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发表于 2005-8-29 19:17:00 |只看该作者

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发表于 2005-9-6 17:06:26 |只看该作者

9月3日雅思真题范文：穷人的孩子早当家

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TASK2: Children who are brought up in families which have not great amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree？

Among the factors that influence a child’s development, family financial background is a critical one. Empirically kids from rich families, after entering adulthood, deal with problems differently from those from less well-off households. Generally the latter is more capable of problem-solving.

Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals. Rich kids have more toys. If a toy truck gets broken, parents would buy their children another fancier, more expensive one. Rich kids go the best school in the neighborhood. On the contrary, children from an ordinary family have to take good care of their toys. Their parents are often busy with work. So children have chances to make many of their own decisions. Many kids babysit younger brothers or sisters or even take small part-time jobs to help the family. Such differences in the upbringing often tough them for adult life.

Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life. For example, they go to a good school only because they have excellent grades, not because daddy donates a building for the school. Hard work and constant trying are the only way to change their life. So they fight to be a winner. But rich kids are so over-protected by their families that they hardly know the harsh world until they leave college and start to work. There are more successful entrepreneurs, actors, doctors, and lawyers from poor families than from rich ones. Poor kids know how to survive in the big wild world better than their rich friends.

But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals. Many of them even start businesses independent from their families. But still most of them know more about having fun than about being a good working professional.

To sum up, less privileged family background generally enables children to be more responsible and independent. Poor kids value hard work more, handle competition better than rich kids, and cope with problems better after becoming adults.

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发表于 2005-9-11 13:47:46 |只看该作者

9月10日雅思范文：提高道路安全须用重典

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The only way to improve the safety in our roads is to give much stricter punishment for driving offences. Agree or Disagree？

In an effort to enhance road safety, our country's law stipulates harsher punishment for transgressors. While this is an effective measure, we should call for an integrated approach for traffic safety control.

Harsher punishment on unlawful use of the road will effectively deter traffic violations. For instance, drunk driving and breaking red lights account for a large proportion of road fatalities. Research by administrative department indicates that the number of violators decrease notably when the amount of fine increases 5-fold or more. Drivers and pedestrians become more aware of traffic law and comply with it better knowing the serious consequence of their action.

In spite of the effectiveness of heavier punishment, we can not afford to downplay the significance of additional measures such as application of road safety information system. In developed countries such as Japan and Singapore, government has developed and launched highly sophisticated traffic control system, which monitors and facilitates traffic flows on major roads for better and safer road usage, reducing the chances of accidents.

Education also plays a critical role in keeping roads safe. In schools, teachers explain to students general safety knowledge and teach them skills such as how to cross roads and ride cars safely. Such preventive measure also makes very good contribution to road safety improvement.

In conclusion, we acknowledge the effectiveness of stronger punishment measures on traffic law offenders. However this is not the only or most optimal option to achieve better and safer usage of roads. An integrated approach should be adopted such as the use of smart traffic control system and priority given to traffic safety education.

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发表于 2005-9-11 13:48:55 |只看该作者

写作思路

考生要写好本题的关键在于正确理解题目中的only一词。我们都知道事情没有绝对，当题目给出针对某个问题的一个解决方案后，它往往把此方案的作用夸大，以考察考生全面客观评述此问题的能力。

针对提高道路交通安全性，我们知道除了要提高处罚交通违章者力度以外，还要有一些其他有效的手段解决这个问题。所以我们既要承认题目方案一定合理性，又要简要分析几个补充性观点表明自己的看法更为客观全面。

特别提醒部分考生在看到agree or disagree的时候可能会思维惯性的要表态。其实大部分雅思题目都如上面所讲，要从一定程度上承认其观点的合理性，并补充说明题目观点，态度完全可以从文章写作文中表明。

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Measure
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integrated approach
unlawful
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violation
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breaking red light
account for
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launch
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发表于 2005-9-11 13:53:55 |只看该作者

9月3日作文真题写作思路分析

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Topic: 9月3日A类大作文真题

Children who are brought up in families which have not great amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree？

写作思路：

文章着重讨论贫富不同家庭出身的孩子在成年以后解决问题能力也不同，普通家庭出身的孩子此方面能力更强。

态度：同意
论点一：Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals.

论据：对待玩具的不同---more responsible，对待学习的不同-----more independent，帮助家庭工作---more responsible and independent

论点二：Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life.
论据：普通人家出身孩子对待改变人生的态度和出身富家孩子的对比

让步段论点：But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals.

