【独立写作】thankgod2016备战5月7日作业帖

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今天开始好好练习作文

综合写作另外开贴
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1960364-1-1.html

各种指导贴
1）
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=981867&highlight=

字数在450字左右
一开始先不控制时间
慢慢形成自己的模板后开始卡时间

看了 一个帖子 觉得很好
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1964145-1-1.html


写作一定要多练！多写多练多思考才有用，在Tpo界面里面训练，必须限时，你必须做到30分钟内折腾出一篇没有什么语法错误，思路清晰，尽量少的拼写错误，各种多变的句型的作文出来，重要的是语法结构，句式、用词的多变。

多修改自己已经写过的作文，把这些错误都标出来，复习的时候抄在本子上一遍一遍看，考试的时候才不会错

（1）不要用and，或者but，改成非限定定语从句，强调句，倒装句，这种句型，能够掌握多种句式一定是ETS最喜欢的
（2）单词不要重复，不要在一篇文章里面写太多一样的单词，这样显得你积累太少语言贫瘠，托福作文是展现你单词量和你的积累的地方，不要吝惜去展示你的才华。单一的词汇只会将自己置于不利的地步。
（3）句式多变，建议大家尽量要多种种类的句式

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转载至小站托福的 高分标准解读
官方对于托福独立写作的满分要求如下：
An essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following:
1. Effectively addresses the topic and task
2. Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details
3. Displays unity, progression, and coherence
4. Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors.
标准解读：
addresses the topic
在托福写作中，考生所表达的观点要和题目要求相关、一致。另外，考生所提供的例证也要切题，只有这样的例子才有说服力。
well organized & well developed
托福满分作文的行文组织要系统，有逻辑性。 考生在提出论点之后，必须寻找相关的例证来支持和充实自己的论点。 需要强调的是，在托福考试中，考生虽然可以发散地进行说理和寻找例证，但若是将自己所举的例证进行一定加工,按照由主到次、让步转折等顺序进行排列，则能更好显示出各个例证之间的逻辑关系，让举例或是说理论证的过程更有层次性。这样的文章才称得上well-organized and well-developed.
explanations, exemplifications and details

在托福写作中，考生提出观点之后必须要发散式地进行举例或是说理论证。具体包括解释原因，举例说明以及提供其它的细节信息。
unity, progression, and coherence
论点集中(unity)--所有的论据都指向论点;逻辑通畅(progression and coherence)--不同段落之间要连接紧密、衔接过渡自然并层层推进。
想要做到以上几点，考生需要合理地谋篇布局、进行最优化的段落分配并恰当地使用逻辑连接词。
variety
用词用句的多样性和变化性能有效地体现语言的丰富性以及使用技巧。
appropriate word choice and idiomaticity
托福写作要求考生根据语境选择“恰当的用词”。在托福写作中，考生不需要哗众取宠的用“大词、难词”来显示词汇量。 真正的高手是用简单但精确的词语来阐述深刻的道理。
minor errors
托福作文允许有错误存在。most一词表明一篇满分文章需要避免绝大部分的语法、用词错误。 同时这也表明个别的语法错误、用词不当以及拼写，标点符号和大小写等错误不影响一篇文章得满分。 对于托福写作来说，更重要的是文章的要点明确、逻辑通畅，语言的整体高水平。

