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发表于 2005-7-30 17:05:17 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

83"Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."

With the developing of industrialization in many countries of the world there is not many wild forests or wild areas any more. Most of them become cities or big industry areas and not only the natural view but also many natural species are disappearing from our life, many wild animals are losing their home and facing to the danger of dieing out. I strongly agree with that the government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state however remote these areas are. There are a lot of benefits if we are to do so.

At the first place, to protect these wildness areas help us to keep the biologic variety. In the past years the industry culture make the city full of skyscrapers and crowded peoples, we have been destroying our natural living environment indeliberately and the noise and pollution make many animals which have been living together with us are disappearing. Under such circumstance we can not pull down our buildings and recover it to the forest again. To solve such a puzzle to seek a natural wildness area and protect it from the destroy of our human being is a effective way. Having such an area many wild animals find their suitable living area and we would not worry about every day that these wild animals will die out. A successful example is the Sichuan wildness area in china. In this wildness area, because of the suitable natural environment where it is keep the state of the virgin forest, the scientists help the panda, which is a kind of valuable rare animals only live in some areas of china, propagating and surviving successfully. So do many other valuable animals, they can live as they always do and do not afraid any artificial destroy which are need them to accommodate with in the protected wildness areas.

At the second place, anther reason for that the government should preserve publicly owned wildness area is these wildness areas help the scientists to do research on evolution of biology or the relationship among these natural biology groups. From these researches we can find that how can we human being live much more harmoniously with the other kinds of biology and how can we protect the natural environment well. The wildness area is usually a barrier to keep us from the cyclone and desert or other nature disaster for that the scientist would find some evidence in such wildness areas if the nature has any changes in climates or the atmosphere.
Moreover, the government should take active action to protect these wildness areas from poaching and denudation by some illegal hunters. Some illegal hunters often explore the nature resources greedily without considering how value these resources are. They only aim to profit but they don’t know once these valuable wood or animal are damaged nothing can be made up. In order to avoid such accident the government should pay more attention and money on preserving these wildness areas no matter how remote theses areas are and how many people can visit to.

In sum, to protect these areas there are a lot of work the government need to do, and it is also not an easy task. It needs endurance and patience. The government also needs to educate all the citizens that the protection of the wildness areas needs everybody to pay more attention on it. While there maybe still someone who are unconvinced, what’s above should at least make them aware of the some aspects of the issue and it might be the first step out of the dilemma.

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发表于 2005-7-30 22:46:57 |只看该作者

好的，我来拍拍你

With the developing of industrialization in many countries of the world there is not many wild forests or wild areas any more. Most of them become cities or big industry areas and not only the natural view but also many natural species are disappearing from our lifelives, many wild animals are losing their home and facing to the danger of dieing out. I strongly agree with that the government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state however no matter how remote these areas are. There are a lot of benefits if we are to do so.

At the first place, to protect these wildness areas helps us to keep the biologic variety. In the past years the industry culture make the city be full of skyscrapers and crowded peoples, we have been destroying our natural living environment indeliberately, and the noise and pollution make many animals which have been living together with us are disappearing. Under such circumstance we can not pull down our buildings and recover it to the forest again. To solve such a puzzle to seek a natural wildness area and protect it from the destroy of our human being is a effective way. Having such an area, many wild animals find their suitable living area and we would not worry about every day that these wild animals will die out. A successful example is the Sichuan wildness area in china. In this wildness area, because of the suitable natural environment wherewhich it is(去掉) keeps the state of the virgin forest, the scientists help the panda, which is(去掉) a kind of valuable and rare animals animal only liveliving, propagating and surviving successfully in some areas of china. So do many other valuable animals, they can live as they always do and doare not afraid of any artificial destroy which are need them to accommodate with in the protected wildness areas. 最后半句我不太懂你的意思，最好改改．

At the second place, another reason for that the government should preserve publicly owned wildness area is that these wildness areas help the scientists to do research on evolution of biology or the relationship among these natural biology groups. From these researches we can find that how can we human being live much more harmoniously with the other kinds of biology and how can we protect the natural environment well. The wildness area is usually a barrier to keep us from the cyclone and desert or other nature disaster for that the scientists would find some evidence in such wildness areas if the nature has any changes in climates or the atmosphere.

Moreover, the government should take active action to protect the plants and animals in these wildness areas from poaching and denudation by some illegal woodchoppers and hunters. Some illegal hunters often explore the nature resources greedily without considering how value these resources are.经济价值他应该是考虑的，但很可能没有考虑这样做的后果 They only aim to profit but they don’t know that once these valuable woods or animals are damaged, nothing can be made up.有点绝对，植物可再生，动物可繁殖，最好说过度砍伐捕掠会导致再生速度跟不上 In order to avoid such accident，这个词不太恰当吧 the government should pay more attention and money on preserving these wildness areas no matter how remote theses areas are and how many people can visit to.

In sum, to protect these areas there areis a lot of work the government need to do, and it is also not an easy task. It needs endurance and patience. The government also needs to educate all the citizens, thatsince the protection of the wildness areas needs everybody to pay more attention on itattentions from everyone. While there may be still someone who areis unconvinced, what’s不要用缩写 above should at least make them be aware of the(去掉) some aspects of the issue and it might be the first step out of the dilemma.

what’s above should at least 是什么，没懂
二三段观点较清楚，表述还需加强，题目的后半句没做什么论述，可以考虑一下
以上是我的一点不成熟的看法，还希望能多交流
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