备考日记-即使遍体鳞伤我也会爬着走完这条路！

xiemeng2370UID：2749773

刚才跟jinziqi聊了好久~在寄托的好处就是能找到温暖~
这也是ziqi的原话~
有种孤舟终于靠岸了的感觉~
再也不是那会儿早上一个人去图书馆~晚上一个人抹黑爬上床的日子了~
我想有了大家的鼓励~我一定能成功的！
不过~今天的任务还是没有完成~就改了3篇作文= =|
明天又是三十儿~传统节日还是要过的~哎~好纠结啊~

xiemeng2370UID：2749773

18# Bela1229
呵呵~同乐同乐~不算早年了吧~已然三十儿了~
刚改完一篇作文~还是66大人指点的呢~
每看一遍你们帮我改的~都感觉进步了一大块~
可是一到模考又都忘了= =|
希望今儿下午的模考不会再有这种感觉了。。。。。。

spoonwuUID：2760908

楼主加油~~支持~~我也是很痛苦地做着~大家共勉吧~

charlesAFAUID：2750393

也是，还有13天
共勉

irvine666UID：2575525

恩，大过年的，偶要批6篇文章...也没闲着。
一起加油吧

jinziqiUID：2387034

哈 下午模考↖(^ω^)↗
春节快乐！

xiemeng2370UID：2749773

刚刚模考完~巨大的挫败感又来了= =
issue554个字，argument436个字~
字数貌似还是没什么大问题~
可是关键就是这错误啊~
我在word里只是简单的把红线绿线去掉加起来就有快50个错了= =|
崩溃了~这是为什么~还有10天~
我唯一的期望就是到时候我能没错字~当然还有语法错误！

xiemeng2370UID：2749773

今天改了3篇issue~还模考了一次~虽然没完成目标（过argu提纲）
不过也算还可以了~现在眼睛都涩涩的了~决定休息一下下~
陪父母好好看看晚会~毕竟大年初一嘛~
这是今儿模考的~
TOPIC: ISSUE70 - "In any profession-business, politics, education, government-those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership."
WORDS: 552          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2010-2-14 13:54:50
开头：企业成功应该靠领导自身不断提升，而不是更换
主一：换领导的好处：1带来新想法 2 防止贪污腐败
主二：但是现任领导有丰富且宝贵的经验，是新领导没有的 ：1商业 2：教育 3：政府
主三：虽然创新很重要，但是现任领导也可以通过学习新技术来跟上时代的变化
结尾：如果现任领导能够不断学习并保持廉洁，那么将会带领企业走向成功

Our society now is so complicated and new that almost no one could tightly keep up with contemporary trend. However, we cannot beg the pivotal importance of experiences which could avoid many mistakes when making decision, no matter in which area such as business, politics, education and government. Therefore, the path to success for any enterprise is not only revitalization through new leadership, but could also improve the leaders’ ability and moral standard.

Fundamentally, we should notice the purpose of revitalization, which may lies in two core reasons. First, infuse fresh blood and bring novel idea to enterprise in order to improve their enterprise and lead them to succeed. For example, the new president of Google launched a new work to every employee that they should pursue their own interested work at least one day every week. This new and invented (inventive/innovative) measure (strategy/policy) brings many new service items such as "Google News" for Google, and then significantly increased their monthly visitors. Thus, we cannot deny the important role of invention in any enterprise. Secondly, revitalization could avoid some corruption for enterprise. Because many public officials and shareholders who have bribery behaviors are nearly upstanding at first, unfortunately, with time passed, the temptation of money and power throw them into the abyss of corruption. Thus, if we could renew leadership before the behavior of bribery, enterprise would keep a clean and well-being circumstance.

However, even though revitalization could bring some merits to an enterprise, the damage maybe overwhelming the advantages sometimes, especially in business, education and government. For instance, the business sea is so deep and broad that if one had little experience would lose gravely, let alone to lead a whole company to succeed. Any decision which the leader made would greatly influence the future of that company. So, without affluent experiences to deeply understand the principle of business, the enterprise may bankrupt by only one decision which launched by their new leadership. On the other hand, common sense informs me that education is so important that they teach our society's hope and future-children. The leadership, of cause the president of a school, control and operate that school. The idea, standard and avenue of how to effectively teach students are based on myriad of teaching experiences. Thus, the little experience of new leadership may undermine the efficiency and effect of their educational system. Government is similar to business and education. Any event in our society is complicated and interacted with each other, any respect of decision and law by government may affect other respects and even other countries. So, without glut of experiences to clear what our government should and must does, our society may disordered by the new leadership's novel idea. In short, the importance of working experience is also pivotal, and may a little more vital to some degree.

While it would be tempting to concede that the invention is important to an enterprise, but who says current leaders cannot think out any novel idea to make their company improve and even succeed? Obviously, no one could firmly say that unreasonable sense. Moreover, the new invention and decision must be based on a plethora of experiences and skills, but not daydream which too perfect to come true. The current leadership exactly has adequate experiences and as long as they continue to learn new technology and keep their candid ethic, they would keep with current trend and lead their enterprise to succeed.

In conclusion, the speaker's threshold claim is unwarranted for the reason that he or she omits the importance of experience. If current leadership would combine their experience and new technology, their enterprise would much easier to success than renew their leadership after five years.

123runfordreamUID：2697608

加油加油！我来打气+要鼓励的！
呜呜~

xiemeng2370UID：2749773

26# 123runfordream
嗯嗯嗯~我们一起努力吧~
刚起床= =|现在开始吧~今天过argu题库+模考~啦啦啦~

123runfordreamUID：2697608

嗯 奋战的一天！

紫陌纤尘o0UID：2745492

路过来凑个热闹~

xiemeng2370UID：2749773

29# 紫陌纤尘o0
哎~晃悠到现在啥也没干么= =
难不成你也刚起~

紫陌纤尘o0UID：2745492

30# xiemeng2370 我必然不是啦，都说了给你改作文的嘛

xiemeng2370UID：2749773

在漫天的烟花下我许下了10天后一切顺利的愿望~
希望这个愿望能成真~不不不~是一定要成真！
不过话说花火这玩意儿真是个奢侈品~转瞬即逝~
这不是跟我们的青春一样么~稍不留神就昂首阔步的踏在了奔三的道路上~
我不能让自己在这条道路上留下任何遗憾~更不能左顾右盼~
一直向前向前~向前奔跑吧~其实好像也不是那么困难的事情~
PS：刚才游完泳才重新找回做人的感觉= =|
       说的有点夸张哈~不过起码让我觉得我的生命里不光只有AW了~
       今天就这样吧~虽然制定计划还是没能完成~但是我要休息~休息一下了~