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2012年12月22日托福独立写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to choose a friend with whom you can have fun than to choose a friend that will help you when you are in need. Use specific examples to support your answer.
2012年12月8托福独立写作真题范文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is not a good thing; we should take actions at once.
2012年12月2日托福独立写作真题题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive ones on people's behavior.
2012年11月30日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for universities to spend money on improving facilities than on hiring famous professors.
2012年11月24日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier for more people now than in the past to get an education.
2012年11月18日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The main role of a university professor is to educate students rather than to do research.
2012年11月10日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The best way for a teacher to let student become interested in a subject is to help them know how to use it in their lives outside school.
2012年11月2日托福独立写作真题：Out of the following three things, which one would you prefer to regulate in order to improve your health?
　　1. The kind of food you eat
　　2. The amount of exercise
　　3. The amount of stress in your life
2012年10月28日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All scientific discoveries should be shared among all scientists all around the world. The government and businesses should not keep any discoveries in secret.
2012年10月27日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
2012年10月19日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Reading a student does on his/her own is as important as, or even more important than reading a student does because it is assigned by teachers.
2012年10月14日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: To make children do well in school, parents should limit the hours that children spend on watching TV or movies.
2012年10月13日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Nowadays, it is much easier for a person to achieve success without family's help than in the past. Use details and examples in your response.
2012年9月23日托福独立写作真题： Do you agree or disagree: For success in school and work, the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than having excellent knowledge of a job or a field to study.
2012年9月22日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already take place.
2012年9月16日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most important investment for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees.
2012年9月8日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The advices from our grandparents have no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.
2012年9月2日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Competition with friends usually has negative effect on friendship.
2012年8月26日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.
2012年8月25日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The opinions of celebrities, such as some entertainers or athletes, are more important to younger people than to older people.
2012年8月19日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Car has had a great effect on the society than the airplane.
2012年7月28日托福独立写作真题：Some people think to live away from family and friends with high salaries; the other people think to stay with your family and friends with less pay. Which one do you prefer?
2012年7月22日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People can take care of their family members better when they live in big cities than in the countryside.
2012年7月15日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is important for government to provide money for the things that are beautiful than things that are practical.
2012年7月14日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better for your friend to ask you for help (suppose you are good at the subject) than to turn to a tutor when he finds it hard to pass an examination.
2012年6月30日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read the newspapers and magazines from that country.
2012年6月17日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: In order to be successful, a person must have a university degree?
2012年6月15日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The most important characteristics for a politician or leader are good communication skills.
2012年6月9日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the loss of old friends.
2012年5月26日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Teachers had greater influence on young people in the past than do they today.
2012年5月20日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.
2012年5月12日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to choose a university whose graduates have good job opportunities than a university who has famous professors.
2012年4月28日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People should know about events happening around world even if they have little influence on their daily lives.
2012年4月27日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Students are more interested in politics today than before（北美）.
2012年4月22日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Should school focus more on purchasing new equipment or recruiting good teachers?
2012年4月14日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is important for government to protect animals and wilderness areas for future generations.
2012年3月24日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: If parents want their children to perform well in school, they should limit the hours that their children spend watching TV.
2012年3月23日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development（北美）.
2012年3月18日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: there is never good reason to be impolite (rude) to another person.
2012年3月10日托福独立写作真题：If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, will you use e-mail/text messaging or use telephone/voice-messaging?
2012年3月4日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Employees who always follow their supervisor’s instructions are more valuable to their companies than employees who try to find new or better ways?
2012年2月25日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Two people can become good friends even if one of them has more money than the other.
2012年2月24日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in teams.
2012年2月17日托福独立写作真题：Some people prefer to buy new technological devices immediately when they become available. Others prefer to wait until many people have adopted them. Which do you prefer?
2012年2月11日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Talented people’s leadership is inborn and can't be learned by people.
2012年2月5日托福独立写作真题：Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People should have goals that are challenging rather than goals that are safe and practical.
2012年1月14日托福独立写作真题；Do you agree or disagree with the statement: All teachers should be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge.
2012年1月8日托福独立写作真题；Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The food we ate in the past was healthier than the food today


2014年全年托福独立写作真题机经
2014-1-12  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In modern times, grandparents cannot give their grandchildren useful advice because the world of today and the world of 50 years ago are too different.（教育话题）

2014-1-18  In times of economic crisis, local governments often reduce the money they spend in some areas. In your opinion, if a local government is facing economic problems, which of the following areas should it spend less money on?（社会话题）          1 Libraries 2 Public Transportation  3 Police

2014-2-22  People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on only one skill.（教育话题）

2014-3-1  It is not a good thing to move to a new town or country because you will lose contact with your old friends.（个人话题）

2014-3-2  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Society has created too many rules for young people.（社会话题）（抽象）

2014-3-15  Which do you think is the best way for a student to make friends: joining a sports team, participating in community activities, or travelling? （个人话题）

2014-3-16  Do you agree or disagree？It is easier for more people to be educated today than it was in the past.（教育话题）

2014-3-22  Younger school children (aged from five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.（教育话题）

2014-3-23  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Students should take at least a year to work before beginning college.（教育话题）

2014-4-12
第一套Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is more important for universities to have more facilities( libraries and computer labs) than hiring famous teachers.      （教育话题）
第二套Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The opinions of celebrities, such as entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.   （媒体话题）

2014-4-19  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising. （媒体话题）

2014-4-27　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does. （个人）

2014-5-11   Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending a lot of time watching sports on TV and following their favorite team will have negative impact on one’s life. （个人生活话题）

2014-5-17  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than relax by doing physical exercise. (个人生活话题)

2014-5-24  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is important for the government to provide money for beautiful things and not just for practical things.（社会话题 政府）

2014-5-25  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful.（教育话题）

2014-6-15  Some people prefer to buy technological devices as soon as they are available to the public, while other people prefer to wait. Which do you prefer? (个人生活话题)

2014-6-21  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in teams. （教育话题）

2014-6-28  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The best way to reduce air pollution is for the government to raise the cost of fuel. （社会话题）

2014-6-29  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:  To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.（个人话题）

2014-7-6   Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work. （个人生活话题）

2014-7-12  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should take several different kinds of job before they take a career in a long term. （个人话题）

2014-8-16  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important investment for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees. （工作话题）

2014-8-23
第一套young people are more likely to give time and energy to improve the world than young people in the past. (社会话题)  （抽象）
第二套Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives has already taken place. （社会话题）

2014-8-30  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain a small number of friends for a long time is more important to happiness than the ability to make new friends easily. （个人生活话题）

2014-9-14  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to study math, language, science, and history (教育话题)

2014-9-21  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is no good for people moving to a new town or country because we lose our old friends. （个人生活话题）

