OG里讲文章开头和结尾有这么一段话,rater怎么判断有没有memorize,感觉很多朋友写的文章都写,“XXX被激烈讨论...blabla”,这样的算memorize吗?
还有OG中举的这个例子又是怎么看是memorize的,有什么明显缺陷。
Do not “memorize” long introductory and concluding paragraphs just to add words to your essay. Raters will not look favorably on wordy introductory and concluding paragraphs such as the following:
The importance of the issue raised by the posed statement, namely creating a new holiday for people, cannot be underestimated as it concerns the very fabric of society. As it stands, the issue of creating a new holiday raises profound implications for the future. However, although the subject matter in general cannot be dismissed lightheartedly, the perspective of the issue as presented by the statement raises certain qualms regarding practical application.