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5.28 task1-2
Task 1 Where is your favortie place to exercise outdoors? Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 When on a trip, some people like to keep a journal and take pictures, others just enjoy the journey without recording. Which do your prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0Ghlsc

5.29 tpo29 task3-6
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgqO7tY

5.30 Task 1 Describe the most important day of your life. Explain why it is important to you. Please include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to do one job or project at one time. Others prefer to do several jobs at the same time. Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1EjJbg

5.31
Task 1 Describe an event in history and explain what you learned from this event.
Task 2 Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future. Others prefer to concentrate on present things and don't make any plans at all. Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntHRdFF

6.1
Task 1 Which type of movie is not enjoyable for you to watch? Action, romance or science-fiction? Please give your answer with specific examples and details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Cellphones have greatly improved people's lives.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGE9zQA

6.2
Task 1 Describe a tool or an object that you often rely on in your daily life. Explain why it is important to you.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should do some part-time jobs before they attend college.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6jZeOU

6.3
Task 1 Describe the most important development of your country in the past 20 years, and explain its significance.
Task 2 Some people prefer to deal with difficulties by themselves, others prefer to ask for help. What do you think?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mg7JMS4

6.4
Task 1 Which class would you choose to attend if it is free: 1)improve the skill of public presentation 2)how to start a small business 3)improve photographic skill
Task 2 Which shop do you prefer? Large department store or boutique? Please give your answer with specific examples and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sj0OcO1

6.5
Task 1 Describe a study habit you have that is different from other students. Explain how this habit helped you.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University education is more important than it was in the past.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ0mkNx

6.6
Task 1 Your friend is concerned about a presentation that he has to give to the class. What advice would you give to help your friend to prepare for the presentation?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree that it is a good idea for university to ask a student to leave school if he was caught cheating in exams? Explain your response in details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6OAKHk

6.7题目
Task 1 Describe the transportation you like the most. It could be bicycle, automobile, train etc.. Explain why you think this transportation is important to you.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree that people with read fewer books in the future? Pleas give specific reasons to support your idea.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntwm69r


6.8题目
Task 1 Your community center now offers classes on weekends for free. Which of the following class would you choose to take? 1)A financial course to help you manage money 2)Car maintainance and repair 3)Review of Latin-American music.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should not allow their children to participate in any form of sports(football, basketball, ice hocky...) in order to protect them from injuries.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQglPXC

6.9题目
Task 1 A high school plans to add an extracurricular activity for students. What kind of activity would you recommend?
Task 2 Can part-time jobs help people prepare for their future career? Please give your opinion with specific reasons and details.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bndAieV

6.10题目
Task 1 Many schools do not allow students to take their laptop computers into the classroom. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having laptop computers in the classroom? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Task 2Some people like to move about and live in different places. Others like to stay at one place all their lives. Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGqTdjC

6.11题目
Task 1 What is your favorite outdoor place to do exercise in a nice day?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is never too late for an old person to receive higher education and to get a university degree. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnAem7d

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Task 1 Describe an interesting style of clothing in your country.
Task 2 Some people like to spend their spare time with friends, some people like to spend it alone. Which one do you prefer?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQcOfku

6.13题目
Task 1 Talk about the benefits of talking to older family members (grandparents, uncles, aunts, etc.)
Task 2 When things at home such as furniture or electrical appliances are broken, some people prefer to have them repaired in a shop, while others prefer to fix them at home. Which do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqyyKkc

6.14题目
Task 1 Which challenge in the list do you think is the most difficult for university students? Being far away from families, finding time to relax, making new friends.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be successful, a person should study in the university.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gdkTDar

6.15题目
Task 1 An environmental group is planning to organize an activity to help protect the environment. What activity do you suggest and why?
Task 2 When you give gifts to others, do you prefer gifts that are fun or gifts that can be used?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjuIIeD

6.16题目
Task 1. Nowadays robots are widely used in the society. What are the benefits and risks of this?
Task 2. Should employees be required to wear suits in the workplace, or should they wear casual clothes?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTJXyv1

6.17题目
Task 1. If you were to choose a place to live, what kind of location would you prefer and why?  1. A place close to school 2. A place close to your family 3. A place close to a transportation hub (airport or bus terminal, etc.)
Task 2. Some people think the best way to study is to attend a lecture. Others say that it’s better to read by yourself. Which way do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6Lnopk

618~
Task 1  What kind of food do you recommend to add to the food menu of the campus cafeteria? Use Examples and details to support your response.
Task 2  Some people like to buy new and expensive books while others prefer to buy old and cheap ones. Which would you prefer?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDipXmT

6.20题目
Task 1  Describe the differences between two cities that you have visited before. Give details and examples to support your response.  
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should encourage students to start using computers from primary school. Give details and examples to support your response.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJobpEz

6.21题目
Task 1 What personal quality do you admire most? Creativity, courage or intelligence? Explain why? Please include details and examples in your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to listen to music while they are studying or working. Others prefer to stay in a quiet place while they are studying or working. Which way do you prefer and why? Include reasons and details in your response.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hquvjow
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发表于 2014-5-29 18:43:56 |只看该作者
很荣幸能够成为你的第一个点评人,希望没让你失望。
TASK1
38s:in this way后面要倒装。
最后你好想要叙述第三个原因,I can make friends.其实这个没有必要

,你就说两个原因,然后稍微深入地分析展开就行了。
总体来说,语速过快,语调有点平,咱俩的问题都差不多。
反正多练习啊!加油。已经很好了!
TASK2
这个response说的非常好,内容组织的也好,过渡的也很自然,发音也