2014-9-27
第一套：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Visiting museum is the best way to learn about the country.   （社会话题）
第二套：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should require all their students to learn about foreign culture as well as their own culture.（教育话题）

2014-10-11  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern agriculture methods damage the environment, but providing food for the growing population around the world is more important than protecting the environment. （社会话题）

2014-10-18  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should know about events happening around the world even if they have little influence on their daily lives.  （社会话题）

2014-10-26　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. （教育话题）（抽象）

2014-11-2　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People often buy products not because they really need them but because other people have them. （个人生活）

2014-11-8
第一套：　Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Nowadays it is not important for people to have regularly family meals together. （个人生活）
第二套：　Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age. （个人生活）

2014-11-9   Do you agree or disagree with the statement: When making major purchase (for example, car or laptop), our decisions can be influenced by different sources of information. Explain how each of the following sources of information can influence your decision.     （个人生活）
　　(1) recommendations from friends or colleagues
　　(2) information from media (for example, TV, magazines, newspapers)
　　(3) recommendations from sales person in the store

2014-11-15   Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Rather than help children with schoolwork, parents should let children work independently. （教育话题）

2014-11-23   Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Your job has a greater effect on your overall happiness than the social life does. （个人话题）

2014-11-29  Some people like to keep records or experiences by exposing photos on social networking sites. Others do not like to create such records. Which way do you prefer?  （个人生活）

2014-12-06
　第一套：　Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Being creative, rather than planning carefully more often results in the best solution of a problem.  （工作话题）（抽象）
　第二套：　Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The best way for a teacher to help students interested in a subject is to explain that subject will help them outside school.  （教育话题）

2014-12-13  Do you agree or disagree with the statement: students nowadays are more interested in politics than in the past. （教育）

2014-12-14  Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The way a person is dressed in is a good indication of his/her personality. （个人）

2014-12-21  Do you agree or disagree with the statement: If you are selecting a leader for a student organization, honesty is the most important to consider in deciding whom to vote for. （教育）

2014-12-27 Do you agree or disagree with the statement: young people today are more likely to help others than young people were in the past. （个人）

2014-12-28  It is important for government to provide money for things that are beautiful not just for things that are practical.  （社会）

2015
1月10日       
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?All university students should be required to take basic science courses even if it is not the field of their study.
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1月11日       
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The most important characteristic to a successful politician or leader is good communication skills.
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1月25日       
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for colleagues or classmates to communicate in person than through emails in order to do a project.[重复2014.1.17NA]
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1月31日       
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to follow and obey are too strict.
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2月1日       
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on behaviors of young people.[重复2011.3.19 NA]
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3月7日        Some people believe going on field trips is better for children’s education (eg. go to museum), while others think it is better for children to study in the classroom at school, which one do you prefer and explain why.        查看范文
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People will spend less time cooking and preparing food in twenty years than they do today.[重复2009.5.31CN]
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3月14日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People spend too much money on their pets even though there can be other good ways to spend money. Give details and examples to support your response.        查看范文
3月28日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to finish a project completely and then do another project than do two or more projects at the same time.        查看范文
4月12日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Internet is as important as other service such as building roads that government should make Internet access to all the citizens at no cost.        查看范文
4月18日        Some people always follow their dreams even if the dreams are ambitious. Some think we should focus on achieving realistic goals. Which do you agree with?        查看范文
5月9日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: University students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.        查看范文
5月16日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: When people spend a lot of time watching sports on television or following their favorite team, it has negative effects on their lives.        查看范文
5月24日        Which do you think is the best way for a student to make friends: joining a sports team, participating in community activities, or travelling? Use specific examples to support your answer.        查看范文
5月30日       
Do you  agree or disagree with the following statement?If  you and someone have been friends for a long time, you continue your friendship  even if she does something you don’t like.
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6月13日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.        查看范文
6月14日       
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Playing sports teaches people lessons about life.
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6月27日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to make friends who are intelligent than with a good sense of humor.        查看范文
7月4日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Children can benefit in important ways from taking care of animal pets.        查看范文
7月11日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid.        查看范文
7月12日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: These days, children spend more time on doing homework or participating in organized activities related to school or sports. However, they should be given more time to do whatever they want.        查看范文
8月22日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most effective way for government to encourage energy conservation is increasing the price of gasoline and electricity.        查看范文
8月30日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is important to have rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to wear at work and at school.        查看范文
9月5日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to attract more tourists, government should improve the safety by hiring more police or improve the appearance by improving the old buildings and streets.        查看范文
9月12日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: In order to succeed, it is better to be like others rather than different from everybody else.        查看范文
9月13日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is as important for older people to study or learn new things as it is for younger people.        查看范文
9月19日        Nowadays, students do many things like surfing the internet, listening to music when they are learning. Do you agree or disagree that doing other things impose bad effect on learning?        查看范文
10月10日        Which is better for children’ education: 9-month study and 3-month break or 3-month study and 1-month break?        查看范文
10月11日        It is a waste of time to spend funds on space travel or space exploration.        查看范文
10月24日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：It is more important to have facilities rather than hire more teachers.        查看范文
10月25日        Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The people in the past are more friendly than people today.        查看范文
10月31日       
Which one is the most important for teacher of high school:
1. The ability to help students plan for their future;
2. The ability to find the students who need help most and help them;
3. Teach students how to learn outside the classroom.
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11月8日       
Schools have always offered students three types of after-school activities. But due to recent limited budgets, they can only support one kind of activities. Which one would you choose? Why?
1. Sports;
2. Arts;
3.Volunteering (eg. for the community)
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11月14日        When parents cannot afford time to accompany with their children, they could choose to send their children to child-care center where many children are cared together; or they could send their children to an individual caregiver. Which one is better?        查看范文
11月15日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：The more money a person has, the more he or she should give away to the charities.        查看范文
11月21日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most important thing people learned is from families. 2013.5.31NA        查看范文
11月28日       
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：It is more important for the government to spend money on art museum and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds.
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11月29日        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decision quickly; when a leader takes too much time to make decisions, he will be seen as ineffective to the people he lead. 2014. 8.22 NA        查看范文
12月5日       
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Government, instead of individuals, should cover Internet fees.
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12月12日        Some companies provide important products or service, but also damage environment. Some people believe that government should require more penalty, higher tax and larger fine of these companies, while others believe there are better ways. Which do you prefer?        查看范文
12月13日        Some people think that older children should be required to take care of the younger children. Others think that this should be done by parents or other adults. Which do you prefer?        查看范文
12月19日        The best leader should spend more time listening to other people’s ideas than taking his/her own ideas.        查看范文
12月20日       
Out of the following three things, which one would you prefer to regulate in order to improve your health? 2012.1.13NA/2012.11.2ML
1. The kind of food you eat
2. The amount of exercise
3. The amount of stress in your life

