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I support the speaker's assertion that any field of study needs knowledge and experience from other fields so that it can advance significantly. Obviously, to a same subject, people in different fields own different ideas, which may be good for better recognizing the subject accurately.  

That the speaker is on the correct philosophical side is the fundamental reason why I strongly agree with the speaker. Nothing exists lonely and anything cannot shirk to be in the net of all kinds of connection around itself. For example, any person, even any tribe which is isolated from the world, have a very sound connection to the environment which at last supplies food and water to let him live, and to many people around him, such as his parents, his children, his friends and the like.（这里感觉举例不合适，改成类比好了） In fact, similarly, a field of study also exists in a net, connecting other fields, even before this field of study develops significantly. Examples to illustrate the point are sufficient, as discussed below.

One example is genetics, a branch of biology. As its developing, from its initial appearance, to now its being a major and important subject, it actually remains to utilize a kind of technology of many other fields such as computer science, chemistry, mathe, and so forth. With such valuable technology, scientists have accomplished the Human Genome project and have entirely mapped and sequenced human genome, which will no doubt do good for(这里不知道用for还是to)healing many genetic diseases and some chronic diseases like cancer and so on. In short, it is these technologies used in genetics that makes such significant progress, and without these technology, could we not imagine when to make such progress.(这里用到装吗？)
Another example to support the speaker's assertion is the development of traditional Chinese medicine (TCM). In the past several years, TCM has absorbed many knowledge and experience from the western medicine. For example, many of the TCM's doctors have been using some medical gadgets -- thermometer, stethoscope, and so on -- as accessory diagnosing methods. Especially in the study of CTM's principle, researchers begin to use computer, which may be one of the most important inventions, and affiliate many a disciplines--pharmacology, psychology, etc. Accordingly, I believe CTM would be sure to remain foreseeable to a promising future while so many technologies and experience has been used.

In sum, knowledge and experience from different fields is so important in making progress to certain field of study, that it can bring new blood into the field and can make person observe the field in a new perspective. There is no doubt that the value should be admired of bringing knowledge and experience from different fields to some field of study. Moreover, people should endeavor to create as much value as we can by proceeding(taking)such action.

整体很不错，但是你的两个例子太孤立了，最好前面加主旨句