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发表于 2007-7-26 16:34:00 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue 144
History has ever witnessed so many great painters,musicians, playwrights and so on, such as Van Gogh, Beethoven, Shakespears, whose masterpieces arehallmarks for those brilliant personalities of different periods of time. Yet,critics, whose identities have long been forgotten, also give society somethingof lasting value.

Artists play a crucial role in the creationof the artistic works. Usually, in their search for a particular form of art,the artists work with a unique understanding for human’s mind and soul, andrelationship between nature and human beings. Great art works advocate the goodqualities of human world, attack the evil behavior and thoughts, and provideendless spiritual wealth to contemporaries and later generations. For example, RodinAugust’s sculptures show us his profound understanding of beauty, Mozart’s melodieslead us into a peaceful and purified world with love and enthusiasm to life, andRomain Rolland’s literatures inspire us struggle for Justice and hope. Suchvalues of art works would never disappear with the elapse of time, but cherishedby successive generations.

Compared with artists, critics are far lessfamous and their work is always at issure. They sometimes offer so different andeven controversial critics toward the same work that the original taste of thework might be shadowed by too many such comments. As a matter of fact, the soulof the work appears no longer sparkling, and the readers, or the viewers orlisteners become confused to appreciate the work. That is why many literaryteachers ask their students to read the original works and try to record theirgenuine feelings aroused by and echoing to the author’s descriptions, without relatedcritics’ commentary works.

Despite the above negative aspects, critics’work is meaningful or even necessary. In fact, the critics’ views to someextent contribute to the artists' creating valuable things for the society. Firstly,critics can help us understand and interpret art. A critic who is familiar witha particular artist and his or her works might have deeper insights about thoseworks than ordinary people. Perhaps they can offer us a fresh angle to appreciatesomething hidden in the work that merely from the surface ordinary people areunable to catch. For example, how can most of us understand Franz Kline’spaintings without critics’ help? Since his paintings are all style of AbstractExpression, its aesthetic value beyond ordinary people’s understanding range.In fact, we build our understanding on his paintings on the basis of critics’comments. Secondly, critics can greatly impulse the development of Art. Thefamous realism and modernism debate between Georg Luacs and Bertolt Brechtgreatly promoted the art development. Also, ClementGreenberg, American critic, propelledthe development of Modernist Art. Similarly, Pierre Restany, a famous Frenchcritic, led the movement of New Objectivity in the art history. Finally, acritic can provide feedback for artists; and constructive criticism, if takento heart, can result in better work.

In sum, different and even controversial criticisms might sometimes baffle people to appreciate works of art. However, critics’ workcontributes a lot to the lasting value created by artists. As the time passing,the greatest feats must be those which are created by artists and evaluated by critics.

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218.
1.好的艺术作品往往需要时间去理解其价值
2.不同作品有不同的受众，不一定非得大多数人理解
3.人们要提高自身的素养，而不是要求艺术家迎合自己的要求

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1.的确在很多领域，持有不同观点的领导取得了成功
2.然而，conviction不能被忽视
3.领导应会审时度势，在二者之间权衡
159
1.机器是人类制造的，因此，人类的智慧是高过机器的。
2.但是，机器在很多地方有优于人类智慧的地方
3.机器的智慧有限，而人的智慧是取之不竭的

157.
1.观察是由观察者执行的，主观难以避免
2.但是观察也带有客观的成分
3.我们应做到尽可能的客观

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发表于 2007-7-27 19:09:03 |只看该作者

Issue 144
History has ever witnessed so many great painters,musicians, playwrights and so on, such as Van Gogh, Beethoven, Shakespears, whose masterpieces are hallmarks for those brilliant personalities of different periods of time. Yet,critics, whose identities have long been forgotten, also give society something of lasting value.

Artists play a crucial role in the creation of the artistic works. Usually, in their search for a particular form of art,the artists work with a unique understanding for human’s mind and soul, andrelationship between nature and human beings. Great art works advocate the good qualities of human world, attack the evil behavior and thoughts, and provide endless spiritual wealth to contemporaries and later generations. For example, Rodin August’s sculptures show us his profound understanding of beauty, Mozart’s melodies lead us into a peaceful and purified world with love and enthusiasm to life, and Romain Rolland’s literatures inspire us struggle for Justice and hope. Suchvalues of art works would never disappear with the elapse of time, but cherishedby successive generations.（艺术家很关键）

Compared with artists, critics are far less famous and their work is always at issure. They sometimes offer so different and even controversial critics toward the same work that the original taste of the work might be shadowed by too many such comments. As a matter of fact, the soul of the work appears no longer sparkling, and the readers, or the viewers or listeners become confused to appreciate the work. That is why many literaryteachers ask their students to read the original works and try to record their genuine feelings aroused by and echoing to the author’s descriptions, without related critics’ commentary works.(是说批评家的不好吧)

Despite the above negative aspects, critics’work is meaningful or even necessary. In fact, the critics’ views to someextent contribute to the artists' creating valuable things for the society（这句话很中式英文，但是things加的定语太多了我也不知道怎么表达比较地道） . Firstly,critics can help us understand and interpret art. A critic who is familiar with a particular artist and his or her works might have deeper insights about those works than ordinary people. Perhaps they can offer us a fresh angle(个人觉得用angle很中式英语，我建议用access) to appreciate something(用essense?) hidden in the work that merely from the surface ordinary people are unable to catch. For example, how can most of us understand Franz Kline’spaintings without critics’ help? Since his paintings are all style of Abstract Expression, its aesthetic value beyond ordinary people’s understanding range.In fact, we build our understanding on his paintings on the basis of critics’comments. Secondly, critics can greatly impulse the development of Art. Thefamous realism and modernism debate between Georg Luacs and Bertolt Brecht greatly promoted the art development. Also, ClementGreenberg, American critic, propelledthe development of Modernist Art. Similarly, Pierre Restany, a famous Frenchcritic, led the movement of New Objectivity in the art history. Finally, acritic can provide feedback for artists; and constructive criticism, if takento heart, can result in better work. （批评家工作有意义）

In sum, different and even controversial criticisms might sometimes baffle people to appreciate works of art. However, critics’ workcontributes a lot to the lasting value created by artists. As the time passing,the greatest feats must be those which are created by artists and evaluated by critics.
总体来说非常的完美。除了一些小小的表达瑕疵之外，无论是例证的丰富性，还是结构的严谨性，都是非常令人赏心悦目的。（强烈要求指导下我们艺术类的例子呵呵）

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