Essay topic:
Some universities require students to take courses in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thesis statement:
Students should be allowed to invloved in all kinds of subjects as it will provide an all-round education and better picture for their understanding in the future.
Middle paragraph 1 (adopt the PIE model to plan your middle paragraph)
Point: (state the main point in response to the essay topic)
Students should be required to attend courses enrolled in different fields to develop their professional skills and specific learning.
Information (examples): (describe the example(s) you plan to use as information to support the point)
Students who majored in applied science may take a literary course to learn linguistic technique and basic literary attainment.
Elaboration: (state the value principle you would refer to for elaborating the point and the information)
It is crucial to cultivate student’s ability through taking cross-discilinary learning and getting some knowledge and experience.