<Daily writing作文小组> 我2我自豪 的作文贴

albert199010UID: 2726886

今天开始写作，求指导~~~求包养~~~

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10月13日独立现在改好了

薰叶初UID: 3143366

1015的作文改好了

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我又来球批改了~1014的独立作文,写得挺纠结的~我自己觉得在说理方面可能有问题~~
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;extra=&page=1

albert199010UID: 2726886

17# rjj21664264
我是学材料的。。。
昨天那篇文章限时了，写到第三段时没时间了，所以写的比较少。。。

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文章很有条理，不愧是考过GRE的，请问你是什么专业的，我们可以交流交流！

albert199010UID: 2726886

15# qqldd
多练习吧
中式英语的话其实我们大家都避免不了，很多在native speaker眼里都是，我们能做的只是尽量完善，我觉得你可以找一点美国人写得文章来多看看

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1# albert199010 ~
看到你改的了，中文表达就是自己找不出来- -
围绕论点是觉得不知道怎么总结下面的论据，或者不知道选择论据去表达论点。。我就是纠结。。
还有想学习你这种 同意 让步 的方式，省好多力啊。。。但怕写不好。。。
有什么建议不

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几乎没有怎么改的“改好了”……= =

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12# albert199010
好吧~~我会努力的`我还木有考过GRE啊~

albert199010UID: 2726886

10# 薰叶初
我觉得可以多写，多列提纲，就想准备GRE那样。。。牛逼吹到一定程度就可以乱吹了。。。。。

byebyehakuUID: 3124349

作文我下了~明早发过来~
这次因为没来得及分组，所以……
欢迎改我的作文~~！！
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1292096-12-1.html

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10月12日20100522NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Working athome using computers or telephones is better than working in the office.
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It is true that with the help of modernfacilities like computers and telephones people nowadays can conveniently workat home. However, before we jump to the conclusion that home working is betterthan office working, we still need to compare the pros and cons of each kind ofworking.


First of all, few people can deny that theteamwork and cooperation is of great significance for the success of a companyor any other organizations. It is because none of us can swear that we can doand we are good at donging anything if necessary. In that case, working in theoffice can provides us a place where stuff can exchange their ideas face toface while when working at home even though we can still make a phone call toeach other or discuss online, the absence of such teamworkingteam working atmosphere canhardly be ignored or replaced(replaced在这里的意思好像怪怪的,不大明白). Forexample, most members of my lab prefer to talk about the experiment’s details at the meeting roomevery Friday morning instead of online discussion. We all think that the faceto face discussion and jokes can enable a team to move forward more comfortableand happily. Besides, discussion and expression through phones or computers maynot as clear as talking directly since we can draw graphs or schemesimmediately when needed.


But what I discussed above doesn’t meanthat we should abandon the convenience the new development of science andtechnology brought us. On the contrary, with the help of internet ortelephones, many people are able to successfully settle kinds of problems oraffairs at home while enjoying the happiness staying with family. To be more specific,lots of managers prefer to stay at home using computers or cellphones toarrange the assignment for their stuff and have online meeting with othermanagers.


To sum up, home working or office workinghas its own advantages and disadvantages. What we need to do is to compare themand choose one that can fit our condition. Only in this way can we make fulluse of the progress of science and technology as well as enjoy the cooperationspirit of a team.


这篇文章基本上没什么问题啦~听了你说用标准键盘练速度的建议,今天我专门去买了一个回来.现在又有另外一个问题想问你啦~你是如何在30分钟内想到要写的内容的呢?我现在30分钟内写不完的一个重要原因就是不知道要写什么~~~

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可不可以帮我改下今天的作文呢?我写的不是今天布置的话题,而且刚刚才写完,已经赶不上分组了~不胜感激~
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1775522507

albert199010UID: 2726886

6# 薰叶初
建议你用标准键盘多打作文（英文的），我当时练GRE AW就是这么练速度的