Issue48 yuexuan之习作请求指点

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48"The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."

提纲
1：个人创造重大意义的历史事件
2：大众创造重大意义的历史事件
3：虽然大众也能同样的作用，历史的研究应该主要关注个人

Whether the scholar studying history should pay more attention to individuals, and who is responded for the breaking out of the most significant events and trends in history, several famous elite or common people forgot? The problem is a much debated one in that it affected everybody in their daily lives. People may prefer one to another, although, some have no opinion about it. But in my view, the most significant events and trends in history can be induced not only by the famous few but by a host of common people, and the study of history should pay more attention to several individuals.

Firstly, several people in history, who are identified the elite and hero, brought about world-shaking change to all kinds of fields by which perhaps a new country was set up or a measure was taken to reform the social, economical, political foundation. Especially the country came into numerous unable problems that are too severe to solve with simple ways, which called for a man to appear and bring some light to all of them. Then a great and significant record in history was born when a person leaded others to set down the difficulties after experienced grievous and long endeavor. In there a small example can give some light to this point, when War of Independence in America is concerned. The cases during the war are quite complex and have been lasted so long time, at the same time the result of which is closely connected with all American lives. Then, a person name after Lincoln, came forth in the country and solved the struggle with decidedly dealing with the conflict between north and south, therefore he is a hero in American history.

Secondly, most common people also have the possibility of incurring the most significant events no matter in history or in nowadays. The society is mainly made up of the common people whose idea and life style have far-reaching influence to it. And whether the fact that a policy was worked out or the case that some measures will be put into practice was considered, their opinion should be included and be taken into account carefully. For the perception, we can turn our focusing into the strike of worker in France in thirteen century. A strike of worker, its extension spreading all over country and penetrating into multitude of fields, whose influence is most important, was broke out early in that time whose result forced government having to make out fine measures from different to address the strike.

Lastly, another of the leading concerning of mine is researched object of historical study. Some have the opinion that the study of history places too much emphasis on individuals; however which is ludicrous and unreasonable. Although the most common people also can play the same important effect in history, the few individuals are the most appropriate object for scholar studying because by whom it is easy to honor a significant event or trends. Documenting all data available of several person cost less time and cost than recording whole cases. And when the event was caused by a group of people, choosing the most important ones of those is quite advisable for saving limited resource.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the most significant events and trends in history can be induced not only by the famous few but by a host of common people, and the study of history should pay more attention to several individuals.