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发表于 2006-2-27 13:36:19 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

这是ISSUE10 "Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial s
upport they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that
a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated."

以下是本人的第一篇作文，恳请大家指正！不胜感激！

There is a growing concern over the issue of the preservation of the

cultural traditions in major cities .The speaker in the title statement

advocates that the major cities must receive the finacial support as they

preserve and generate a nation's culture.I cannot completely agree with it

althrough it is somewhat reasonable.
First of all ,I must admitted that there are a majority of cities which are

characterized by their long culture traditions,such as Paris,London and so

on.For instance ,Triumphal Arch,which is famous all over the world for its

grand view.The magnificent surface of it shows the romantic traditions of

Frenchmen to the world.On the other hand ,as the most representative

building in Great Britain,Big Ben,in some degree,express the serious

character of Englishmen.Both of the two countries' culture traditions are

generated and preserved in major cities,as a result,it is reasonable for the

governments ensure these cities receive the finacial support.
Altough I agree that many major cities should receive the finacial support

for their contribution to the generation and preservation of a nation's

cultural traditions,I insist that it will not benefit some nations if their

government ensure that their major cities receive the finacial

support.Actually,not all the major cities of a country are bound to the

responsibility of preserving a nation's culture traditions.I can give you an

illustration about that.Shenzhen, a beautiful city which is next to HongKong

in southern part of China,is developing so fast in last 25 years that it is

called "a place full of gold" althrough a lot of years ago it is only a

fishing village of Guangdong Province.As one of the major cities in China,

this city should not receive the financial support on preserving the

nation's cultural traditions because it really has little cultural

traditions.
Moreover,a nation's distinct cultural traditions-its folk

art,crafts,traditional songs and customs are generated and handed in small

towns and rural regions.A case in point, in the USA, we can visit a large

quantitiesof Indian villages which retain some cultural traditions of

people's lives in the continent of North America in an early age.In my

opinoin,the government also should support these areas on finance in order

to preserve their cultural traditions.It is hard to imagine how serious if

the Indian culture extinct.
Finally ,from what has been discussed above,althrough there are some minor

advantages for the government to support the major cities for their boon not

only in economy but also in culture.,we can draw the conclusion that not all

the major cities should be supported as a result of the lackness of cultral

traditins in some of them,at the same time,the rural regions which preserved

the nation's cultural traditions should receive the support from the

government.

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