结论：总结之前的提到的主要观点

总结：这篇文章需要考生会设身处地考虑出身不同的孩子长大后如何用不同的方式态度对待生活中问题。在考试或者练习写作的时候尽量学会使用生活中普通的例子说明支持自己的观点。

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critical
empirically
adulthood
well-off
household
problem-solving
fancy
babysit
upbringing
affluent
donate
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发表于 2005-9-13 08:48:39 |只看该作者

雅思作文审题技巧(上)

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很多技能的学习，都有一个从不了解到了解，从陌生到熟悉的过程。对于以前没有接触过写作或者练习写作不多的考生来说，拿到一个作文题目往往不知道从何下手。为解决这个问题，下面给大家提供一些练习写作中的基本思路和写作步骤。本章字数虽然不多，但作用非常关键，希望读者认真体会并掌握其中思路。

拿到题目首先要认真审题。很多考生认为只要是把字数写够，用了一些比较高级的词汇和复合句就算完成了任务。其实，这种想法指导下的写作在实际考试中很容易使考生忽视把握论证的方向，造成写作扣题不严密，论点表述不完整，更严重还会导致跑题。最近雅思作文题目中争论的焦点难以把握。很多考生看到题目中认识的单词，然后就发挥自己想象，天马行空下笔就写。但是这样的作文无论语言质量多高，也拿不到好的分数。只有把握题目争论重心，才能保证论证有的放矢，获得高分。

例子 1、
Air transport is increasingly being used to export many types of fruits and vegetables to countries where those plants can’t grow or are out of season. Some say that it is a good thing, but others consider that such use of air transport can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 空运各种蔬菜和水果到不出产这些蔬菜水果的国家或者到这些东西已经过季了的国家越来越司空见惯，有人赞同，有人反对，请评价双方论点并给出自己的看法。

题目分析：
这篇作文为2004年9月18日A类雅思考题。题目表面是谈论蔬菜水果和空运的话题，实际上考生需要明白蔬菜、水果作为食品属于商品，商品的一个特点就是要满足不同层次的消费需要。作为一种高成本的服务方式，空运满足的是高消费水平人群，而其他低成本运输服务方式满足的是普通消费水平人群。明白了这一点，就很容易分别解释、评价两种对立论点，最后进行总结，提出自己看法。

很多经验不足的考生审题时思路往往不清楚，抓不住问题的主要和本质方面。针对本题的飞机和蔬菜，有的考生可能会描写飞机运输的便利性，然后联想到飞机的发明、对人类的贡献等等和题目关联性很小的话题上，也可能会有考生花费很多篇幅讨论蔬菜和水果对人体健康的重要性，诸如此类的论点都属于跑题。

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发表于 2005-9-13 08:49:19 |只看该作者

雅思作文审题技巧(下)

例子 2、Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 交通和住房是城市的主要问题，把大公司和工厂及员工移到郊区可能解决该问题，你同意这样的看法吗？

题目分析：
该题目提出大城市交通堵塞和居住紧张问题，建议解决方案是把大公司和员工转移到郊区。根据我们的生活经验和知识，造成上述问题原因可能有很多，文中并没有提供任何证据说明大公司和其员工是造成问题的主要原因。考生可以提出一些其他原因证明这个解决方案可能不会奏效。这些原因可以是：交通设施落后old transport infrastructure、交通管理水平低下poor traffic control、城市人口增长过快 fast population growth、住房供应不足 inadequate housing supply等。如果考生不深入思考这个题目可能会提出类似以下错误论点：

The city, large corporate, and factories could suffer substantial financial loss because business operation is usually more difficult in faraway location than in the city.

考生可能认为：如果公司赔钱，城市的税收收入减少，政府就更没有钱来改善交通和居住条件了。但是这种思维不能直接解释把公司或者工厂移到市郊去是否能解决问题，所以是不适合作为论点的。还有人考虑到这样做可以增加当地就业、造成环境恶化、或者迁移带来的公司运营成本增加等等论点都不属于本题讨论之列。

在审题的过程中，特别是阅读题目内容比较长的题目时，考生可以在自己认为重要的单词、短语下面做标记。做标记的好处是重点的部分一目了然，在考虑题目的时候，尽量考虑全面，这样写作的信息和线索才会比较多。

看完题目后，要迅速的考虑自己对题目的论点是什么。论点可以是赞成，可以是反对，也可以是部分赞成部分反对。雅思考试的题目往往叙述比较宽泛，没有加太多限制条件。考生要关注的不是论点新颖与否，也不是论点正确与否。特别要注意的是：论点只是给后面的论述定下一个方向和基调，所以考生不要为了追求论点过于花费时间和心思，这样对于写作新手来说结果往往是得不偿失。

例子 3：
Now many people think that we are spending too much money and time on protecting wild animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree? 目前很多人认为我们在保护野生动物上花费的太多，这些钱如果用在人身上会更好。你赞成还是反对？

题目分析：
本题为2003年12月13日的一道考题，题目把保护动物和促进人类发展两个表面矛盾的目的对立起来。如果深入考虑这两个目的，我们可以发现动物保护和人类发展之间虽然相互独立，但并不矛盾。考生可以分别陈述、论证保护野生动物的理由，最后在加以归纳。也可以采取相反的论点并加以论证。

有的同学在论述支持野生动物保护的论点中提到：Scientists have found that the body of certain kinds of animal contains genes that are similar to those of human beings and could be used to treat diseases in the future.

考生如果继续探讨动物基因和人基因的相似性，就偏离了题目要求的重心。应该考虑的重点要遵循：因为动物基因对治疗人类疾病可能有帮助，所以保护野生动物是有益的，反之则可能对人类自身产生负面影响这个大思路。

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