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今天练习topic 182 Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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topic 182 Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
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Through out the course of human civilization, mankind have always have an affinite relationship with many animal species.We now live in a world where more and more people treat pets as their beloved family menbers, while the fact that some people dump their pets when they sick should not be ignored. Admittedly, raising pets consumes large amount of time and energy, yet I still believe the benefits of treating pets as family members outweighs its negative impacts.
To begin with, raising pets require a certain amount of dedication. Daily will instill discipline in to your character, which can them be utilized in many other areas of your life.Take raising dogs as an example, dog owners have to take their dogs out for a walk everyday so as to keep their pet dogs in a healthy and vivid condition. By repeating the same action each day, the owner's life style becomes more regular and healthy, and the owner become more self controlled.
Another distinct benefit is that treating pets as your family members can kill social pains, such as loneyless, especially for those who live alone. Playing with pets, or even taking care of them, can creat a lot of fun. And being accompanied with pets can battle loneliness as well. Numerous scientific report have shown that the synomens of depression, as well as other psychological diseases decreased obviously after the patient raise a pet and develop a good relationship with it.I remember once my roomate have adopted a dog abandoned by its former owner, her overall wellbeing has changed significantly after the dog merged into her mean and petty life.   
Some opponent may argue that spending aboundent time on species that can not communicate with is not worthwhile. However, they totally negelect the truth that sometimes we dont need language to share our feelings. Dogs can wage their tails or jump up and down around you to show their affection towards you. What's more, pets can even show more loyalty than human beings. Remeber the story of a dog waiting for its owner at a railway station for eight years? I bet no friends can even show such degree of loyalty and affairness.
In the light of the above,despite the fact that pets can not speak, it's still benefical to treat them as our family members, since raising pets can help as cultivate our self discipline and help us battle social pains. Yet not all people treat their pets with love and careness, I believe the reasons above can shed a light for those who have abandoned their pets.
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Through out the course of human civilization, mankind has always had an intimate relationship with many animal species.We now live in a world where more and more people treat pets as their beloved family members, while the fact that some people abandon their pets should never be ignored. Admittedly, raising pets consumes a large amount of time and energy, yet I still believe the benefits of treating pets as family members outweighs its negative impacts.

To begin with, raising pets requires a certain amount of dedication. For most people it will take a significant amount of work to ensure pets' healthy. Regular pet care each day such as pet walking, bathing and brushing, and pet sitting, will instill discipline in an individual that then be utilized in many other areas of  life. Take raising dogs as an example, dog owners have to walk their dogs everyday so as to keep their pet dogs in a healthy and vibrant condition.Moreover, pet care makes the owner's life style healthier，improving the owner's fitness as well.

Another distinct benefit of treating pets as your family members is that it can kill social pains, such as loneliless, especially for those who live alone. Playing with pets can creat a lot of fun. Numerous scientific reports have shown that the symtoms of depression, as well as other psychological diseases decreased obviously after the patient raised a pet and developed a good relationship with it. I remember once my roomate adopted a dog abandoned by its former owner, her overall mental wellbeing has changed significantly after the dog merged into her daily life.

