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All students should take the basic science courses even if the students’ field of study does not include these courses?－－－－－－教育V专业课类

According to the speaker, it is widely said that the basic courses should be taken by all the students, even if the students' fields do not include these courses. In my opinion, I basically agree with it. As a result, the basic science does assist the advancements of students' ability, but not all of students should be taught the same basic courses.
Admittedly, It is disputable that some basic courses offer great help to students. these courses provide an opportunity to students to contact those fields which they are interested in but just hear about, like basic computer course provides basic skills of computer operation which is demanded in most companies. But the students lived in the poverty areas never access computers. Also, some courses educate social basic skills, broaden political horizon, and so on. Such as psychology, the one which includes the way to solve interpersonal problems and adapt new environments which are indispensable in the future jobs. Learning psychology also help students to relieve the course pressure and deal with the relationship between roommates.

However, it is not to say that all of students should take the same course. Because some students obtain little benefits from some basic course. As artistic students learning math waste their time and energy. Basic knowledge of math which had been taught in high the schools is enough for them. To P.E. students, I think chemistry is useless, for they will never use it in future and basic chemical theory also be taught in the high school. So taken the appropriate courses is the prerequisite of effective study.
Furthermore, Universities may set some subjects according to students’ requirement; students can choose curriculums what they want to learn. Students who have the options to choose courses which they are interested in; and would spend more attention on them than on those compulsory courses. Also, it is true that every academic field has intersects and penetrate each other. It is no doubts that many scientists got inspirations form other fields which were not their major. Thus, I hold that students also could get inspirations from the courses which they are instructed.
In sum, Taking basic courses could increase students development, and taking the courses which they are willing to learn is not only obtaining benefice but also obtaining what they have not expected.     

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All students should take the basic science courses even if the students’ field of study does not include these courses?－－－－－－教育V专业课类


According to the speaker, it is widely said that the basic courses should be taken by all the students, even if the students' fields do not include these courses. In my opinion, I basically agree with it. As a result, the basic science does assist the advancements of students' ability, but not all of students should be taught the same basic courses.


Admittedly, It is disputable that some basic courses offer great help to students. these courses provide an opportunity to students to contact those fields which they are interested in but just hear about, like basic computer course provides basic skills of computer operation which is demanded in most companies. But the students lived in the poverty areas never access computers. Also, some courses educate social basic skills, broaden political horizon, and so on. Such as psychology, the one which includes the way to solve interpersonal problems and adapt new environments which are indispensable in the future jobs. Learning psychology also help students to relieve the course pressure and deal with the relationship between roommates. (前面是不同意，后面是同意，冲突了。)证|TOEFLEH-] \_!u @


However, it is not to say that all of students should take the same course. Because some students obtain little benefits from some basic course. As artistic students learning math waste their time and energy. Basic knowledge of math which had been taught in high the schools is enough for them. To P.E. students, I think chemistry is useless, for they will never use it in future and basic chemical theory also be taught in the high school. So taken the appropriate courses is the prerequisite of effective study.-


Furthermore, Universities may set some subjects according to students’ requirement; students can choose curriculums what they want to learn. Students who have the options to choose courses which（that） they are interested in; and would spend more attention on them than on those compulsory courses. Also, it is true that every academic field has intersects and penetrate each other. It is no doubts that many scientists got inspirations form other fields which（that）were not their major. Thus, I hold( the opinion) that students also could get inspirations from the courses which they are instructed.(前半段提出自己的观点，可以理解成负观点，但是好像有点离题，后半段又是正观点，好像全段不统一。)
Y/x[1]EA+g!f2iIn sum, Taking basic courses could increase students development, and taking the courses which they are willing to learn is not only obtaining benefice but also obtaining what they have not expected.

每段开头要写主题句。
第一印象是观点阐述不明确，每段的观点应该一致。