Too much emphasis has been placed on the need for students to challenge the assertions of others. In fact, the ability to compromise and work with others—that is, the ability to achieve social harmony—should be a major goal in every school.
这是题目!!!
第一句话 Too much emphasis has been placed on the need for students to challenge the assertions of others. 需要不需要讨论呢?
先说说你定的论点呀。
我感觉只要围绕“the need to challenge the assertions of others”和“the ability to compromise and work with others”二者进行选择或比较轻重应该就可以。
第一句要不要讨论一方面看你的论点,一方面看写作习惯。很难绝对化。