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作者: Kali    时间: 2002-12-5 14:04:06     标题: About PS - correction service

After my final exams (12/19), I should have some time free for myself. I am willing to use that time to correct people's personal statements. So if you don't need to hand in your PS until after Christmas, you can send a copy to me to have it corrected.

Please note:

1. The main things I can help you with are grammar and choice of words.

2. I can give very general suggestions about content, but I am not responsible for writing any original text for you.

3. While you can tell me the meaning of a certain sentence in Chinese, I will not to translate an entire PS from Chinese to English.

4. Please limit your PS to about 600 words MAXIMUM.

5. This volunteer service is ONLY available to the continually active participants of this board. I reserve the right to decline submissions from those who I feel are taking unfair advantage of my goodwill. If I receive more statements than I can handle, I will have to cut off those who emailed me late.

6. Although I am very confident in my writing abilities, I don't claim to be perfect.

7. One PS per person, please. If you don't need your PS corrected, I can correct one recommendation letter for you instead.

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A little bit about me: I came to U.S. at the age of 13 and am currently studying Government at Cornell.
作者: Kali    时间: 2002-12-5 14:31:26

I would like to help as many people as possible, so if I have any time left after going through PS, I'll see about recommendation letters. But I don't expect to be able to get to them.
作者: Kali    时间: 2002-12-5 14:35:43

But, if you don't need your PS corrected, I can correct one recommendation letter instead.
作者: booboo1    时间: 2002-12-5 17:01:13

Kali, you are so nice.
especially, you can present in this kind of chinese forum so frequently. I thought many people who came here when they was young already forgot where they came from.
怎么表达得这么繁?不管如何大家应该明白我的意思的,对吧?
问一下,应该怎么说更顺口?
作者: booboo1    时间: 2002-12-5 17:04:27

订正:was---were
尽管知道自己说的不地道,但也不应该有语法错误!
作者: 21cn    时间: 2002-12-5 20:13:10

真是好人. 虽然我还是打算自力更生.
作者: softcandy    时间: 2002-12-5 20:47:53

好人呀, by the way, kali, are you in USC?
21cn, me too.我也喜欢自力更生。 嘿嘿。
作者: Kali    时间: 2002-12-5 21:40:59

What's USC?
作者: softcandy    时间: 2002-12-5 22:33:50

maybe i made mistake. i have thought you stay in University of South California.
作者: Dreamm    时间: 2002-12-6 05:24:34

:)

谢谢班竹,You are so nice!
作者: Kali    时间: 2002-12-6 06:38:58

You are welcome. ^_^

To softcandy: Oh no, I only know of USC because I used to go to a business school.... ^_^
作者: glin99    时间: 2002-12-6 10:49:06

oh, that's nice! It will be very helpful!
作者: 飞飞~    时间: 2002-12-6 11:09:08

谢谢版主哦!
虽然对我来说也是太晚了,但是相信有很多人需要这样的帮助的!
偶知道PS给尽可能多的人看的话质量会更好的.减少语法错误,表达更地道,甚至结构上的建议.......恩,虽然是大雪寒天,但是这里却觉得暖洋洋啊~~
作者: xuer000    时间: 2002-12-6 17:07:33

Thanks Kali very much. You are so nice.
作者: Songlove    时间: 2002-12-6 18:11:50

热烈支持斑竹,呵呵,我想get help,一个人憋呀憋,也不知到底怎么样,发到哪里呢?
to softcandy
斑竹不是,我可是很想去usc的,呵呵。
作者: Kali    时间: 2002-12-6 20:38:28

ganymeda@yahoo.com

=)
作者: yuer33    时间: 2002-12-7 11:51:09

Kali, you are so nice!
I also want to get help because I can't make any progress in my PS.
作者: same xiaocao    时间: 2002-12-8 12:24:06     标题: 版主是个好人!

I am working on my career statement too!!!
oh, time is really pressing!!!
看见大家有这么大的干劲, 我也要努力啊!
作者: may33    时间: 2002-12-14 16:44:36

好人年年有,今年就特别多!
may33无限崇拜中……
作者: NeverEver    时间: 2002-12-29 05:31:56

Thanks a lot ~~~~ you are so nice. can i send my ps to you?
作者: tomorrow    时间: 2003-1-6 04:11:10     标题: can i get your help?

since i always come here, although i rarely say something
作者: wumi    时间: 2003-1-17 07:04:39     标题: thanks a lot!

I need you help too!
作者: wumi    时间: 2003-1-18 07:11:06     标题: Kali

I have mail your my PS. Thank you for your concern




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