[i习作temp] Issue 13 @@A Dream @@ 小组第一次作业by robertxj [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-6-5 03:22:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue还都不知道写什么，完全没思路，这两天也没时间看，临交作业了，交了个四六级水平的文章，惭愧。。。会抓紧时间迎头赶上的！
The article tells us that many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them.And I agree that the governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.
On the one hand,a language stands for a culture,and protesting a language is the same as protesting a culture.So,the government must pay more attention to prevent languages from becoming extinct.Every language has its own story which maybe last several thousands years.It evolve from one form to another according its history.When you know a language completely,you can know the history of its motherland.In a word,the languages are precious,we must cherish them.
On the other hand,a language stands for a race.Having a unique language means you have an unparalled ethnicity.The language can differentiate you from others ,it is your symbol.
In sum,the languages are important and precious,we must protest them through various kinds of method ,education,politics,publicize and so on.I think,so long as we tru our best to protest the language,we will possess them forever.

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发表于 2009-6-7 22:15:22 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 nicoleq 于 2009-6-7 22:19 编辑

由于种种原因改晚了~很对不起~！

The article tells us that（你是以陈述背景开头的，直陈就好）many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them.And I agree that the governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.On the one hand,a language stands for a culture,and protesting（protecting？） a language is the same as protesting a culture.So,the government must pay more attention to prevent languages from becoming extinct.Every language has its own story which maybe last several thousands years.It evolve from one form to another according its history.When you know a language completely,you can know the history of its motherland.In a word,the languages are precious,we must cherish them.
On the other hand,a language stands for a race.Having a unique language means you have an unparalled（unparallel？） ethnicity.The language can differentiate you from others ,it is your symbol.
In sum,the languages are important and precious,we must protest them through various kinds of method ,education,politics,publicize and so on.I think,so long as we tru （try？）our best to protest the language,we will possess them forever.
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格式问题:标点后均应空一格。（画横线处）
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