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本帖最后由 qtangtangs 于 2009-6-7 12:27 编辑
橘色 好的
红色 拼写语法错误
绿的 看法
What the statement wants to show us is the fact that the significantly dangerous situation faced by lesser-known languages. Because of the important and far-reaching meaning behind these languages, such as the culture of these languages-speakers, I agree with the assertor of the statement.
Admittedly, the most populous and wide-spread languages are the ones which are spoken and used by the most active and advance-civilized people. Through the perspective of the process of the human’s history, these people toke
advantage of(take advantage of是个贬义词..) their intelligence and endless effort(s) to create treasures not only the material but the spiritual. And the widely(wide) currency of their languages is the bonus for these people who played an enormous role to contribute to the development of human beings. Nowadays, it is these populous languages that preclude the communicate-obstacle caused by the differences of the languages all over the world and improve the worldwide development of politics, culture, economics, arts, society, and so on.
On the opposite, however, those extinguishing languages, along with(不通阿,用在这里) the society fast development throughout the world, are going to be less used and forgotten. The reasons for this situation are various. The obscurity of these languages, the closed region where these extinguishing languages-speakers lived, less contribution to the world’s development, and something else may be attributed to the decreasing number of these languages-speakers.(语法有问题,去掉the closed..不看,那么contribution应该改为contributes,不然缺谓语。另外这个attribute to前后好像反了阿..就算是用了被动,也是被人认为,具体例子请看:The car accident was attributed to faulty brakes.翻译为,这次车祸被认为是刹车失灵造成的。所以这个被认为还是被人们认为,并不是代表前后就能颠倒了) What’s worse, the extinction is being accelerated by the fact that many people who speak the rare languages are trying to contact and mix themselves with the developed world, which is more advanced than theirs and attractive to them.
Although the extinction of the rare languages seems to be some kind of necessity according to the above analysis, the lesser-known languages have so much more meaning and use than what people would think (is) that the human all over the world should act to prevent the extinction of such languages. The existence of them has undisputable value to provide evidence and support for the archaeology, history-research. Their existence brings us the possibility to understand and study their art and culture. Therefore, it is easily to understand that the unknown relic unearthed in 1994 at Lijiang in China failed to be well used to contribute the history research because of the extinction of the language on the relic. Obviously, the similar cases can be enumerated in the field of art, culture-research and so on. Unexceptionably, that is a big pity for our human being. In this aspect, we cannot stay to see the lesser-known languages becoming extinct.
To prevent the trend of the extinction of the lesser-known languages, the government of the country in which such languages are spoken should act. It is, however, not enough to just rely on the effort of such languages spoken country----this issue deserves the worldwide emphasis. From 1990’s, Chine draw the policy that the universities will give some privileges to the students majored in the rare foreign languages, and these policy improve, in(to) some extent, the intercommunion and development of the rare foreign languages. Just like the effort of china, we should and must do our best to help the lesser-known languages survive because they are also the priceless treasure for the whole human beings.
Ok阿,写的挺好的,逻辑很清楚阿..
因为我最近很纠结于语法
所以就提出了几个小问题
呵呵
如果真是要建议的话
我觉得其实可以不用这么面面俱到,因为这是很典型的1+1,所以文章只要两个点就够了,第一句是are,第二句是should。
那么第一个点直接分析是还是不是题目所说的情况,为什么,
第二点就分析
政府应不应该,为什么。
这样的话可能会让论证更充分。
当然,楼主这样写已经很好了哈~
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