2014年8月学习小组"雅思写作互改小组"

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此为8月写作小组帖，要继续练习的各位请移步9月写作小组帖啦！

新手必看规则帖：戳这里-->https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1629443-1-1.html

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来不及写又想参加当天写作任务的童鞋可以占座+作业日期；如：0810-占座！

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更新作业时间系北京时间每天11PM后。请于此时间前占座或者上传作业，便于斑竹安排。THX

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作业题目和分组信息（分组顺序都是A→B→C......N→A   即A改B，B改C, N改A)想加入小组的同学，直接在本帖回帖上缴作业即可。作业文件名需要包括自己的名字和日期。

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本小组2-3天更新一次

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30th-31st
bbiang(312L) <->拨拉丽丝(311L)
Some people think that the purpose of education is to turn young people into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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28th-29th
小菜2015(307L) -> bbiang(302L)->571633(301L)
Some people think that children should obey rules, while others argue that children who are controlled too much will not be well prepared for their adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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25th-27th
＂默默···(288L) - 小菜2015(291L) - 七九(293L) - bbiang(294L)
A long-distance flight consumes the same amount of fuel and causes the same amount of pollution as a car does in several years' time. Some people think that to reduce environmental problems, we should discourage non-essential flights instead of limiting the use of cars. Do you agree or disagree?

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20th
task1:

刘鑫好好啊（264L）<--> ddddori (265L)

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9th-10th
Miyukifan(106L)-->Grenzenlos(100L)-->Cloudyzzz(94L)-->枣子（86L）-->karen小心（81L）
Task1: 混合图（柱状+饼图）

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红色表示已写的题目。

1 Many children spend more time watching television than doing active or creative activities. What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.

2 Museums and art galleries are not necessary because people can see the historical objects and works of art in those places on television or on the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?

3 Some people think that modern technology makes life more convenient, while others think that life was better when technology was simpler. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

4 In the modern world, everyone wants to own a car, a television and a fridge. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

5 A long-distance flight consumes the same amount of fuel and causes the same amount of pollution as a car does in several years' time. Some people think that to reduce environmental problems, we should discourage non-essential flights instead of limiting the use of cars. Do you agree or disagree?

6 Today, people often buy food transported from other countries. Do you think the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?

7 Some people think that children should obey rules, while others argue that children who are controlled too much will not be well prepared for their adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

8 Some people think that the purpose of education is to turn young people into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

9 Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. Do you agree or disagree?

10 The government should pay for people’s education and health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

11 Today, the news media and the advertising industry have greater influence on people’s opinions than in the past. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

12 Many people today are too busy with their work and do not have enough time to spend with their family and friends. What are the causes of this? What effects does it have on individuals and society as a whole?

13 More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.

14 International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Some people think that the problems caused by international tourism outweigh the benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

15 Developing countries need international organisations’ help. Some people think that financial aid should be provided, while others think that practical aid and advice would be better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

16 In some countries, charities have set up some special days, such as National Children’s Day and National Anti-Smoking Day. What are the purposes of these special days? Are they effective?

17 In many countries, the proportion of elderly people in the population is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.

18 Some people think that employers should be required to employ equal numbers of men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

19 Research suggests that many prisoners commit crimes again after being released from prison. What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.

20 Some people think that it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Others, however, think that it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

21.Some people say that to become a good teacher, you should acquire enough training, while others say that teaching capabilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（升级为重点预测题）

22.In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists  such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and  technology cannot?（8.11新增）

23.In schools and universities, some girls tend to choose arts subjects, while boys  choose to  study science subjects. What are the reasons? Do you think this trend should  be changed?（8.11新增）

24.Anyone can post information on the Internet. Some people say most of what we read  on the Internet is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（8.11新增）

karen小心UID：3405382

1th young offenders 占座！

iMinusUID：2953287

占座

。。！不过7月份最后一篇好像还没人帮我改TT

枣子_UID：3499651

占座

枣子_UID：3499651

iMinus 发表于 2014-8-1 16:00
占座。。！不过7月份最后一篇好像还没人帮我改TT

我发晚了 要不七月那篇我们互改吧 改完了还发在七月那个版上

iMinusUID：2953287

枣子_ 发表于 2014-8-1 19:25
我发晚了 要不七月那篇我们互改吧 改完了还发在七月那个版上

好呀。发了记得告诉我一声！

571633UID：2333480

1th young offenders 占座！

小菜2015UID：3513958

571633UID：2333480

小菜2015 发表于 2014-8-3 07:59

看样子模板用的很不错，就是最后一个单词 inreplaceable 貌似写错了。irreplaceable

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karen小心 发表于 2014-8-1 08:56
1th young offenders 占座！

每次即使不改大神的作文 我也会自己下下来看看 大神就是大神 每次读都能学到好多东西
额 好像名字没改 将就一下吧

karen小心UID：3405382

版主~新布置的作业0705已经写过了。

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iMinus 发表于 2014-8-1 16:00
占座

。。！不过7月份最后一篇好像还没人帮我改TT

希望能帮到你。指教~

571633UID：2333480

08/03 ~ 08/04 Task2:More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.


有个问题请问，写作文时候能不能用铅笔啊，总感觉要涂涂改改。。。有谁考过嘛。

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571633 发表于 2014-8-4 08:13
08/03 ~ 08/04 Task2:More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better ...

能用铅笔。
上传作业最好用word文档 比较好改