issue161 媒体类，G89互改队过目！

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161. In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any woman or man as a hero. The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.

The speaker asserts that any woman or man regarded as hero could scarcely pass the scrutiny of the media. According the common sense analogy, I can not agree with this allege totally.

First of all, media destroys the reputation of social heroes in some extent. For one thing, the media is after all based on a profile-oriented system and their first significant thing is to gain as much money as possible. The scene that one may sit behind the TV and acquire his or her idols’ pink news for a recreation after work or meal is quite prevalent in our daily life. And this pink news are often faked or magnified by the media. For the other thing, the media play as a window to be looked into the celebrity’s life. The ordinary people are doing the normal work and study while there hardly attain the news because of limitation in space and time. The mass are depending on the mainstream media and the media seize the audience’s feature and psychology to gain their profile. The feature may be derive from the human curiosity and gloat to some degree. It is natural that people could not content with just view and hear from their heroes merely about the brilliant facet but, as a human, the mistakes and false behavior are more attractive.

However, the media’s scrutiny is not so strict that no one can pass it with reputation remained. It is undeniable that there is some heroes bring their innocent reputation into the coffin. For example, Audrey Hepburn, the famous actress played in Rome holiday, distinguished herself from other craft brothers with moral and ethic quality. During her lifetime, she was never related to any negative news and devoted herself to high-minded undertaking. Praise walk along with her during her entire star path. Otherwise, even if the hero has undergone a public blame, it does not mean that fame will eventually come to a downfall. Bill Clinton, the most intelligent leader in USA, involved into a sex scandal with his secretary. During the scrutiny, he lied to the public and this is unforgivable then impeach remove his position. When we open the document or record about this president, content about this scandal only takes a short length; on the contrary, more emphasis is placed on the achievement on the economic incline and deficit elimination. Heroes are after all human beings and making mistake is human’s nature. People could understand this and evaluate heroes from both the bright and shadow sides.

In addition, media not only destroy the reputation but also set up models and paragons for some optimistic effect. First, media reflect the social taste and value, therefore, it select the individuals to burden the responsibility to orient the mass value and moral standard. For instance, in China, Lei Feng, a paragon was recognized for his dedication to the four modernizations program devised by the government of the time. Media depicted Lei Feng’s anecdotes to make him perfection. Take consideration of this situation, I find media’s another function which is opposite with devastating the fame. This function may be called encouraging. As human nature, no one could regardless of a praise and recognition, instead, reputation is one of the things people are engaged seeking. Media performs as the judge of celerity’s reputation and often serves as tool to orient the commonalties’ ideology.

In sum, media often can be regarded as a mirror which reflects the person’s merit. However sometimes, this mirror distorts the feature and sometimes magnifies it. The hero’s reputation will affected by it in some degree far from diminishing. Because of the function to evaluate people’s value, media could lead the enthusiasm for fame.

部分同意
A，媒体在毁掉英雄的声誉
1，人们通过媒体了解英雄，人们相信主流媒体的可信度
2，人们对那些负面消息格外感兴趣。
3，有些媒体处于盈利的目的，故意发掘一些负面新闻，迎合大众需要。

B,并不是所有的英雄都不能通过媒体的审查
1，很多名人确实一生没有污点，不论媒体如何关注。
2，就算有污点的名人，人们可以接受英雄的缺点，我们知道他们也是人，也会犯错误。一分为2的看。

C,媒体对于英雄的报道，还具有积极的影响。
1，它在向一面镜子，虽然有时扭曲，歪解。但是最终还是将公正的评价公告大众。它在毁掉英雄的同时给人们树立英雄。比如中国的雷锋，炸碉堡的董存瑞，焦裕禄等等，他们的树立也是出于一种需要。因为社会需要这种人。我们就挖掘这种例子，并加入一些非人性化的东西，把他们神话。

2，正是由于媒体对于名声的作用，很多人在追求这种名声而成为了英雄。对于英雄的涌现，社会风气的都有利

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-8-3 at 00:08 ]

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The speaker asserts that any woman or man regarded as hero could scarcely pass the scrutiny of the media. According(to) the common sense analogy?, I can not agree with this allege totally.

First of all, media destroys the reputation of social heroes in some extent. For one thing, the media is after all based on a profile-oriented system and their first significant thing is to gain as much money as possible. The scene that one may sit behind the(in front of ) TV and acquire his or her idols’ pink news for a recreation after work or meal is quite prevalent in our daily life. And this pink news are often faked or magnified by the media. For the other thing, the media play as a window to be looked into the celebrity’s life. The ordinary people are doing the normal work and study while there hardly attain the news because of limitation in space and time. The mass are depending on the mainstream media and the media seize the audience’s feature and psychology to gain their profile. The feature may be derive from the human curiosity and gloat to some degree. It is natural that people could not content with just view and hear from their heroes merely about the brilliant facet but, as a human, the mistakes and false behavior are more attractive.例子的语句组织的不是很好，可能跟限时有关

However, the media’s scrutiny is not so strict that no one can pass it with(without晕阿，看了半天没看懂，多亏有提纲) reputation remained. It is undeniable that there is some heroes bring their innocent reputation into the coffin. For example, Audrey Hepburn, the famous actress played in Rome holiday, distinguished herself from other craft brothers with moral and ethic quality. During her lifetime, she was never related to any negative news and devoted herself to high-minded undertaking. Praise walk along with her during her entire star path. Otherwise, even if the hero has undergone a public blame, it does not mean that fame will eventually come to a downfall. Bill Clinton, the most intelligent leader in USA, involved into a sex scandal with his secretary. During the scrutiny, he lied to the public and this is unforgivable then (impeach remove) his position. When we open the document or record about this president, content about this scandal only takes a short length; on the contrary, more emphasis is placed on the achievement on the economic incline and deficit elimination. Heroes are after all human beings and making mistake is human’s nature. People could understand this and evaluate heroes from both the bright and shadow sides

In addition, media not only destroy the reputation but also set up models and paragons for some optimistic effect. First, media reflect the social taste and value, therefore, it select the individuals to burden the responsibility to orient the mass value and moral standard. For instance, in China, Lei Feng, a paragon was recognized for his dedication to the four modernizations program devised by the government of the time. Media depicted Lei Feng’s anecdotes to make him perfection. Take consideration of this situation, I find media’s another function which is opposite with devastating the fame. This function may be called encouraging. As human nature, no one could regardless of a praise and recognition, instead, reputation is one of the things people are engaged seeking. Media performs as the judge of celerity’s reputation and often serves as tool to orient the commonalties’ ideology.

In sum, media often can be regarded as a mirror which reflects the person’s merit. However sometimes, this mirror distorts the feature and sometimes magnifies it. The hero’s reputation will (be)affected by it in some degree far from diminishing. Because of the function to evaluate people’s value, media could lead the enthusiasm for fame.

思路不错，语言不好，建议多改改，时间还有，继续努力，加油:victory::)

[ Last edited by ryanq on 2005-8-2 at 21:37 ]

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多谢批改。愁死我了，时间短了，但是还不行。质量降低了。哭啊！！