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本帖最后由 lovetian 于 2011-9-8 22:00 编辑
第一篇 I
The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you
take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these
considerations shape your position.
Does it depend on the type of life which people live being luxury and convenient that they cannot develop into truly strong and have independent individuals? The speaker claims so, however, in my view, I tend to agree with this theory that whether a person can develop into truly strong and independent characteristics or not has not so much business with the living condition. Many other reasons, such as ignoring her selves’ value or always being doubted by her surrounding people, can result this consequence that she cannot develop into truly strong and independent individual.
Firstly, in my opinion, whether life is luxury and convenient or not does not have so much influence in the formation of a person’s personality, that is to say, people can develop into a truly strong independent characteristic with such life if they hold vigorous attitudes toward life. Maybe you know BILL GATES'S HOUSE, which has a total assessed value of 147.5 million U.S dollars, is a house designed in the Pacific lodge style with classic features such as a large private library with a dome shaped roof and all the rooms in this house can automatically adjust temperature, music, and lighting based on the guest's preferences. Apparently, living in this luxury and convenient house doesn’t let Gates away from a person with strength and independence.
Then, finding the value of their own is one of the most significant factors in developing into truly strong private person, especially when she lives in this extravagant and convenient life. In our daily life, we face to many troubles we should work out, however, if a female who haven't discovered her value had to solve the problem, she will be vulnerable, although she is able to settle the matter, because she, a normal woman without confidence, don't firmly believe she can do this. After uncountable failures, I believe the woman couldn't develop into a truly powerful and freedom person, even she does not live in a life with internet, cars, planes and iPhone. But if a person who has already noticed his value, no matter if he lives in a convenient contemporary life, he will be successful in achieving a strong heart by confidence and success. Besides finding their value can make them grow into really powerful and freedom people, support from the people around you, especially from your friend can also let you achieve the same aim.
Finally, it is true that a person lives in a contemporary life with high technology and innumerable attractions which will lure her; furthermore the prediction that these enticements will make her far away from becoming a truly strong and independent individual is not unfounded. But unless she live alone and stay in a place with nothing but herself, she won't find a place with no attraction in our society, so whether you live in a luxury life is not a primary things, attitude toward the life full of luxuries and convenience and what we do in this kind of life are determinant, this kind of life couldn't prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
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