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发表于 2006-7-14 21:26:18 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

观点：有保留的赞成
提纲：
1开头表明观点，艺术家的确比评论家重要，但是长久价值是他们两者的共同原因
2长久价值的定义以及产生长久价值的原因
3 艺术家比评论家重要的原因
•原创性
•对于艺术家作品理解的多样性
4评论家是连接艺术家和普通大众的桥梁
5总结

In my opinion, the artist actually plays a more important role in giving the society lasting value compared to the critics. However, the importance of the latter can not be neglect, and it's the combination of the two lead to the lasting value.

Lasting value, in my view, is the inherent attributes, which can be an attitude, a point of view, or even just beauty, of a masterpiece which can benefit the multitude for rather a long time. The reason that some of the music, novels, paintings, and films are of lasting value is that they reflect the society environment, disclose the author's good dispositions such as determinant, modest, and brave etc., or give insight to the human nature. All of them have the inherent attributes, from which the people can learn much to either handle the common affairs in life or gain a positive world view.

According to what I have defined for the lasting value, we can easily conclude that the artist contributes more to it for two reasons. First of all, the artist creates the works with originality while the critic performs their evaluation on the artist's works. Although the originality is not sufficient for the lasting value since not every original creation can be consider to be good, it is a necessary condition. As a result, the inherent attributes of lasting value are due to the artist. The second reason is that the various comprehensions of the artist’s works by different people result in diverse inherent attributes, since artist expresses their ideas in the works without explicitly stated them. On the contrary, the critic conveys personal view by plain words for the purpose of clear understanding which leads to single inherent attributes. Take the music for instance, the layman will benefit from the dulcet melody, while an experienced musician will be startle at the method of creation, and when it comes to a critic, he may be deeply moved by the sadness mood in the music.

Although I concede the great importance of the artist, the function of critics can not be neglect. The artists express their ideas in different methods, either painting or sonata, but it is the critics who use the words to express their opinion on the artist's works. There is no doubt that not everyone can understand the masterpieces. The critics can help the reader to perceive it by interpreting them into concise and accurate language. There is a common phenomenon that many artists can not be recognized in their age; only when the critics discover the merits of their works can they be regard as the preeminent artists. The great musician Beethoven, who died of misery and poverty, is a good example. Therefore, the critics bridge the reader common people and the artists.

To conclude, although the artist is proven to be more important in giving the society lasting value compared to the critics, both the artist and critic are indispensable to the lasting value.

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沙发

发表于 2006-7-14 23:43:00 |只看该作者

小弟看了这篇文章
些发很独到
但是感觉很肤浅的

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板凳

发表于 2006-7-15 18:20:28 |只看该作者

Thanks!

Thanks for your advice.

Do you have some suggestions to extend the perspective?

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地板

发表于 2006-7-23 04:02:44 |只看该作者

十号的修改:
In my opinion, the artist actually plays a more important role in giving the society lasting value compared to the critics. However, the importance of the latter can not be neglect[ed], and it's the combination of the two[that] lead to the lasting value.

Lasting value, in my view, is the inherent attributes, which can be an attitude, a point of view, or even just beauty, of a masterpiece which can benefit the multitude for rather a long time. The reason that some of the music, novels, paintings, and films are of lasting value is that they reflect the society environment, disclose the author's good dispositions[?] such as determinant, modest, and brave etc., or give insight to the human nature. All of them have the inherent attributes, from which the people can learn much to either handle the common affairs in life or gain a positive world view.

According to what I have defined for the lasting value, we can easily conclude that the artist contributes more to it for two reasons. First of all, the artist creates the works with originality while the critic performs their evaluation on the artist's works. Although the originality is not sufficient for the lasting value since not every original creation can be consider[ed] to be good, it is a necessary condition. As a result, the inherent attributes of lasting value are due to the artist. The second reason is that the various comprehensions of the artist’s works by different people result in diverse inherent attributes, since artist expresses their ideas in the works without explicitly stated[stating] them. On the contrary, the critic conveys personal view by[我觉得with比较好] plain words for the purpose of clear understanding which leads to single inherent attributes. Take the music for instance, the layman will benefit from the dulcet melody, while an experienced musician will be startle at the method of creation, and when it comes to a critic, he may be deeply moved by the sadness mood in the music.