Some opponent may argue that spending aboundent time on species that can not communicate with is not worthwhile. However, they totally negelect the truth that emotions have universal roots that are shared across all humans and across many animals, that sometimes we don‘t need language to share our feelings. Dogs can wag their tails or jump up and down around you to show their affection towards you. What's more, pets can even show more loyalty towards others than human beings. Remeber the story “The Tale of Hachiko”, which talks about a dog waiting for its owner at a railway station for ten years after its owner died? I bet no human being can show such degree of loyalty comparied with that dog.

In the light of the above, despite the fact that raising pets can laborous, it's still benefical to treat them as our family members, since raising pets can help as cultivate discipline and battle social pains. Yet not all people treat their pets with love and careness, I believe the reasons above can give those people certain amount of inspiration.

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20150822 Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Internet is as important as other service such as building roads that government should make Internet access to all the citizens at no cost.
20151205 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Government, instead of individuals, should cover Internet fees.

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With the remarkable development of human civilization, a large percentage of our daily life, as well as manufacturing and services 制造业服务业  are shifting from offline to online, making the whole society more and more efficient and convient. It's generally accepted that Internet access is as basic to innovation, economic growth, social communication, and the country’s competitiveness as electricity was a century ago. Given that, I approve the idea that government should offer a free internet access to all citizens.
To begin with, a free internet can help improve the living conditions of those who can not afford the costly internet fees. Those people, most of whom are the poorest in the society and live in rural areas where internet accesses are lacked, are cut off from most of the services and informations offfered online. Thus, their abilities to educate themselves on line or expand their selling network through e-commerce are deprived. Chances are, once free internet services are deployed to those areas, the poverty can be eliminated gradually.
Another crucial perspective is that the services provided by local cable companies, most of which are monopolies, are always too expensive and unevenly distributed. Due to the considerable expenditure on network infrastructure, the internet service markets are controled by only a few large local compaines, a common condition around world. And whenever monopoly takes place, the price raises to the ceiling. On the flip side, those profit-driven companies won't help people in rural or remote places to set up network equipments since the input outweighs the output in those areas. Therefore, it's the government's responsbility to help people nationwide to equally enjoy the bountiful fruits internet brings at a lower cost.
Yet the opponent may argue that since not all people use internet in the same way --some only surfs the internet occasionally while others might be obsessed with online videos or games, it seems a breach of fairness principle for the government to ingratiate itself with a bunch of people at the same cost for all taxpayers. However, as long as proper regulations such as limmiting the  amount of free access time are conducted, those negative impact can be diminished heavily.
In the light of the above, with proper regulation, I believe it is worthwhile to build a free internet that everybody, rich or underprivileged, can enjoy the benefits of internet access.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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题目 历史&文学 vs 科学&数学 哪个更重要？
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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题目：which do you prefer? an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun
Tips:
无聊的 bore dull drone  insipid demoralized apathetic
有趣 interesting fascinating fun intriguing exciting desirable lethargic
成就感 fulfilment accomplishment satisfaction achievement
工作 job career vocation profession niche

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For better or worse, we now live in a world where leisure time has been diminished drastically. Mankind in 21st century not only enjoys the bountiful fruits fast-paced life brought to us, but also suffers increasingly anxiety, stress, and pressure.感觉开头像是在论证反面 It's undeniable that a job with more vacation is the ideal job for a bunch of people, yet I still insist that the happiness, fulfilment, as well as higher life quality a challenging and interesting job brings are much more worth pursuing.
To begin with, the most distinct benefit of a career in which I can find challenge and fun is that I can reap happiness in most of my lifetime. Nowadays most of us need to work for no less than eight hours every workday, not counting compulsory or volunteered overtime works. It's hard to imagine how droning a person will be if he or she has to spend that much of his or her time in something boring.Take myself as an example, I used to work as a administration staff and enjoyed long leisure time after work. But I felt so dull during my work hours that even if I came home after work, I still fell depressed and lethargic. After much consideration, I decided to quit the job start a small business with a bunch of my friends. We had very little free time, but we all feel so grateful for doing something that ,we believe, will make the world a better place.
On the flip side, another crucial perspective is that the improvement in  vocational ability is the main source of one's satisfaction and accomplishment. It takes years of dedication to become an expert in a particular area. If you spent more time than others dealing with hard problems and situations, you will end up a more successful person in your niches. All too often we observe some young people , afraid of facing difficulties in their jobs , make no progress after working for several years. Chances are, when they grow older, they might feel regretful for wasting their best years, or fell shameful for not accomplishing anything. Thus, a busy and interesting job outweighs a boring but easy one.
Admittedly, jobs that occupies most of my time do have some negative sides, such as lesser time to spend with family members, fewer chances to do recreational activities, etc. Nevertheless, busier jobs always means higher profits, and higher profits indicates higher life quality. Imagine if I get paid a lot of money for my job, I can afford gorgeous beaches, exquisite cuisine and luxury hotel rooms during my vacation, short though.
In the light of the above, even though doing busy but exciting jobs means a sacrifice in your leisure time, I still believe it's a wiser choice to choose a job that can brings you happiness, fulfilment and higher life quality.

