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With the rapid development of technology and science, both human beings' material life and spirit life has experienced a fantastic change, including some social customs and traditions. Thus someone claims that technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics. While I maintain that technologies indeed exert immense influence on some of people's social customs and impose unprecedented impact on the ethics of society, I do not agree that technology determine social customs and ethics.
These days, many conventions, some of which even continue for many generations, have been altered or even eliminated along with the raped development of technology. People’s spirits and thoughts usually change with the situation, which imposes a great influence on human beings, otherwise they may find that they have been outdated or cannot adapt themselves to the new society. For example, women, in past days in the past, cannotdo not allowed to go out to work and but must stay at home to tend raise the their children and tend their husbands and or other family members; if some get rid of ‘some’ women try to break such barrier, they will receive discrimination and derisionfrom the society. And this is still very common and normal in the contemporary society, in which get rid of which that women cannot equate with men is a prevalent thought. However, nowadays, someone will be blamed even prosecuted, if he/she discriminates women, who now have the freedom to work outside, to do what whatever he or she likes and has the same right as men, which illustrates that some of our social customs have changed.这段论述change,但你没有谈到technologies啊?你举的妇女地位的例子很好,但没有点明和technologies的关系哦,到底technologies change了什么?人们的观念怎么联系到technologies. 我建议你做一个推理,technologies make education widely available, enhance modern mass media and facility wide exchange of ideas and value system. Thus they transform not only new ways of living but novel ways of thinking.
Also, some parts of the ethic in the society has have received far-reaching impact from theget rid of the technologies. Clone, for instance, a very hot issue in current days, has brought in many moral controversies and problems .On the one hand,on one hand it indeed has some advantages for human beings, for example, 和前面的 for instance 重复了可以写成such as the benefit that doctors can utilize clone technology try ‘it’ to reproduce some human organs which can be used to save patients' lives to replace malfunction parts for living saving. However, the ethic problems emerge. Consider that, for example,又重复啦 if some scientists clone a person, then how can we define their relationship-father and son, or brothers, or other correlations? And how can they inherit the bequests, enjoy human rights and so forth? .这个的ethic problem好像不太明显吧, 如果clone出hitler 那就爽了,其实clone很大的一个conflict 是with religion , 因为公然藐视创世者哦In short, ethic problems has indeed boomed these days for the reason of technology.
不够insightful, example is somewhat short and vague
However, some social customs and ethics have received no influence from the development of technology. The Saint Valentine’s Day, for example, lovers will exchange gifts to their sweethearts---rose, chocolate, and so on, which has never changed with the technology; one is not likely to find that a gentleman send a CD to his girlfriend for the technology technologies hashave developed to a digital world. And the ethics are even more stable, for long era,一个长的时代?? humans think honesty, fortitude, high moral standard,好像没有平行其哦?high moral standard includes honesty and fortitude as I think etc ,are very crucial virtues one should cherish, which has never changed with the development of the technology. One cannot say that, because the technology has influence humans much, then people must no longer be sincere, tenacious, and noble, but should tell lies, give up if encountering difficulties, and pursue one's goal via mean ways. Generally speaking, many social customs and ethics have not received impact from the technology.该把中心转到determine来啦,technologies 不能determine saint valentine’s day很好的例子啊,还可以举中国的春节,Moon day mid Autumn day, 一些racial activities啊。 关于道德还是避免为好,主观太强。看看《手机》就知道了)
And I insist that technology is not likely to determine social customs and ethics, even impossible. Human beings, often living in a special culture, have formed their own value systems, and are not likely to choose some technology inventions which may conflict with their beliefs and convictions, namely for protecting their own culture and values, they will not accept some controversial technology. Turn to the examples in the above paragraph that people do not permit the absolute development of clone technology just due to their primitive ethics standards, which hold that the social relationships between the person and his copies will drop in chaos and may bring in more social problems. That is, it is humans who determine their moral standard, not the technology, which, at most, can merely offer some impact on humans' social lives.和上一段合并一下如何?文章太长而没实际的东西觉得写短点好哦:
To summarize, technologies indeed impose some effect on some of people's social traditions and ethics; however, they cannot determine human's customs and ethics. Only human beings themselves can determine their traditions,why? You should discuss some thing on that if you have time nothing could change it. |
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