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issue159 The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

1. machine has indeed superior to human in some aspect
2. the lack of creativity, emotions, learning ability and need of running energy compared of humans
3. the superior of machine to human is appearance, in fact human will always control the machine
4. in deep concern, human create machine, and human will also destroy machine.

Mechanical production would be characterized as a fast development from ancient time to present, as their bringing largely convenience as well as decreases the quantity of work loan of humans. However, as machine lack important nature specialized by humans, they would always acting as tools assisting to solve some difficult problems that human would not have ability to conquer themselves. The time, as some science fiction describes that machine would dominate human, would never likely to come.

Machine, as the product of development of science and technology and progress of humans, could substitute humans to perform vexed repeated and high accurate jobs. In fact, these jobs are less likely to qualify well by humans than machines. Running with electronic current whose (traveling speed) are extremely fast, the machine could calculate (10的n次方) times of humans, especially in some complicated operation such as exponent degree(这句话我不是太会表达,请帮忙翻译一下"电流的传导速度很快,被电流驱动的机器的运算速度是人的手工运算的10的n次方倍,尤其是在一些特别复杂的运算中,比如说具有指数阶复杂度的问题"). Besides, the memorial capability of machine would largely superior to which of humans due to information could not be lost saving on special hard-disk equipment. For example, chess-playing system could remember thousands of experts’ methods, while a normal person is less likely to reach. Furthermore, machine could guarantee the accurateness of any operation by disintegrating complicated factors to zero and one.

Although machine has so many advantages superior to human being, the defect of them could not be complemented. Firstly, the creativity thought which unique in human minds would not come true on the machine. That is, machines would always waiting for human's cramming with information and strictly follow rules to run them with no thought at all. Secondly, no machine, according to Lord Kelvin, could operate without human's providing energy resources such as electricity which would not be necessarily to maintain human thought. Another disadvantage machine have is their lacking of emotions and learning ability that inspires the willing or enthusiasm for accomplish jobs. Thus, no machine would achieve a great work such as Romeo and Juliet lacking Shakespeare's emotion, or continually make progress automatically learning from others.

Through a careful examination both of the benefits and disadvantages of machine, the inability which impedes potential development surpasses to their advantages. One would be obviously obtained the large benefits machine brought, for example, during mid of eighteenth and 70th of nineteenth century, revolution of mechanical production substitute crafty work, especially vapor machine(蒸气机是不是这样说的?) could equal to large human labors and generated huge profits. However, this is only the appearance phenomenon and accurately, the work of machine are controlled by human. That is, human owns and controls the produce material as well as the profits while machine are only used as tools for doing the work. Many high-technique inventions present--either spacecraft entering space or robot exploring in deep sea--are all controlled and monitored by humans in terminal and what they contribute or observe are all recorded by humans.

In this case, we may clearly find that the machines only know what to do rather than how. It is human orders, giving programming codes to make machine execute step by step. Their fast, accurate and large memory could only superior in performing jobs strictly and following human's instructions without violation and what they achieve would ultimately benefit humans. Additionally, there would are no perfect machine, or even dominate humans, as any programming codes given by human has more than one flaws and a machine might easily be collapsed by humans' attacking these holes. Thus, it is obvious that machine made of humans could also be destroyed by humans, which analogues any tools: humans would use as their wishing and throw away freely.

In sum, machine indeed has their own advantages as performing works, but the lacking of creativity and other characteristics which human unique might determine their fortune to be the tools of human.

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发表于 2006-1-5 15:46:06 |只看该作者

啊啊啊~~~写了这么多，感觉很有成就感的~~~

闲人都进来帮忙看看啊！！！！！！

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忍不住欣赏欣赏阿布的作品... :)

issue159 The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

1. machine has indeed superior to human in some aspect
2. the lack of creativity, emotions, learning ability and need of running energy compared of humans (恩, 科技不断进步, 在这些方面也是在不断突破的, 也不能否认会有实现这些能力的那一天吧, 尽管我对题目也是持同意的态度是. 呵, 想到了,就说说.)3. the superior of machine to human is appearance, in fact human will always control the machine
4. in deep concern, human create machine, and human will also destroy machine.