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For better or worse, we now live in a world where the exponential growth in human knowledge is forcing people to work harder in order to qualify a certain job. Mankind in 21st century not only enjoys the bountiful fruits of civilization, but also suffers increasingly anxiety, stress, and tension due to fewer and fewer leisure time after work. It's undeniable that a job with more vacation is the ideal one for a bunch of people, yet I still insist that the happiness, fulfilment, as well as higher life quality a challenging and interesting job brings are（用is还是are) much more worth pursuing.
To begin with, the most distinct benefit of a career in which I can find challenge and fun is that I can reap happiness in (这个in要不要) most of my time. Nowadays people need to work for no less than eight hours every workday, not counting enforced or volunteered overtime. It's hard to imagine how dull a person will be if he or she has to spend that much of his or her time in something boring. Take myself as an example, I used to work as an administration staff and enjoyed long leisure time after work. But I felt so demoralized during my work hours that even if I came back home after work, I still fell depressed and lethargic. After much consideration, I decided to quit the job,  start a small business with a bunch of my friends. We had very little free time, but we all feel so grateful for doing something that, we believe, will make the world a better place.
On the flip side, another crucial perspective is that the improvement in （用in还是of） vocational ability is the main source of personal satisfaction and accomplishment. It takes years of dedication to become an expert in a particular area. If you spent more time than others dealing with hard problems and situations, you will end up a more successful person in your field. All too often we observe some young people, afraid of facing difficulties in their jobs（这个插入语这样用可以吗）, make no progress after working for several years. Chances are, when they grow older, they might feel regretful for wasting their best years, or shameful for not accomplishing anything. Thus, a tense and desirable job outweighs a mean and petty one.
Admittedly, jobs that occupies a lot of time do have some negative sides, such as lesser time to spend with family members, fewer chances to do recreational activities, etc. Nevertheless, busier jobs always mean higher profits, and higher profits indicate higher life quality. With a well paid job, I can probably afford gorgeous beaches, exquisite cuisine and luxury hotel rooms during my vacation, short though, but enjoyful.
In the light of the above, even though a busy but exciting job means sacrifice in leisure time, I still believe it's a wiser choice to choose a job that can bring you happiness, fulfilment and higher life quality, rather than one that leads to regret for a plain life when middle-aged.

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The whole point of my answer is that it is better for universities to require students to specialize in one subject. It is just what the majors are called for, even though there are a couple of the advantages of students’ taking classes in many subjects.

It is a more sensible decision that universities require students to specialize in one subject. They must have known that the depth of a certain subject is infinite while both the students’ energy and time are limited. It probably tells the truth. Only when a student just specializes in one subject, can he focus on it. Thus it ensures the students more likely to be a kind of expert in some subject when they are given the degrees. That is just the purpose of so-called education.

It does not mean that students have not too many classes to attend even if they just specialize one subject. There are a lot of sub-subjects or divisions of a main subject. The science of journalism, for example, can include the theories of journalism, the histories of journalism both domestic and international, the news writing skills, the interview courses and the editorials writing and so on. The students have to study all of these above course as journalism major. It does mean a lot of work to do even if students just specialize one subject.

I do not deny there are a couple of advantages for universities to require students to take in many subjects. One thing, the work places require so-called generalist today. Students who take many subjects may probably mean the opportunity of meeting that request. Another is that students who take in many subjects can also help their main subject. Thus probably can help them study what they are majoring better. Whatever the benefit it will be, however, students taking any other subjects should not interfere their main target.

In the whole, I thought that universities could allow students to take subjects as many as possible if their times and energies were available. However, I think that possibility is faint. So I have to say that it is better for universities just to urge students to specialize in one subject. After all, the main subject is already a lot of work to cope with, considering the depth and width of one subject.

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题目
Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Throughout the course of human civilization, knowledge has long played an important role. For better or worse, we now living in a world where the exponential growth in human knowledge is forcing people to specialise  in their respective niches. It's undeniable that learning a wider range of subjects do have some merits, yet specializing in a particular subject appears a wiser choice.
To begin with, the most distinct benefit of focusing on one subject is that it allows you to save your time and energy in developing real expertise in one field. College is the place where students find their interest and start to specialize in one area. It takes years of dedicated effort to become an expert in a particular discipline. Irrelative courses would definitly diffuse their time and energy. All too often we observe some young students who have chosen so many courses in different areas, end up with a superficial  understanding for each of them. Focusing in one subject is vital to the students' academic success.
On the flip side, making it compulsory for every student to choose more than one subject will definitely increase the tuition fee , which, virtually, is considerably high already. Forcing students to learning more subjects indicates an increase in the cost of every single student as well as the university itself. It's hard to imagine how struggling those self-financed students or those from underprivileged families would be if they have to pay even more to finish their  college studies. Besides, more money from the taxpayers might need to be spent if the policy is applied, which will inevitablely stirs more complains about the government.
Admittedly, receiving an wider range of knowledge do help students broad their horizon and vision. However, there are several other approaches -reading books, attending lectures, or discussing with professionals-  that can equip students with better understanding about how the world is  running too. Chances are, if students are motivated by their self interest -other than being forced- to learn a different subject, the learning results will be better, just as the saying goes, "interest is the best teacher".
In the light of the above, besides minor merits, requiring students to learn more than one subject will not only increase the tuition fee, but also diffuse their time and energy. I believe it's more worthwhile for college  students to focus on one subject.

