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5,10 Forsuccessful development of a country, should a government focus its budget moreon very young children education rather than on universities? 09 11 07NA( m7 _, [9 a& t8 6 y! t7 _5 b/ b; w
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As the development of the society, the education has become one of the most important factors to the success of a country. But there is a growing debate about whether the government should focus its budget more on children education or on universities. Maybe many people would say that the young children education is more important, but I doubt it. This essay will explore the importance of the education in university.
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Admittedly, the elementary education plays an important role in children's life as it teaches the basic knowledge and skills of learning. Also, it teaches young children the moral standards which help them build a complete personality that can decide their attitude towards things they meet in daily life. % ]+ k: o/ }" T8 {, D1 e
2 t' f- A+ \! ~& s) o+ FHowever it doesn't mean that the young children education is more important than the university education. As we all know, the knowledge we learn in universities decide our future. Apparently, what we learn in universities is more master and more irreplaceable than the things we learn when young. What kind of job will we do, how much salaries will we get and which people will we get along with are all based on universities education. For instance, my brother was good at math when he was young, but he learned music in the university and so, now he is a music producer, who write songs for singers, working in a music company. (可以解释一下因为哥哥学校的音乐老师一流,器材先进,有许多去听演唱会的机会,这些使得哥哥成功。而学校的这些都是要拿钱来支撑的,所以。。。)
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( `5 M% G c, s+ zThe most important is, the cost of universities is higher than (that in)elementary education. Many instruments used in experiments cost a lot and they need to invest a great amount of money before they can get a result. Moreover, sometimes they can’t get a equal result because some unexpected situations may just lead to failure. But(去掉) if they don’t spend this money, they would never have any chance to get the expected achievements. And they may invite famous professor to teach experiences or successful business men to give speeches. In order for the students to get a good education in the university, it's evidently that the university education is more expensive than the young children education. Hence, from this perspective, the university education is more eager to have the governments’ investment.5 D" W% B& G. n- f- }
+ C. b. C; D3 `, Z9 [ JThe education is an important part in the progress of the development of society, and how to use the resources well has become a hot topic among people. 感觉这句话出现在开头会好点,结尾不需要了。只是总结下观点就可以了 As for me, though elementary education is important, the universities education needs more focus by governments.
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