- 最后登录
- 2012-7-5
- 在线时间
- 60 小时
- 寄托币
- 126
- 声望
- 0
- 注册时间
- 2010-7-8
- 阅读权限
- 15
- 帖子
- 5
- 精华
- 0
- 积分
- 108
- UID
- 2848875
- 声望
- 0
- 寄托币
- 126
- 注册时间
- 2010-7-8
- 精华
- 0
- 帖子
- 5
|
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In a cooperation of team, the people who cannot accept criticize couldn’t be successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.
If there is no woodpecker to take worms out of a tree, the tree will die. People's life has something like a tree. (特别好!我看到gter里好多人都特别擅长运用谚语啊典故啊什么的,觉得你们脑子里都好有料啊..这个是你限时作文30分钟里就想到的吗?)If he cannot accept criticize, he won't be successful. My opinion can be strengthened by the following discussion.
For one thing, nobody likes people who ignore his advice. Support from others is very important in cooperation of team. If one is disliked by his colleagues, he will get little support from them. As I have said above, he will lose the ability to be successful in a team. For instance, when I was 10 years old, I was distributed to a 10-person team to explore the weeds around our school and each write a report to the Biology teacher. One girl of our team was so aggressive that she would jeer anyone who criticizes her way of collect weeds. So we decided to leave her alone. On last day, we all completed our reports with abundant data and examples shared from each other. But the poor girl had only a short report with 12 sentences on it. I don't have to say that(是不是直接Undoubtedly更地道..?) she was criticized by the teacher in the end. So if one cannot accept criticize from others, he will not get support from them.(再加一句and he won’t succeed比较点题)
For another, everyone will make mistakes. If you correct it in time, that will be fine. Whereas you leave them along, the accumulation will be serious. How to find your mistakes? For most of us, we need criticize from others, as we can not find the hole on the back of our pants.(特别好的举例!!) So criticize can help us do better job. It is especially true in a cooperation of team, as a black sheep in a team will destroy all of the work, no matter whether the black sheep is unintentional or not. For instance, last week one of my teammates called Lin Tong was ill, so she had to finish her part of our teamwork at hospital. As we cannot connected her easily, nobody can help her to find her mistakes. (我觉得这个例子有点跑题 因为题目说的是those who do not accept others’ criticism 然而这个女生不是成心不接受别人的批评,而是因为病了没人和她沟通和她联系)In the deadline, she asked her sister to send us her part of report and we just merge it with ours without revise. Yesterday, I saw our score on the internet. It is so low, beyond my worst wishes. I went to ask our professor, Dr Zheng, for reasons. When I came back, I was feel so bad about the fact that we didn't revise her part.
Some people may think that not all critics should be accept in a cooperation of team, as others may not know about what you are doing and may give wrong advice. They use a good company broken by a bad team leader as an example. But I have to say that, in a cooperatio of team, we can firstly accept critics and then judge it depend on ourselves, or ask more experienced parnters.(让步段特别好)
So in a nutshell, in a cooperation of team, the people who cannot accept criticize couldn't be successful.
最后一个问题:小呆啊!你的这些裤子后面的洞自己看不见、啄木鸟的小例子是都是30分钟限时作文时随便一想就正好想到的吗?还是积累的呢..?how?我觉得我在运用典故、画龙点睛的小例子上就特别不行,需要向你学习!! |
|