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003 Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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With the development of new technologies, food has become easier to prepare than ever before. In my opinion, it brings both positive and negative influences on people’s lives.中立

In the first place, food that is easier to prepare has an obvious advantage for new generations, who are leading their lives in a more rapid pace.【好处1】 Fast-food restaurants such as McDonald’s exactly cater to our needs for a faster life. 【例子】When I feel really hungry, traditional cooking is just too slowly. However, fast food can instantly improve my situation.【对比展开例子】 As we save a large quantity of time previously used to prepare food, we can spend our time performing more important tasks, and therefore focus better on our work.【总结】

However, easier-to-prepare food also brings about some disadvantages to our lives.【转折】

Firstly, as we save more time focusing on work instead of food, we tend to feel more and more stressed out due to the busy cycle. 【坏处1】Our already-too-fast life pace gets even speedier, which can bring about negative psychological problems in workers. 【展开】On the contrary, traditional cooking style enables us to see the relaxing side of life, to stop and smell the roses. Also, cooking itself is sometimes a relaxing process to relieve pressure from workplaces. 【对比】My mother loves to cook when she’s very tired after work, from which she can retrace the relaxation she needs.【生活例子】

Secondly, as food becomes easier to prepare, we gradually lose the right to enjoy top-class cooking.【坏处2】 Because it does not cater to people’s needs for speed as well as fast foods does, and thus gradually decreases on the market.【展开】 Many young people nowadays craze for Pizza Hut, but they have no idea how traditional home-made pizzas taste differently and wonderfully.【大众例子】

Another drawback of easy-to-prepare food is that in order to prepare food more easily, manufacturers add certain chemicals to the food which are not completely healthy for us. 【坏处3】For instance, McDonald’s contains too much calories and too little vegetation, which will cause unbalance in people’s nutrition.

To sum up, food has become easier to prepare during the past decade or so. The change has brought both positive and negative influences on people’s lives.

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With the advent of computer technology, especially the internet, more and more students choose to take their courses online for a brand-new learning experience. On the other hand, the traditional classroom learning seems to be facing more challenges. 【介绍背景】Is online education feasible? Yes. And probably good as well. Will classroom learning be displaced? I believe not.【用自问自答方式引出观点】

To be frank, online education provides fresh learning experience unheard of before. The most distinct benefit comes from a flexible schedule. 【A好处1】Students, especially adults with part-time jobs or even full-time jobs, take full advantage of this point. They are now free to choose any program that fits into their daily schedule. 【举students 和 adults的例子】Compared with the traditional idea of “going to school”, this is better illustrated as “the school is going to you”. 【对比】Another obvious advantage is the multi-media learning platform. 【A好处2】Computer technology promises vivid short plays, detailed lectures and even games designed for the course, all of which appeal to students a great deal.【展开陈述】

However, it is clear to me that online education has certain innate setbacks which render it unable to compete with the traditional classroom learning. 【但是A不好】Firstly, communication is very limited online. 【A坏处1】The opponent may argue chat-rooms are great tools. However, face-to-face communication can never be replaced, because it conveys information besides the words that form a sentence, but also intonations and body language. Facial expressions and gestures all facilitate understanding during a conversation. 【让步展开陈述】Suppose a student finds part of the lecture baffling, he can directly ask the professor in the classroom and probably they will communicate with the help of notes, pictures, blackboards and their body language. These tools are simply impossible to combine during an online course.【用if扩充陈述例子】

Yet another important downside of online education is that it has the potential of turning students into negative learners, because they do not and cannot participate in classroom activities.【A坏处2】 Since everyone is learning by his or her own on a computer, chances are slim that they can form real-life study groups, which in a traditional setting do projects and researches together. 【展开陈述】For example, if a student enrolls in an online drama class, it’s natural to play a part in the drama to gain in-depth perspectives on this topic. However, the student is unable to join the activity online, simply because it is not feasible. Gradually, the drama topic seems to be drifting away from the student because he is not actively involved in the learning process. A traditional classroom setting, on the other hand, provides a lot more opportunities for students to take an active role in the learning process.【举例子+对比陈述】

To sum up, online education is fascinating in some ways and does offer different learning experience. However, it cannot and should not replace traditional classroom learning, due to the lack of communication and participation. A classroom always remains the best place to learn.【总结观点：A这点好，但是因为A那点不好，所以B还是好】

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the ability of

adapting to new environment is more important than excellent knowledge

for job

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With more and more people involved in the competitive job hunting market, it becomes quite heated debated in recent years that the ability of adapting to new environment outweighs excellent knowledge for a job. In my opinion, adapting ability to a new working place comes first while a thorough understanding of a job should never be ignored.