Mechanical production would be characterized as a fast development from ancient time to present, as their bringing largely convenience as well as decreases the quantity of work loan of humans (感觉挺顺畅的). However, as machine lack important nature specialized by humans, they would always acting as tools assisting to solve some difficult problems that human would not have ability to conquer (by?) themselves. The time, as some science fiction describes (time应该是被described吧.)that machine would dominate human, would never likely to come.

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发表于 2006-1-5 17:19:17 |只看该作者

呵呵~~shiel那么忙还帮俺改作业~~感动-ing:p

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发表于 2006-1-6 04:17:05 |只看该作者

Mechanical production would be characterized as a fast development from ancient time to present, as their bringing largely convenience as well as decreases the quantity of work loan of humans. However, as machine lack important nature specialized by humans, they would always acting as tools assisting to solve some difficult  problems (rote  tasks 更能说明是TOOLS完成的)that human would not have ability to conquer themselves. The time, as some science fiction describes that machine would dominate human, would never likely to come.

Machine, as the product of development of science and technology and progress of humans, could substitute humans to perform vexed repeated and high accurate jobs. In fact, these jobs are less likely to qualify well by humans than machines. Running with electronic current whose (traveling speed) are extremely fast, the machine could calculate (10的n次方) times of humans, especially in some complicated operation such as exponent degree(这句话我不是太会表达,请帮忙翻译一下"电流的传导速度很快,被电流驱动的机器的运算速度是人的手工运算的10的n次方倍,尤其是在一些特别复杂的运算中,比如说具有指数阶复杂度的问题")（这句话是我们最近专业英语考题，你太厉害了）. Besides, the memorial capability of machine would largely superior to which of humans due to information could not be lost saving on special hard-disk equipment. For example, chess-playing system could remember thousands of experts’ methods, while a normal person is less likely to reach. Furthermore, machine could guarantee the accurateness of any operation by disintegrating complicated factors to zero and one.

Although machine has so many advantages superior to human being, the defect of them could not be complemented. Firstly, the creativity thought which unique in human minds would not come true on the machine. That is, machines would always waiting for human's cramming with information and strictly follow rules to run them with no thought at all. Secondly, no machine, according to Lord Kelvin, could operate without human's providing energy resources such as electricity which would not be necessarily to maintain human thought. Another disadvantage machine have is their lacking of emotions and learning ability that inspires the willing or enthusiasm for accomplish jobs. Thus, no machine would achieve a great work such as Romeo and Juliet lacking Shakespeare's emotion, or continually make progress automatically learning from others.

Through a careful examination both of the benefits and disadvantages of machine, the inability which impedes potential development surpasses to their advantages. One would be obviously obtained the large benefits machine(s) （had 完成时可能比过去时效果好点表达large benefits）brought, for example, during mid of eighteenth and 70th of nineteenth century, revolution of mechanical production substitute crafty work, especially vapor machine(蒸气机是不是这样说的?) could equal to large human labors and generated huge profits. However, this is only the appearance  phenomenon and accurately, (????准确的说？也可以换成 in fact indeed 加在后句中）the work of machine are controlled by human. That is, human owns and controls the produce material as well as the profits while machine are only used as tools for doing the work. Many high-technique inventions present--either spacecraft entering space or robot exploring in deep sea--are all controlled and monitored by humans in terminal and what they contribute or observe are all recorded by humans.

In this case, we may clearly find that（It is clearly that) the machines only know what to do rather than how. It is human orders, giving programming codes to make machine execute step by step. Their fast, accurate and large memory could only superior(is the word of superior  a verb???) in performing jobs strictly and following human's instructions without violation and what they achieve would ultimately benefit humans. Additionally, there would are no perfect machine, or even dominate humans, as any programming codes given by human has more than one flaws and a machine might easily be collapsed by humans' attacking these holes. Thus, it is obvious that machine made of humans could also be destroyed by humans, which analogues any tools: humans would use as their wishing and throw away freely.

In sum, machine indeed has their own advantages as performing works, but the lacking of creativity and other characteristics which human unique might determine their fortune to be the tools of human.

