[[TPO]] 【独立写作】huashiyiqike的作业总贴

huashiyiqikeUID：2674177

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9.26作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：Compared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.


9.25作文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildren because the world has changed a lot over the past 50 years.

25号和24号感觉是一样的题目，就不写了吧，我刚来的，24号的还没被改过TT。

24号Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：It is easier for parents to raise their children than 50 years ago.


22号It is more enjoyable to have a job and work long hours for three days in a week than to work shorter hours for five days in a week.



10.3作文：Some people think that a university professor should focus time on doing research, while others think that the main role of a professor is to educate students in a university. What is your opinion and why? (Education) 

ZoeXUID：2822447

不好意思改晚了，楼主写得很不错呢，尤其是词汇。


我的已经传上来了，不要意思有点晚，麻烦楼主啦XD
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日落战托福UID：3374428

亲，我25号跟你一组的，你没写25的，就给你写了24的，已上传。

别忘了改我的。big thanks！

日落战托福UID：3374428

。。。。。改错了，应该帮你改26的，我再改一篇吧。。汗了

Chel_seaUID：3359346

已改 请查收

huashiyiqikeUID：2674177

日落战托福 发表于 2012-9-27 10:15
亲，我25号跟你一组的，你没写25的，就给你写了24的，已上传。

别忘了改我的。big thanks！

你说“
亲是用辩证法写的哦，虽然更容易养孩子但风险也增加。但我总觉得一边倒更好一些，如果不是特别绝对的题目。

文章读起来很通顺，这是大优点。”

我原来写GRE都说不要太绝对啊，toefl要一边倒吗？？？

文章我其实是一边查字典一边写的，遇到不确定的基本查了一遍，这样也可以学到很多地道的表达。。

日落战托福UID：3374428

huashiyiqike 发表于 2012-9-27 22:34
你说“
亲是用辩证法写的哦，虽然更容易养孩子但风险也增加。但我总觉得一边倒更好一些，如 ...

据说是 一边倒比较容易 写的有理有据就好

carinoUID：2755773

已经改好啦~~说得不对的请你告诉我哈~~：）

Noah_MoUID：3373458

已经修改

fd笑笑UID：2791669

已修改~~