I guess no one could deny the significance of knowledge to our career since it offers basic technique when dealing with specific issues. Nowadays dominating corporations like Google, Glencore and even ordinary companies are greatly focused on training new employees, based on the fact that most of them are not qualified for the relative knowledge for the position. According to the latest innovations in college curricula, more and more compulsory lessons, both theoretical and practical, are designed to equip graduates with sufficient knowledge for future jobs so as to satisfy the demand from companies. It seems certain that employees with enough knowledge will have a better chance to be favored by companies.

Admittedly, knowledge in relative fields does help people handle tough situations. However, reliance merely on knowledge appears not a wise choice because a good capability to adapt is of at least the same importance. Due to the noticeable breakthroughs in industry, teamwork becomes increasingly in need because of the common scene today that hundreds of people have to work together for the same project. Everyone has to make adjustments considering the project process and schedule of workmates. No wonder that people unable to make adaptations and find his role in a new environment will get replaced sooner or later.  

Furthermore, the ability to adapt to a new environment is more precious. It seems specious that a person without working knowledge will fail in his/her job. After all, these knowledge can be learned from books, sometimes the Internet more conveniently. On contrary, making oneself accepted, even welcomed, is such an ability that none can acquire easily. It helps people merge into a group, obtain useful knowledge and valuable experience from senior workers, and eventually these employees good at adapting become qualified for the position. It is a clear picture that a greenhand, with wide knowledge but narrow intelligence to communicate with others, will not do a good job in his career.

In a word, I agree that the ability to get oneself adapted to a new environment weighs more than the knowledge of job.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important characteristic for politics is to accept responsibility for mistake. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree?

Trivial mistakes such as take the wrong bus, forget keys can affect people in tiny issues, however, huge mistakes like developing the local economics at the cost of pollution in rivers and lakes can influence individuals' life considerably【程度副词】. Hence it is undeniable that politics should take responsibility for mistakes, However, I believe that it is more sensible to say that accepting responsibility for mistake is important character instead of most important one.【让步否定】

To begin with, when it comes to environmental issues, politics plays a significant role on the industry-building process as it establishes the standards of rules. If politicians are aware of the heavy pollution of the river caused by the pollutants such as heavy metals and chemical particles released by those factories, they may change the policy to call for protection and initiate strict legislation to regulate the acts of companies. The most typical example is the restriction of producing plastic bags. A myriad of companies in China have been fined because of violation of this rule. Apparently, taking responsibility for mistakes for politics is crucial as statesmen can make adjustments of the policies before which are too late to repair.

However, it doesn't follow that this character is the most important one. Of equal importance character is 【这么高级的写法】making right decisions in the first place. In many occasions, mistakes are forbidden, once occurred, the government must pay a heavy price. More specifically, taking the relationship between China and Japan for example, from thousands of years, the two countries undergo virtually fluctuations in their relationships. So the politics must pay great attention to deal with the folk conflicts. Imagine if the politics claimed something negatively about Japan, frictions are in the air, another serious diplomatic problem might be caused. Therefore, statesmen are supposed to make correct statements in any circumstance.

In a nutshell, I firmly believe that politics should be responsibility for mistakes. Meanwhile, it should consciously make right decisions at the first brush. Consequently, as for me, accepting responsibilities for mistakes are not the most important characteristic comparing to other equal important ones.这种让步否定的写法令人惊叹

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Throughout the course of development of human civilization,the ways to prepare food have been improving and enriching all the time, from boiling or grilling merely by fire in the wild , to using a range of electronic cooking machines such as microwave ovens in a modern kitchen. All those machines and techniques ,through what food preparing  becomes  faster and more convenient, make it possible for our human beings to spend more time in other productive or creative activities such as researching or manufacturing. That is to say, the simplification of cooking actually plays an important role in the development of human society. It improves the quality of our lives tremendously.

The most distinct benefit of the shortened cooking process is that it enfranchises human being from meeting basic needs, allowing us to spend more energy exploring the boundaries of our creativity and imagination. Thanks to modern cooking technology, not only can we spend more time working or studying, but we can also have more leisure time to enjoy the bountiful fruits of civilization. Imagine that if you have to kill an animal by hunting or start a fire by drilling woods, you might never have time to do anything other than keep yourself from starving.
Moreover,with the help of convenient cooking techniques, women used to be tied to the kitchen sink are emancipated and begin to show their impact on fields long been dominated by men.The social status, as well as live quality of women, therefore, has been largely improved.

Some people may argue that convenient food always sacrifice flavor and nutrition in order to save time, thus the enjoyment delicous food brought to us is vanished. However, they ignored the fact that food technology is developing rapidly. By improving our preservation techniques such as quick-frozen or dehydration, we are more capable at keeping the nutrition of the food while making them into convenient food. Can we do better in the future? My answer is yes.

In a word, modern food technology plays an important role in improving our life quality.The shorted cooking process reduces our time spend in the kitchen, especially for women, allowing us to work for longer hours as well as spend more time enjoying life. Even though some convenient foods are unhealthy or taste badly, but as long as the food technology keeps developing,the quality of convenient food will be improved in the future.