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In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

When the time comes 21st century, it is important for me to do the right thing to make sure that everything is on the right way. Some people think that we can risk making mistakes in order to finish mission because we should spend less time to deal with work in order to do a job efficiently. However, others assume that we need be careful to all aspects of one thing and insure that some mistakes never be made in any tiny detail. In my opinion, I will agree with the latter.
First, it is helpful for us to do everything carefully and slowly because this method can help us find any tiny mistake and prevent us from wasting time and money. When everything is becoming more and more complex in this world, we should pay attention to all of details in order to accomplish this job. For automobile industry, the design of a sample is so complex that every designer should work slowly and carefully in order to make sure that every design is right, which economize more money and time of revising the design of a product. What is more, as for aerospace industry, even more careful attention should be put on any aerospace project because any minor omission could cause the loss of tens of thousands and even the life of astronauts. So it is important for us to do work carefully and slowly.
Second, working slowly can make our life safer at the same time. In some dangerous careers, carefully working with a slow pace can avoid terrible consequence. For instance, there is a horrible explosion in a chemistry factory at the 300km distance to my hometown. The investigation about the explosion showed that the cause of this accident is the wrong operation of a worker because the worker doesn’t manipulate equipment according to the operation manual because he wanted to work fast and went home to celebrate his birthday with his family and friends. Because of the mistakes owing to working fast, the factory was forbidden to work any more and make compensate to the town according to the influence of local environment and economy. Meanwhile, considering the harm of explosion to person health, a lot of   native people move to another city, which severely influences the normal structure of population in our town.
Considerable though the advantages that working slowly brings are, people should never neglect the disadvantages that working slowly brings along. For example, when we need solve the simple things, if we spend more time working slowly to solve the problem, we definitely decrease our efficiency of work because we can immediately make a decision with our common sense
In sum, working slowly doesn’t mean that we must spend more time and energy to cope with simple things such as how to cut an apple, which is obviously ridiculous. It is real meaning to us that people should concentrate on the unique important matters and work slowly to guarantee that any error would never be made in all process. Only in this way, we can make sure our health, and prevent all kinds of potential dangers without thinking carefully.
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