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发表于 2006-1-6 10:30:01 |只看该作者

谢谢Pluckf的修改，我觉得在语言方面真的要向你好好学习的~~~

呵呵，我是学计算机的，所以写这篇文章的时候感觉比较顺畅，就是有些知识翻译不到英文上去~~~哎哎

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发表于 2006-1-7 20:49:49 |只看该作者

haha~~~Coffee!!!!
Please revise my issue~~~3k3k3k~~~:D

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发表于 2006-1-11 10:46:54 |只看该作者

阿布不好意思,改晚了,感冒+考试,日子不好混啊~~~:)

Mechanical production would be characterized as a fast development from ancient time to present, as their bringing largely convenience as well as decreases the quantity of work loan of humans. However, as machine lack important nature specialized by humans, they would always acting as tools assisting to solve some difficult problems that human would not have ability to conquer themselves. The time, as some science fiction describes that machine would dominate human, would never likely to come.
立场：机器有一些优势，但只是工具，不可能超过人类
Machine, as the product of development of science and technology and progress of humans, could substitute humans to perform vexed repeated and high accurate jobs. In fact, these jobs are less likely to qualify well by humans than machines. Running with electronic current whose (traveling speed) are extremely fast, the machine could calculate (10的n次方)(10^n这样可以不？计算机表达式是这样的，呵呵) times of humans, especially in some complicated operation such as exponent degree(这句话我不是太会表达,请帮忙翻译一下"电流的传导速度很快,被电流驱动的机器的运算速度是人的手工运算的10的n次方倍,尤其是在一些特别复杂的运算中,比如说具有指数阶复杂度的问题").（in some specially complex operation, for instance, in complex question with exponent 专业的词汇搞不定） Besides, the memorial capability of machine would largely superior to which of humans due to information could not be lost saving on special hard-disk equipment. For example, chess-playing system could remember thousands of experts’ methods, while a normal person is less likely to reach. Furthermore, machine could guarantee the accurateness of any operation by disintegrating complicated factors to zero and one.
机器的优点
Although machine has so many advantages superior to human being, the defect of them could not be complemented. Firstly, the creativity thought which unique in human minds would not come true on the machine. That is, machines would always waiting for human's cramming with information and strictly follow rules to run them with no thought at all. Secondly, no machine, according to Lord Kelvin, could operate without human's providing energy resources such as electricity which would not be necessarily to maintain human thought. Another disadvantage machine have is their lacking of emotions and learning ability that inspires the willing or enthusiasm for accomplish jobs. Thus, no machine would achieve a great work such as Romeo and Juliet lacking Shakespeare's emotion, or continually make progress automatically learning from others.
机器的劣势
Through a careful examination both of the benefits and disadvantages of machine, the inability which impedes potential development surpasses to their advantages. One would be obviously obtained the large benefits machine brought, for example, during mid of eighteenth and 70th of nineteenth century, revolution of mechanical production substitute crafty work, especially vapor machine(蒸气机是不是这样说的?)（steam engine） could equal to large human labors and generated huge profits. However, this is only the （appearance phenomenon，呵呵，换这个：superficies） and （accurately？怎么来了个正面词，不明白）, the work of machine are controlled by human. That is, human owns and controls the produce material as well as the profits while machine are only used as tools for doing the work. Many high-technique inventions present--either spacecraft entering space or robot exploring in deep sea--are all controlled and monitored by humans in terminal and what they contribute or observe are all recorded by humans.
衡量优势和劣势，得出人类终究超过机器
In this case, we may clearly find that the machines only know what to do rather than how. It is human orders, giving programming codes to make machine execute step by step. Their fast, accurate and large memory could only superior in performing jobs strictly and following human's instructions without violation and what they achieve would ultimately benefit humans. Additionally, there would are no perfect machine, or even dominate humans, as any programming codes given by human has more than one flaws and a machine might easily be collapsed by humans' attacking these holes. Thus, it is obvious that machine made of humans could also be destroyed by humans, which analogues any tools: humans would use as their wishing and throw away freely.
人类的主导权，不可能让机器主宰世界
In sum, machine indeed has their own advantages as performing works, but the lacking of creativity and other characteristics which human unique might determine their fortune to be the tools of human.
总得来说，结构清晰，论证严密，词汇用得也不错。
观点保守，但能保证论述不出差错。
呵呵，更想看看反面观点，想到两部电影：剪刀手爱德华，机器管家，里面的机器人都比人类高级，不管是肉体上还是精神上，如果不扼制人类的残酷与贪婪，对比起来人类才应该走向灭亡。
知道反论起来难度有点大，等考完试，写个详细的提纲看看。

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