不错。
有一个小的语法错误:showing the pictures with my families----

with应该为to.
最后一个没有听明白,and after the hard work. 请给俺说说这句话的

句子成分是啥,是做时间状语吗?没有看懂。
整体的架构组织和发音都很不错。赞。

我的明天上传,会通知你的哦。
一起加油。

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额,是先写在txt文档中再粘贴过来的,格式段落好像有问题,见谅。

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本帖最后由 sequent 于 2014-5-29 21:35 编辑
One-doer 发表于 2014-5-29 18:43
很荣幸能够成为你的第一个点评人,希望没让你失望。
TASK1
38s:in this way后面要倒装。


谢谢,我要好好努力了,万年19的口语伤不起啊~
是sharing the experience,发音不清楚了,还有总感觉每个点都扩展不出来,绞尽脑汁啊~

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sequent 发表于 2014-5-29 21:11
谢谢,我要好好努力了,万年19的口语伤不起啊~
是sharing the experience,发音不清楚了,还有总感觉每 ...

例到用时方恨少啊。
我也是经常山穷水尽。
共勉,加油。

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发表于 2014-5-30 18:38:49 |只看该作者
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20" because 发音有点怪
she mentions that  出现的感觉有点多了,可以多做替换
后面没说完,其实你不说那几句意思也完整了

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46“ they still have lots of nuts 发音有点怪
中间有点啰嗦,尽量把关键点答出来,不过其实已经挺好的了

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50 prepared a lot 感觉 lot 有点怪, 好像是重读了,稍微带过就可以了
还有阐述自己意见的时间太少了,尽量前面的部分控制在30s,可以不讲两个options的理由,可以放在后面给自己建议的时候讲

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前面的例子时间太久,导致后面没时间
建议一个点叙述20-25秒比较保险,
如第一个方法,关键点是 technology is similar, attract new customers who use monitor rather than TV
18” for example 前后停顿,我听了半天才听出来 这里是 for example  = =

楼主加油!

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活性氧 发表于 2014-5-30 18:38
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20" because 发音有点怪

我也觉得是,一说就有点说不完的赶脚,发音不知不觉就混乱了,谢谢O(∩_∩)O~

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5/31:
Task 1:
7s: event的读音注意下
12s-13s: decent jobs前听得不清楚
10s: people live a better life就可以,不需要live in
19s: a lot of countries后没听清楚,是想说invest?
34s: are
Task2:
3s: plan的读音
10s: the goal前不清晰,是想说win?
24s: be wandering around
32s: months的读音
28s后例子的时态部分要注意下
总体来看,楼主的连贯性很好,第一题的例子也很好

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发表于 2014-6-3 12:46:08 |只看该作者
602 我来了
task1 说的还不错,但是这个task2 我觉得可以再语音上再多多练习一下,有的地方有点不清晰。我觉得跟读是一个非常有效的方法。
task1 常规的cell phone 举例,蛮流畅,也挺清晰,大致上没有挑出毛病,如果不是背诵是不打稿的话,我觉得挺好。
task2  啊哈哈正好和我持了反例,我就更偏向于听不同,也多想了一下。前面挺好,用自己的过往经验支持论点。OK,后面一点的最后一句,也就是作业最后几个词,我没有听太清楚,不过总体上,有点,论据不够丰满,我猜想有,鉴于对比TASK1,我想2有点不流畅,是不是2 的问题回答你自己组织不是很清晰,所以后续有点跟不上去论证,稍微有点小迷糊了??
新人,经验少,如果说的不对,还请多多指正啊。

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6.1号的作业 不好意思 明天给你改。抱歉

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发表于 2014-6-4 14:40:48 |只看该作者
6.1号作业 迟来的点评。

task 1: 4 5秒 I believe 前面可以停顿下,毕竟是另外一句话。 21秒那个是ugly beasts吗? 还是阿克琉斯, 我没听出来。你的a lot发音注意下,可能是因为读的快了 就忘记了。没事 下次注意下就行哦。31秒的 has to Q? 那是什么? 最后那个应该用 frustration。

task 2:18秒 share our.....那个share没有发准确,然后这里还有一点  and share our..... 加上use cellphone 这样会好些。  27秒的remember的发音。 32秒 你坐了十年的飞机吗?????

我写的好乱哦,你将就的看下吧。。。。。。。

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Yao.C 发表于 2014-6-4 14:40
6.1号作业 迟来的点评。

task 1: 4 5秒 I believe 前面可以停顿下,毕竟是另外一句话。 21秒那个是ugly ...

谢谢,我的发音特别不准,没学过音标的孩子啊,多谢指点~

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Task1&2 内容非常好,衔接的也非常紧凑,声音也非常好,只是,有两个问题:
1、录音时间过长,task1 45s task2 50s 基本上就是要超时(考试时间是45s),感觉内容上没有问题主要还是语速;
2、停顿问题,可能是对发音不熟悉,或者没想好内容产生了停顿,这点上加强一下还可以解决task1的问题,比如,转折的时候,but,停顿一下。要是能加些感情色彩上的变化,能有更好的效果,建议重点多听tpo里面的conversation, 他们说的都挺神道儿的。

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sokiller 发表于 2014-6-4 21:06
Task1&2 内容非常好,衔接的也非常紧凑,声音也非常好,只是,有两个问题:
1、录音时间过长,task1 45s t ...

多谢多谢,发音的确掌握的不好~

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