多,谢谢寄托!!让我心定了不少!

7.2homework
Task 1 What suggestions would you like to give to a child who is starting school for the first time? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these suggestions are important.

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important lessons cannot be learned in classrooms.


======T3-T6fromTPO16=======
T3

T4

T5

T6


自己听了一遍作业,感觉1.口水好多 2.逻辑混乱时间把握不好……



7.3homework
Task 1 What's your favorite toy or game in your childhood?

Task 2 Do you like to be taught by experienced teachers or by new teachers?



7.4homework
Task 1 Describe one thing you didn’t want to do but you were asked to do. Explain what the result of that thing was. Include reasons and details in your response. 

Task 2 Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future. Others prefer to concentrate on present things and don't make any plans at all. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.



7.5homework
Task 1 Describe a historical event that you’re interested in most. Explain why you are interested in it and want to know more about it. Include reasons and examples to support your response.(这题不好说,but we need to prepare for the worst!  )

Task 2 Some people believe that a person needs to possess natural physical ability in order to be successful at sports. Others believe that any person can become successful at sports through hard work. Which do you agree with and why?





7.6 homework
Task 1 Talk about a memorable experience you had in a restaurant or cafe. Explain what happened and why it was memorable. Give specific details in your response.

Task 2 Do you prefer to have fast food in a fast‐food restaurant, or do you prefer to have food in other kinds of places?



7.7 homework
Task 1 Your friend often feels nervous when speaking in front of a large group of people. What suggestions would you give to your friend to overcome this fear?

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree the following statement: Advertising has too much influence on what people buy.


7.8homework
Task 1 Describe a piece of news or a story that you are interested in recently. Explain why you think it was interesting. Include reasons and details in your response.

Task 2 Some students prefer to take an essay question where they must write an essay to a question. Other students prefer to take a test with objective questions. Which type of exam question do you prefer? Give reasons and examples in your explanation.



7.10homework
Task 1 Among the following three professions, which do you respect the most: photographers, musicians, painters. Explain why.

Task 2 Some people think it is better for students to study in a classroom building. Others think that it is better for students to study on the Internet. Which do you think is better and why?



7.11homework



7.12homework
Task 1 Describe a tool or object that you rely on often in your daily life. Explain why it is important to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.

Task 2 Some people like to spend their spare time with friends, some people like to spend it alone. Which one do you prefer?


7.14homework
Task 1 Describe a person whom you would like to spend time with. Explain why you would like to spend time with this person. Include reasons and details to support your response.

Task 2 Do you prefer to listen to live music like concert, or do you prefer to listen to recorded music.


7.15homework
Task 1 Describe a period of time in your life that you enjoyed the most. Explain why.

Task 2 Some people prefer to solve a challenge all by themselves. Others prefer to depend on other people's help. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.

半夜录的= = 精神不佳嗓音略带困意 T2尝试了一下one shot

7.16homework
Task 1 Talk about an experience of learning something new. What difficulties do you have to overcome in order to learn it?

Task 2 Do you like to go to one place and stay there for a long time for your vacation, or different places and spend little time at each place?


7.17homework
Task 1 Among the following three types of professions, which do you think makes the most important contribution to society? Primary school teacher, nurse, artist.

Task 2 Some people like to watch or listen to news every day while others do that occasionally. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to illustrate your point.


7.18homework
Task 1 Describe a good study habit you have that is different from other students.

Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who are 18 years old are not mature enough to vote.
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wstfw + 4 加油啊,说的好好听啊

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发表于 2013-7-3 20:25:50 |只看该作者
7.2
T1
T2: thinking the others' way and also try to understand others 意思重复
T3: 注意 treatment 发音
     also be opened → also open
T4 ...can be the best... 只有两个solution 使用better
T5
T6 听力中internal 的例子是she, not he

语音语调自然
T3-T6不必硬撑时间 说完点就差不多
可以看看30分Robin的指导贴https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1596093-1-1.html

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Task 1 What's your favorite toy or game in your childhood?

Task 2 Do you like to be taught by experienced teachers or by new teachers?