Although I concede the great importance of the artist, the function of critics can not be neglect[ed]. The artists express their ideas in different methods, either painting or sonata[这个词似乎应该改一下，有点不平衡], but it is the critics who use the words to express their opinion on the artist's works. There is no doubt that not everyone can understand the masterpieces. The critics can help the reader to perceive it by interpreting them into concise and accurate language. There is a common phenomenon that many artists can not be recognized in their age; only when the critics discover the merits of their works can they be regard[ed] as the preeminent artists. The great musician Beethoven, who died of misery and poverty, is a good example. Therefore, the critics bridge the reader common people and the artists.

To conclude, although the artist is proven[proved] to be more important in giving the society lasting value compared to the critics, both the artist and critic are indispensable to the lasting value.
Comments: 文章不错啊，观点鲜明，语言也很好。呵呵，水平有限，都改不出什么。。。。。

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发表于 2006-7-23 19:42:41 |只看该作者

谢谢，我觉得还应该大改

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发表于 2006-8-9 14:42:45 |只看该作者

今天又改了改，贴上来

In my opinion, the artist actually plays a more important role in giving the society lasting value compared with the critics. At the same time, the importance of the latter can not be neglected, and it's the combination of the two that leads to the lasting value.

Lasting value, in my view, is the inherent attributes, which can be an attitude, a point of view, or even just beauty, of a masterpiece which can benefit the multitude for rather a long time. The reason that some of the music, novels, paintings, and films are of lasting value is that they reflect the society environment, disclose the author's good personalities such as determinant, modest, and brave etc, or give insight to the human nature. All of them have the inherent attributes, from which the people can learn much to either handle the common affairs in life or gain a positive world view.

According to what I have defined for the lasting value, we can easily conclude that the artist contributes more to it for two reasons. First of all, the artist creates the works with originality while the critic performs their evaluation on the artist's works. Although the originality is not sufficient for the lasting value since not every original creation can be considered to be good, it is a necessary condition. Imitating or plagiarism is of little meaning, not to mention lasting value. On the contrary, some artists use their wisdom and imagination, incorporated their own experience, to bring about a piece of artistic work. As a result, the inherent attributes of lasting value are attributable to the artist. The second reason is that the various comprehensions of the artist’s works by different people result in diverse inherent attributes, since artist expresses their ideas in the works without explicitly stated them. Nonetheless, the critic conveys personal view by plain words for the purpose of clear understanding which leads to single inherent attributes. Take the music for instance, the layman might benefit from the dulcet melody, while an experienced musician might be startle at the method of creation, and when it comes to a critic, perhaps he is deeply moved by the sad mood in the music. Hence it is only the artist himself can interpret the true meaning of his works. For the above two reasons, the lasting value of the works are dominant by the artists.

Although I concede the great importance of the artist, the function of critics can not be neglected. The artists express their ideas in different methods such as painting, music, literature, or film, but it is the critics who use the words to express their opinion on the artist's works, which make the works understandable for the common peoples. There is no doubt that not everyone can understand the masterpieces. The critics can help the reader to perceive it by interpreting them into concise and accurate language. There is a common phenomenon that many artists can not be recognized in their age; only when the critics discover the merits of their works can they be regard as the preeminent artists. The great musician Beethoven, who died of misery and poverty, is a good example. Therefore, the critics bridge the reader common people and the artists.

To conclude, although the artist is proven to be more important in giving the society lasting value in comparison to the critics, both the artist and critic are indispensable to the lasting value.

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