今天看来在22:00前是无法完成TPO15剩下的部分了T-T 半夜补上吧…………

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伪理想主义 发表于 2013-7-3 20:25
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T1
T2: thinking the others' way and also try to understand others 意思重复

谢谢谢谢!!!
听得非常仔细啊,我的确有些时候发音不清晰舌头打结。
T6我讲出来以后发现讲错成He了就索性一路错下去了……
原来T3-T6不用撑时间的啊………………谢谢指点!!
下次注意~

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7.3
1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰,发音自然,很喜欢你的语音语调:)
3.表意明确
4.内容方面,有些地方有点重复、啰嗦。比如task 1,barbie doll should be every girl's favorite,和你的主题没什么关系吧。task 2,你说了they are more skilled at teaching, I think this would be better还有they will do a better job at teaching,这三句话表达的基本上是一个意思,不够具体,说一次就行了。建议加入具体细节,比如experienced teacher如何活跃课堂气氛bla bla bla的经历

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Hi 咱倆是不是應該互改?你的7.3的作業在哪裡呢?

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Task 1 Describe one thing you didn’t want to do but you were asked to do. Explain what the result of that thing was. Include reasons and details in your response.


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raisssa 发表于 2013-7-4 19:24
Hi 咱倆是不是應該互改?你的7.3的作業在哪裡呢?


歡迎互改哦~ 我已經幫你改好了今天的作業=]
7.3作業在“板凳”那一層!
今天7.4的作業好啦,在第7樓!

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糖甜甜 发表于 2013-7-3 23:47
7.3
1.语速合适
2.吐字清晰,发音自然,很喜欢你的语音语调:)

谢谢糖糖的点评=]
我也意识到了重复啰嗦的问题……我纯粹拿他们来占地方了……
以后努力在细节上下功夫!!!再接再厉!今天的作业就有想着避免重复,加入细节,有没有进步呢~~

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T1: TAT太強大了,我該怎麼評==。
連用了兩個but...說的時候可能沒太有感覺不過聽得話會很明顯。但是這個問題只有多加練習了。一不注意就會出問題。

T2:第二個論點關於“skilled"沒有發展,只是講了對方做得好的地方,最後只給出了一個就是好的結論。有點像毛主席就是好呀就是好(==)。

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Task 1 Describe a historical event that you’re interested in most. Explain why you are interested in it and want to know more about it. Include reasons and examples to support your response.(这题不好说,but we need to prepare for the worst!  )

Task 2 Some people believe that a person needs to possess natural physical ability in order to be successful at sports. Others believe that any person can become successful at sports through hard work. Which do you agree with and why?

重新听了一遍,有一个单复数不一致的问题~

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raisssa 发表于 2013-7-4 21:48
T1: TAT太強大了,我該怎麼評==。
連用了兩個but...說的時候可能沒太有感覺不過聽得話會很明顯。但是這個問 ...

謝謝你的點評~昨天太晚了忘記回復了= =|||
對的我覺得我的論點發展以及整個邏輯是硬傷。。。要是單看我的script的話估計20分都沒有。。。捉急

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本帖最后由 yonggg 于 2013-7-6 21:33 编辑

T1:大部分发音清晰,声音挺好听,听着很舒服,细节说的很充分。最开始没听清说什么,另外是说天安门事件,89的那个吗?如果是,这种敏感话题适合说吗?
T2:发音很好,细节也足够。但是好像张涵的书说ets喜欢听故事,是不是说了具体的例子更好点?

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Task 1 Talk about a memorable experience you had in a restaurant or cafe. Explain what happened and why it was memorable. Give specific details in your response.

Task 2 Do you prefer to have fast food in a fast‐food restaurant, or do you prefer to have food in other kinds of places?

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kanari 发表于 2013-7-6 21:24
謝謝你的點評~昨天太晚了忘記回復了= =|||
對的我覺得我的論點發展以及整個邏輯是硬傷。。。要是單看我的 ...

我估計大多數人都不會有什麽很強的邏輯。
你就想想,想去告訴別人一件事,想說服你的朋友該怎麼說。

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